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[Shiv-Gauri] The Oldest Story... - 3 (END -p. 134) (Page 73)

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I found myself holding my breath while reading.   The update was simply brilliant.

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My apologies for not commenting on 2 previous updates. I wasn't well.

Chapter 95

Shaan & Gauri's convo was very sweet. I specially liked d lines abt Thalia.

Chapter 96

I guess it was expected that Shiv would somehow witness d scene and misunderstand it. But my hopes of reconciliation were high.

If I would've been in Gauri's situation I would've thrown ice-cold water on d moron who dared 2 sleep or pretend so while I've plans 2 seduce him.

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Chapter 97

I feel sorry for both of them. Shiv doesn't know that Gauri luvs him so he feels insecure.
Gauri on d other side is hurt by Shiv's behaviour.
I have a question. Y does SG think so lowly abt each other? Shiv thinks that G wants 2 b united wid Shaan but still likes 2 have sex wid him. I know he said that in a fit of rage but his doubt abt G actually proves that he meant it.

Pls continue soon

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they confessed.......awwwwww

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Yay! They finally talked!!!!!  Ooh, and even said those three wonderfully magic words!  ....and then came Mom.  Why was I not surprised?  Oh well, I think they'll pick up where they left off...

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I am so glad I was busy enough to miss the last update and read both the last parts together!! I would have gone mad!! Well I have still gone mad!! Madly in love with this story!! And this couple!! They are a mad couple!! Now I am sounding mad! I think Jazzy should go to sleep...I'll dream all this madness tonight!! Happy dreams here I come!!

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