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[Shiv-Gauri] The Oldest Story... - 3 (END -p. 134) (Page 76)

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Posted: 03 February 2011 at 4:59pm | IP Logged
EK RAAT part 3
"I want morning and noon and nightfall with you. I want your tears, your smiles, your kisses...the smell of your hair, the taste of your skin, the touch of your breath on my face. I want to see you in the final hour of my life...to lie in your arms as I take my last breath."

The reunion of two souls and this dramatic only Devi can portrait.  You didn't made it easy for Shiv, he didn't give up.  Sometimes the taste of loosing someone makes them pursue more.  Thanks to Shanki and the Midol.

Also what you see from your own naked eyes is not always the truth.

PS:  Devi...I've lost all the praises words for you, but with you my unspoken word will help you. Big smile


Edited by Newdime - 03 February 2011 at 5:47pm

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Posted: 03 February 2011 at 6:49pm | IP Logged
All I can do is BlushingBlushingBlushing(just in case you all r not aware of what the emoticon is - BLUSH)
 
The BlushingblushingBlushing is strictly for Part 4 of Ek Raat. 
 
 


Edited by Water. - 03 February 2011 at 6:50pm

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Posted: 03 February 2011 at 6:54pm | IP Logged
Thank You Devi! Finally They confessed!
I loved it!
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Posted: 03 February 2011 at 7:03pm | IP Logged
Oh My God! Oh My God!
I come back from work and i find 3 updates
and not just any updates but the big confession!!
my head is spinning and my heart is pounding..lol
I'm sitting here doing the happy dance coz Shiv and Gauri finally confessed!!
Devi you are a genius with words!! I absolutely love your work!! Please please please never end this FF Wink

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Posted: 03 February 2011 at 7:06pm | IP Logged
Devi girl you sure are on a roll.....has the snow storm inspired you to write? Then may I hope that the snow storm continues for another couple of days.

You know I was thinking, your next FF should be a regency romance........

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Posted: 03 February 2011 at 7:09pm | IP Logged
love your fanfic... 
i especially love chapter 98 :D
can't wait for more :D
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Posted: 03 February 2011 at 7:13pm | IP Logged
I havent read it yet, but I really want to considering there is an age restriction.. ;) lol..
too bad I'm in class! I really hope there rn't any desi guys behind me :|
I need to get home asap!


This was me after reading the update Big smileEmbarrassed

and since they forgot to put music on Wink ...( this mite be a little cheesy for them..but who cares :D)





Edited by arabianpaki - 03 February 2011 at 9:27pm
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Posted: 03 February 2011 at 7:36pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Newdime

EK RAAT part 3
"I want morning and noon and nightfall with you. I want your tears, your smiles, your kisses...the smell of your hair, the taste of your skin, the touch of your breath on my face. I want to see you in the final hour of my life...to lie in your arms as I take my last breath."



Lisa Kleypes?? Have you read any of her books?

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