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[Shiv-Gauri] The Oldest Story... - 3 (END -p. 134) (Page 74)

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Posted: 03 February 2011 at 12:13pm | IP Logged
Loved...both the updates...
Just amazingly brilliant...
Hugs n kisses....
 
 

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Posted: 03 February 2011 at 12:20pm | IP Logged
Fantastic Update!!! Shiv's mother's comments are so impacting that I to read it twice to remember what was written in the update above.. I am laughing my head off sitting in the office... Very nicely written... Clap
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Posted: 03 February 2011 at 12:35pm | IP Logged
OMG WAS IT REAL!!!
N DID THEY JUST CONFESSED!!!Day Dreaming
WOW!!DEVI IT WAS AWESOME!!!!
AND BY THE WAY SHIV IS A PURE SEX GOD!!!
HIS WORDS ARE ENOUGH TO MAKE YOU FEEL AROUSEDEmbarrassed
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Posted: 03 February 2011 at 12:44pm | IP Logged
Devi u hv got a very very n very unique sence of humour, to bring out laughter out of a sensual update, its only u who is blessd wit ths talent. M so very thankful to u 4 bringin out such a beautiful naughty passionate yet funny update so soon.

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Posted: 03 February 2011 at 1:46pm | IP Logged
Devi Habibti, your awesome! "ek raat"loved all the parts ...how do you do it girl!

Second...DancingBalle balle!!! ..it was amazing! I was reading it slowly, and smiling, blushing, I'm sure these guys in front of me think I'm a freak. Last time, I wanted to comment on why Gauri wasn't saying anything, despite knowing everything that nite Shiv came home drunk, and when I came back I saw this update!!! I loved " Again" "say it again" and then "words Baby..words" YAY!!!

And where did mommy Kapoor come from...when I (or Gauri/Shiv) least expect it..? Poor them Embarrassed




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Posted: 03 February 2011 at 2:45pm | IP Logged
Awesome update
It was both sweet and hilarious.

Gauri's confession was fabulous. Shiv didnot tell G d main reason for not touching her.

Shiv's mom is so funny. She cracked me up. Like G she also has a smart mouth.

Pls continue soon
P.S. Can we've a 21+ part for SG? D nightgown shouldn't b wasted.
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wow two updates... wow wo .. they confessed ....... fool shiv....  y his hot wife need to tell.. .. she  rocks... luv it.. .. luv you devi... . ..

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