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[Shiv-Gauri] The Oldest Story... - 3 (END -p. 134) (Page 52)

diotima Groupbie

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Posted: 29 January 2011 at 8:54am | IP Logged
I am loving this pair....everything about them seems so soft...just like the light pink shade of her outfit...Embarrassed

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Newdime IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 29 January 2011 at 9:02am | IP Logged
Ishq aisa karo ki dhadkan mein bas jaye...
Love in a way that it makes home in your heartbeats...

Saans bhi lo to khushbu usi ki aaye...
When you breath, her aroma should feel your sense...

Pyar ka nasha aankho pe chaye..
The love should be drugged in your eyes in such way..

Baat koi bhi ho par naam usi ka aaye.
Whatever the talk maybe, the name must be there.

PS:-  I tried my best to translate and give the justice to the original words.

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kellz Goldie

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Posted: 29 January 2011 at 9:47am | IP Logged
my my he is bold lolz
Lip-a-Licious IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 29 January 2011 at 9:50am | IP Logged

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-Aicha- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 29 January 2011 at 10:11am | IP Logged
Devi! That was such a cute and sweet update :D I loved it <3

And I'm sorry about the update update thing :/ I do that all the time..and I don't mean it in a stressyy and pissed off way or anything..
As others have already said, I really appreciate all the updates because other writes update every 2 weeks or even once a month, this is heaven :D Thank you for that!

P.S - If you don't mind me asking, when is your birthday? :)
Newdime IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 29 January 2011 at 10:26am | IP Logged
Originally posted by saomom

Originally posted by Newdime

28th?  That's an accomplishment.  Many Happy return of the day.

Now Devi someone deserve a treat...along with the GuestWink

Thank you!  I'm guessing I've been married longer than you've been alive.  <sigh>

No not really...may be I have been alive way more then you were married.  No need to sigh..I'm sure you must have all sort of colours, flavours, seasons to cherish and grow more with the experience that your 28 yrs must given it to you and you can pass on to the generation behind you. 

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Newdime IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 29 January 2011 at 10:34am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sridevi27

Hello lovelies,
   You know I adore you all and appreciate all your readership and comments, but please dears, there is nothing more disheartening than writing four pages for an update to post it only to have the comments ask for just another update without commenting on what was just posted or to ask to write about another couple when the story is really not there yet...  Not meant as a criticism, but some of you are writers, so you know what I am talking about... 

   I can write about Shiv and Gauri's heart-to-heart tomorrow and wrap it up, but the story will probably end the day after then...  

  I apologize if I sound irate, but I did this update at 3:30 in the morning and... well, you can see where there is a tiny frustration factor...


I never meant to be a trouble maker...but Allah knows why they call me trouble, a double trouble...I wonder?  How about we start over again...Kit Kat chaley ga?  Ya phir Twix? Woh bhi nahi?  Then?  Aaah I know Five Star..Dairy Milk...oooh C'com Maan bhi Jao..Gems should work...?  Yes it will I know.Wink

Edited by Newdime - 29 January 2011 at 10:34am

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MaankiMariam Senior Member

Joined: 05 April 2010
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Posted: 29 January 2011 at 10:49am | IP Logged
great update...only u have the knack to make all your couples lovable and make us crave for an update about each one Hug xxx

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