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[Shiv-Gauri] The Oldest Story... - 3 (END -p. 134) (Page 15)

blueangel1308 Senior Member

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Posted: 19 January 2011 at 3:59pm | IP Logged
Wow Devi,

Cool, can't wait to read more about dhruv and neela.

The brief moment where she closed her eyes and the confusion when she opened them, and the suspended moment between them before they parted ways..... I could feel all of it so vividly....


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saomom IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 19 January 2011 at 4:04pm | IP Logged
And she's back!!!!!  Thanks for the update Devi!  A new couple, huh.  Well, well.  This should get interesting...  Thanks for coming back to check on us mice aka "Devi Does". Wink
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Posted: 19 January 2011 at 4:10pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sridevi27

Exactly my thoughts!!   I really thought this drama was very well done.  Particularly because after episodes 4-6, I was thinking that there is no way in hell that they could turn Kawee's character around.   But amazingly enough, after ep. 10, I was a basket-case!!

I need you to recommend another one.  I took a chance last night on one and it was too 'nice'. barf. I mean OTT sugar.  I wanted to poke my eyes out.  Apparently my 'heroes' need to have a touch of bad in them.  At the very least, arrogance and a whole lot of pride.  The one with Yaya was 'cute' and so it was easy to watch.  Last night's was just weird.  So any suggestions?  I'm learning to live on 3-4 hours sleep a night.LOL

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Tishuu Goldie

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Posted: 19 January 2011 at 4:10pm | IP Logged
Thank gooodness - I was thinking I would have to send a search party to get hold of u LOL
But thank gooodness I didnt have to do that............- wouldve been pathetic at it anyway LOL
Ooooooo a new luv story eh....well technically not new - but you've began exploring them - or should i say u caught them exploring each other otherwise who knws what they could be upto - since u were busy with senna+rathan and shiv+gauri - they thought they had it easy.............well Devi is on their case now
hahahahaha (I think not having an update from you for the past few days - no wait...................erm.......yhhh past few TOO MANY days has done something to me)
I'm gna go see a specialist in  this matter - ..............erm.....that is if i knw what the matter is.....
I'll be back soon - hopefully to comment on yet another update Smile
blueangel1308 Senior Member

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Posted: 19 January 2011 at 4:27pm | IP Logged

             have you checked out the 2nd larkon which i recommended, badarn jai ? its the same hero as jam leuy rak, and its definitely not a "sweet" drama. i actually liked this one because in this one we actually have a proactive heroine, one who does something other than just stand firm in her beliefs, this one actually takes action to make the hero "see"......


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diotima Groupbie

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Posted: 19 January 2011 at 5:59pm | IP Logged
yaaayy update!!! totally worth the wait LOL
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Cytherea IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 19 January 2011 at 6:20pm | IP Logged
heyy..i've been checking every few hours to see if you updated..awesome part..i always knew something wld happen between dhruv and neela..that was brilliant..can't wait for more

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