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CAPTIVATED HEART..mjht ff... ended (Page 64)

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Posted: 19 February 2011 at 10:49pm | IP Logged
aww that was a beautiful ending mulan.
keep writing more.

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Posted: 20 February 2011 at 12:09am | IP Logged
Totally loved it!!

The whole morning Mayur sequence was so adorable...I especially loved the following two lines:

" Sometimes I wish I could see myself while sleeping..do I look that handsome?" - LOLhe is a cutie!!
 
"how about we continue from here when we come back?" -hmm...Mrs.Sharma is becoming bold & naughty like her husband...
 
I liked how u show the bond b/w the sisters and Mayank & Sam. There are there for each other!
 
The whole thing with fb was so sweet! I mean it was such a simple gesture but there was a lot of love in it and it meant a lot to Mayu...Smile
 
Birth of babies - U were wonderful, explaining how tensed & scared the fathers were to the happiness they felt when they first held the babies. A moment to cherish!!
 
The last bit was really a nice family moment though a bit filmy, I think it showed the depth of their relationships. Sajan's daughter's name is Ishita???A special hug for thatHugHug
 
A wonderful ending but I'm sad coz now I won't have this ff to read...please do come back soon with another ff!!Thanks for the pm.Hug
 

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Posted: 20 February 2011 at 2:43am | IP Logged
aww... mulan... thnk u sooooooo much 4 dedicating d update 2 me!!!!!HugHugHug
it really means alot 2 me...HugHugHug
aww.... such an beautiful update...
MN finally becam 2hearts 1 soul...Blushing
& d birth of deir twins...Day Dreaming
& lastly d song.. *yeh Zindagi..* 1 of my fav song wid whole MN Family...!EmbarrassedDay DreamingEmbarrassedDay Dreaming
such an Perfect Ending... luvd it totally...ClapThumbs Up
thou.. i'll miss dis ff..Ouch... but i'm sure.. u'll cum up wid a new one...Embarrassed
thnx a ton..HugHug
luv ya loads....HugHug

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Posted: 20 February 2011 at 3:13am | IP Logged
ohhhhhhhhhhhh my my 
haven't seen any dori seen as adorable as this :D
contact sam :lol:

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Posted: 20 February 2011 at 3:19am | IP Logged
lovely ending.....

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Posted: 20 February 2011 at 4:04am | IP Logged
Hii Mulan,
I finally read the entire ff today
all 19 parts
I dont know how much time it took, but I did LOL
I dont regret for spending my time reading this beautiful piece
It was amazing, I didnt realise that its ended
but peoples comments told me that!

It was so good yaar
Loved it a lot Hug
Such a sweet simple cute innocent ff
Like a Mayur movie playing infront!!!

God bless you Hug

Please do pm me if you happen to write anything new Big smile
I might be late in commenting, but I'll defo read!

Thanks for all the pms Embarrassed

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Posted: 20 February 2011 at 10:58pm | IP Logged
it ws da most lovely ff..............wht an ending yr................superb............da perfect happy family...........SmileSmile

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Posted: 21 February 2011 at 2:54pm | IP Logged
wow i cant belive u ended this ff
it was amazing
and this part was just mindblowing
loved it
awsome ff
do ryt more
 
 
love
tanzeel

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