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[Shiv-Gauri] The Oldest Story... - 3 (END -p. 134) (Page 126)

YusLiz Senior Member

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Posted: 25 March 2011 at 3:19am | IP Logged
Devi you are the Bestest!!! it was a long wait but well worth it!
it's always sad when one of you FF comes to an end but you made sure another is in the works so we all don't have major withdrawal from your superb storytelling gift.
thank you thank you thank you!

--Magnificent-- IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 25 March 2011 at 4:34am | IP Logged
Wow dear ..Smile i was real surprised to see this in my inbox and loved the fact that u wrote on shiv gauri ...i dunno what it is but just cant get enuff of them .....or Maaneet for that matter ....thanks dear that was truly a wonderful and emotional update ....real touched to see Shiv keep all those memories ....* sniff* *sniff* ...brings a lump to ur throat ....
spvd IF-Addictz

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Posted: 25 March 2011 at 7:10am | IP Logged
part 113
i didnt read till now....................nice part..................
spvd IF-Addictz

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Posted: 25 March 2011 at 7:22am | IP Logged
part 114
wow very lovely......................awesome.......................
FaithnFate IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 25 March 2011 at 4:25pm | IP Logged

Teri yaadein, mulakaatein, wo raatein aur baatein
Teri saansein, wo baahein, ab mujhko yaad aaye
Tere bina mera jiya, sataayein kyun piya
Yaadon ne teri mujhpe, ye jaadu kiya re
Teri saansein, wo baahein, ab mujhko yaad aaye
Wo adaaon ki ghatayen, mere dil ko chhu jaayen
Pyari hai duniya saari, maine hai tujhpe waari
Dil mein, mere dil ne tujhse, yaari ki baazi hari

Tere khayalon mein, khayalon mein…
Bas tum meri nigaahon mein, nigaahon mein…
Bas tum wapas aa jao, mere paas, tum sadaa, wapas aa jao
Mere paas, tum sadaa… suna mera jahan, bhoola main hu kahan
Jaane hai jaane jaan, tera rahoon, Piya…(piyaa)…
Wapas aa jao, mere paas, tum sadaa, wapas aa jao
Mere paas, tum sadaa… piya tera jiya… (piya tera jiya)
Piya tera jiya… (piya tera jiya)… tu hai kahan
Tera karuun intezaar, tu mere dil ka karaar
Itna hai aetbaar, manoonga na main bhi haar

        May be for today's situation the song might not go.......but with today's update i was visiting his teen feelings.....mid 20's n finally standing in her wedding where she was all set for someonelse...... So just thought of putting it up:)
Sigma IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 25 March 2011 at 6:21pm | IP Logged
Devi fab story HugClap

Will miss Shiv LOL

and witty Gauri Tongue
6thElement Goldie

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Posted: 25 March 2011 at 10:48pm | IP Logged

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bushrayou Goldie

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Posted: 26 March 2011 at 10:04am | IP Logged
oh wow i love how any update from you makes my day.
 i love these two.... seriously amazing! i felt so emotionally connected to Gauri's inability to hold back her emotions! you just somehow display every thing in such an amazing literary way that it blows my mind! 
 i cant even word how good that was. 

just keep writing..... thanks for coming back and updating! you rock! 

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