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[Shiv-Gauri] The Oldest Story... - 3 (END -p. 134) (Page 71)

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Posted: 03 February 2011 at 6:39am | IP Logged
wow ur killing poor shiv

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The flame of anger, bright and brief, sharpens the barb of love.

The truth shall make you free Shiv, but first it shall make you angry.  But don't let it go.




Edited by Newdime - 03 February 2011 at 6:45am

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can we please pretty please with a cherry on top get gauri to confess she isnt in love with anyone but shiv ur killing me here
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@Saomom..."Guy of Gisborne"  Yes it was a Candy to my sweet tooth but, I hated him when he pushed the blade in Marian's body with out haste.  Over all it is WOW.

Yes indeed the Kiss was the kiss.  The tiny gestures, emotions that I came thru the entire show was remarkable.  The only problem for me was, the British accent that I can't grasp right a way.  Was not born in English world hence I struggle in that field. Unhappy

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Simply speechless, d outcome was so natural. Both are burning in same fire. I held my breath while readin of mental n physical torture gauri was goin through, i cnt hold shiv as d cause of it completly b'coz he's also fightin wit his inner male ego to not let d lady love whose carryin hs child to go away, actualy he's scard to loose her, n in ths whole process atlast he confessd hs love, hope she registrs hs words of love out of agony.
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I simply loved it Devi. Finally Shiv confessed. I feel so sorry for him, thinking that she hates him. I guess both are suffering equally.

So, is this night over or is there more to come?

P.S Thank you for updating so fast.
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Posted: 03 February 2011 at 8:24am | IP Logged
I found myself holding my breath while reading.   The update was simply brilliant.

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