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[Shiv-Gauri] The Oldest Story... - 3 (END -p. 134) (Page 61)

bluerose1889 Goldie

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Posted: 31 January 2011 at 8:16pm | IP Logged
That was hot!
I have to give it to Aarya. That man has a huge amount of self-control.
Nirosha's paying for torturing him with that dance. I loved the last line.

"Please... please have mercy on me Rosh…"

Poor guy! But I think it's sweet that he wants to wait before they take the next step.
Another awesome update devi!

chubzy IF-Dazzler

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Posts: 3422

Posted: 31 January 2011 at 9:34pm | IP Logged
I thought nayana is bolder while teasin vicky but rosh not equaly but bold when it comes to torture aarya, poor guy was in such a horrible plight, but i love d part where he was pleadin her to hv mercy.
jazzerette IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 01 February 2011 at 12:50am | IP Logged
Hawt!! I can't even go drink cold water....I have tonsils already!! Poor Aarya!! 

Rename Shiv and Gauri's house as Prop-house!! They can let it out on lease for couples who would like to enjoy clandestine romances or are having secrets affairs!! They could probably advertise like this:

Aiye aiye!! Agar karna hai girlfriend se pyaar aur nahi chahte interuption bekaar!! Saare plans ho jayen flop and you are in need of a prop!! Then this the place for you!! Ek baar aao...and apni bandi ko hamesha ke liye apni bahon mein paao!!!
Warning: This house has however certain aversion to clothes. Please carry spare because you may enter fully clothed...but will leave only in shreds!!


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--Magnificent-- IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 01 February 2011 at 2:28am | IP Logged
Wowee Devi that HOT or is that HAWT ....Big wondering who that person wa who came to sit there for a while ...if only that person had known becoz of him / her we got such a treat ....LOL
spvd IF-Addictz

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Posted: 01 February 2011 at 4:05am | IP Logged
that was hot........................
cont soon................some Shiv Gauri moments like this plz...................
richiiiii Goldie

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Posted: 01 February 2011 at 4:59am | IP Logged
gosh it was steaming hot!!!
loved it....
sridevi27 Goldie

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Posted: 01 February 2011 at 4:59am | IP Logged

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bushrayou Goldie

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Posted: 01 February 2011 at 5:25am | IP Logged
i think i am in love with him...damn rosh really needs to show some love back! lol! i am losing things to say every time you update because it just keeps getting better and i dont think words are even needed anymore..... your writing gives me happy butterflies in my stomach!

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