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CAPTIVATED HEART..mjht ff... ended (Page 61)

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Posted: 18 February 2011 at 10:13pm | IP Logged
awesome update mulan.
just beautiful.
continue soon.

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beautiful update Mehak!
i loved it
sajan married Embarrassed
waiting for the next update
continue soon
nd thnx for the pm Smile

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Posted: 19 February 2011 at 8:00am | IP Logged

HELLO TO ALL MY LOVELY FRIENDS!! HugHugHugTHANKU SOO MUCH FOR THE WISHES... NOW I M FEELING MUCH BETTER!!!!EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

OK SUPRIYA , AFSHA , AMY  AND OTHERS THANKS FOR BEARING WITH MY SHORT PARTS!!! I HOPE THIS IWILL COVER UP!!! Embarrassed

NIKITA I HOEP U GT THE PM THIS TIME!! EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

LOVE YOU ALL!!!!!!!! Embarrassed

 

                          PART 19

 

Nupur woke up almost around 12pm. As soon as she looked at the watch hanging from the wall, she gasped. It was very late and she was supposed to get Gunjan ready for the pagphere ke rasam.  She tried to get up but realized Maaynak hand was lying at her waist and she couldn't move. She turned around to face him and felt herself blush remembering the previous night.

He looked calm and contented and she felt a wave of pride wash through her as she knew it was because of her'. two captivated hearts were finally beating for one another'.

" Sometimes I wish I could see myself while sleeping..do I look that handsome?"

Nupur looked at the still closed eyes of her husband and than at the grin appearing on his face.

 Nupur: " mayank aap bhe na! Acha now let me get up I have to go get Gunjan ready for the rasm."

Mayank pulled her even closer, completely encircling her with him arms, "sure!bye bye!"

Nupur head was now resting on his chest and she felt warmth engulf her .

Nupur : " mayank!"

Mayank looked up at her and feigning surprise said: " tum ab tk gaye nahe?"

Nupur unable to stop herself from laughing, " Mayank app bhe na! Is se pehle ke maam papa ke call aa jaey'"

Before she could finish her line the phone rang and Mayank groaned and picked it up.

Mayank: " hello! Jee dad , bus Nupur tyar he hai !"

He looked at Nupur and winked at her.

"jee jee dad! Hum jald he pohanch jaen gay!"

he disconnected the phone and looked at Nupur with such a heart broken look that she couldn't resist but lean into him and kiss him, "how about we continue from here when we come back?"

she winked at Mayank but before he could reply she quickly got out of bed and went to get ready.

While Mayank kept on lying , with a smile dancing on his face and wondering what he ever did to become so lucky to have Nupur in his life'

                     *******************

Mayank and Nupur knocked the door of Gunjan's and Sam's room, and it was almost immediately opened by Sam, whose face portrayed perfect image of a crestfallen man.

Mayank: " good morning bro! (he lightly hit his head on seeing the same expression still) now this is something unique or is it my lack of experience? How many men carry such expression after their fisrt night of married life."

Sam: " mate forget it!"

He still seems dejected and now Mayank was worried too.

Nupur; " what exactly happened?"

" dii! Ander ayen na!"

Nupur turned to meet her sis and hugged her, while Sam shrugged and let Mayank enter too.

Gunjan: " hey jiju!"
Mayank : " good morning sis!"

For a whole minute there was uncomfortable silence until finally Mayank spoke up, " is it something wrong with this room's air or have you both lost it? It was supposed to be your wedding night!"

Gunjan: " yeah I heard so too! But you see we had guests!"

Mayank and Nupur looked at each other completely unable to comprehend the situation.

Gunjan: " moreover I was given so much information about my husband by none other then our very own'. Ria!"

Nupur and Mayank looked at each other and burst out laughing. Nupur: "What the hell Is this all about?"

Mayank: " let me guess..please! it must be about our very own Sam's adventures."
Sam: " you get 10 out of 10 mate!"

Gunjan: " exactly jiju!"

Mayank could see Gunjan was in a very bad modd and he felt sorry for both of them. They knew they loved each other and still were unable to understand each other.

Nupur saw that too.

Nupur: " sam you want to say something?

Sam: " I have been trying to do that since 2 am but my wife Is not interested!"

Mayank: " you didn't even bother listening to him Gunjan?"

Gunjan: "  what was there to listen in it?'

Nupur: " Gunjan you should have let him explain atleast?"

Gunjan: " but dii'"

Sam: " leave it Nupur! there is no need for anything.. if she trusts Ria more than me then so be it!"

He left the room  and Mayank followed him while Nupur stayed with Gunjan.

Gunjan sat on the bed and started crying.

Nupur: ' gunjan!" (hugging her)

Gunjan: " dii why it all had to happen yesterday night."

Nupur: " because you let it happen. You already knew about Ria and Sam and yet instead of understanding the situation you made it worse."

Gunjan: " but dii.."

Nupur: " you love him na?"

Gunjan: " ofcourse dii'"

Nupur: " then learn to trust him."

                       *********************

Sam and Mayank were waiting downstairs when finally Gunjan and Nupur arrived.

Mayank: " all set to go?"

Nupur: "yes.."

Sam was about to leave but was stopped but Gunjan, " I am sorry Sam.."

Sam turned around and was about to unleash his anger when he saw the meaningful looks of Mayank and Nupur.

Sam smiled at Gunjan and said: " I love you Gunjan'"

He pulled out his arms for her and she ran to hug him.

Gunjan : " I love you too."

Mayank: " phew what a tiring morning!"

Everybody started laughing and left for the rasm.

                ************************

Nupur was in her room getting ready for bed while Mayank was busy finishing his work. He was going through his mails when he saw a facebook request.

 

"Mrs. Nupur Sharma wants to add you as her husband on facebook."

Mayank felt tides of love wash over him'his heart went out to his wife'Mrs. Nupur Sharama.

 

He saw her enter the room and was busy brushing her hair. He went forward to her and hugged her from the back'

"I love you Mrs. Nupur Sharma."

Nupur turned around in his arms, "I love you too'"

Mayank leaned to kiss her and seal their love with it''..

                   **********************

 

A YEAR LATER'''.

 

Mayank and Sam were constantly pacing infront of the I.C.U. . the red light was glowing over them. Every other second they turned , awaiting for the docter to come out and tell them that everything was okay' Nupur and Gunjan were fine' their  babies were fine'..

                              **********************

as the light kept on glowing Mayank felt his heart clench with every passing minute' he had never been so frightened in his life'he wasn't afraid of the darkness of his room at the orphanage as he was of this red light'he had learned to live alone'learned to drink all the sorrows and hardships without letting anyone know' but today he felt helpless' the only person he loved most in his life was their , behind the door , and the red light was still glowing.

                                *******************

 

Sam saw Mayank standing alone at the end of the room.. his brows were drawn together'. Sam knew his friend too well and he knew the intensity of his love for Nupur too' Mayank had finally learn to love and share and Sam felt his heart made a silent prayer for Nupur and Mayank ..for their happiness'

                               *******************

Sam: " Mayank.."

Mayank turned around and saw Sam carrying a cup of coffee for him.. it was strange how Sam had come to share everything with him' he had been his best friend for too long and now they were about to share the most important moments of life' the happiness of becoming fathers'

                   **********************

 

Finally the red light diminished and Mayank and Sam looked up as a nurse came running towards them'

Nurse: " mubarak ho! You both are granted with twin sons and daughters."

Mayank was the father of twin sons and Sam the father of twin daughters. Both hugged each other with pride bursting in their hearts'

                                ******************

Mayank entered the I..C.U and saw Nupur lying on the bed. Beside her lay their babies'two baby boys' as soon as Nupur saw Mayank entering the room she smiles at him weakly , to assure him she was fine'

                                      *****************

Mayank picked his sons in his arms first time and felt as if he was the happiest man on earth.. he sat beside his smiling wife and the whole family hugged each other'

 Mayank: "  I love you Nupur.."

Nupur : " I love you too'"

                                   *******************

Sam entered Gunjan's room and saw her lying on the beed with his two daughters' he felt pride fill his heart when he saw his dolls first time.. he picked them up a little hesitantly as if afraid they will be hurt' they were so soft..so delicate.. just like the woolen dolls he had bought for them' he turned around to face Gunjan whose eyes were brimming with tears'

Sam: " I love you Gunjan'"

Gunajn: " I love you too'"

                                   *********************

 

A YEAR LATER:

 

Mayank , Sam, Gunjan and Nupur were living in the same house and were loving every moment of their life'

Mayank , Sam, Gunjan and Nupur had decided to throw a large party on their children's first birthday' the proud parents had made sure to make this party turn into the most fabulous party ever thrown in history of the city'.

 

Sam and Gunjan were busy running here and there , checking everything to be right while Mayank and Nupur were taking care of the children. Nupur and Gunjan had refused to keep any grany for their children' they wanted to take pleasure in every moment of their childhood..they both never left their children alone to anyone'' however they were often helped by Mayank and Sam who were crazy about their children'.

                                   **********************

Nupur stood in the balcony making a silent prayer for her family while Mayank was playing with the four children' ishita, dia, rahul and pranav.. they had started calling Mayank and Sam dad while Gunjan and Nupur were both *maa * for them'.

 Nupur came to sit beside them with love filled eyes'.

Mayank hugged her..he knew how much this family meant to her'

Mayank: " thankyou for everything Nupur'"

She kissed his forehead and turned to the kids who were playing with each other'

Mayank and Nupur both looked at them with love brimming in their eyes and hopes for their happiness and dreams for a beautiful life ahead..'.

 

Gunjan: " array mujhe to bhool he gaye dii!"

Nupur looked up and Gunjan ran to hug her sister and jiju.

Sam stood standing at the door ' his family' he loved them all too much'

Sam: (singing) "Yeh zindagi'.

 raftaar se chal pari'"
Mayank: " Jaate hue raahon mein'.

 humse abhi keh ke gayi'"

Gunjan joined in: "

Hamara yeh waqt hamara '

jo ik baar gaya toh aaye na dobara'"

Nupur:
  "Samajh lo zara yeh'.

 hawaon ka ishaara, mere yaaro'"

Sam, Mayank, Gunjan and Nupur hugged each other and the kids started making noises'

Nupur: " haha! tume hm kese bhool sakte hain?"

Nupur picked ishita, Gunjan picked up dia,

Nupur: "Hum sab jo saath mein rahe'.
Khushiyan sab haath mein rahe'
Mayank: " Hum se bas faasle rahe yun, arrey tu ru tu ru'."

Mayank picked up rahul and Sam piched Pranav.
Sam: " Chaahe kahin kisi bhi mor par'.
Bhigre gi bhi koi baat  bhe agar'.
Milke ik dujhe se kahe yun'.."

Nupur: "Yeh baatein, hai chhoti moti baatein'
Yeh aaye jaaye jaise ki din aur raatein'.
Na aankhon se lagana kabhi yeh barsaatein mere yaaro'."

CHORUS: "Apna har din aise jiyo, jaise ki aakhri ho'..
Jiyo toh iss pal aise jiyo, jaise ki aakhri ho'.
Apna har din aise jiyo, jaise ki aakhri ho'
Jiyo toh iss pal aise jiyo, jaise ki aakhri ho'."

Ria and Pooh entered making Gunjan and Nupur grimace.

As soon as they both entered they tried to cling to Mayanka dn Sam.

Mayank: ( moving away from Pooh, Moving towards Nupur) " Duniya matlab ki yaar hai'
Iski aadat bekaar hai'"

Sam pushed clinging form of Ria away and hugged Gunjan: "
Iss se kum rakhna vaasta tu, turu ru tu ru tu'"

(Sam and Mayank gave each other a high five  and together: "
Apno se rakhna dosti'
Inn se doori har kami'
Inn mein hi dhoondh raasta tu'."

Gunjan: " Na jaana, yeh tune na jaana'.
Yeh manzil teri, inhe tujhe hai paana''."

Nupur: "Hai maine kaha hai jo, uss se mile zamana mere yaaro'."

 

Mayank put his arm on Sam shoulder 'while Gunjna and Nupur hugged each other'

Mayank, Sam, Gunjan and Sam together: "

"Hamara yeh waqt hamara jo ik baar gaya toh aaye na dobara'
Samajh lo zara yeh, hawaon ka ishaara, mere yaaro'."

They all were hugging and dancing together:

"Apna har din aise jiyo, jaise ki aakhri ho'..
Jiyo toh iss pal aise jiyo, jaise ki aakhri ho'.
Apna har din aise jiyo, jaise ki aakhri ho'
Jiyo toh iss pal aise jiyo, jaise ki aakhri ho'."

Mr and Mrs. Bushan stood in the door looking at their children and grandchildren laughing and dancing' they both looked at each other with tears of happiness in their eyes and a silent prayer in their heart''..


                             *********THE END********


Edited by mulan. - 19 February 2011 at 8:14am

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Posted: 19 February 2011 at 8:07am | IP Logged
wat a wonderful FF yaar..........
bt m sad it ended......Cry.......but also happy that it ended on a happy note......Smile
& the funny part was GUNUR both of dem gave birth 2 twins @ the same time.......
the update was soooooo cute.......Embarrassed
plzzzzz write more FF'S & m the 1st 2 commnt.......feels gr8.....
take care of ur health.......
& keep continuing writng more FF's 4 us........
best of luck.........Thumbs Up


Edited by ekta_monaya - 19 February 2011 at 8:21am

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it was superb............loved it

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Posted: 19 February 2011 at 8:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ekta_monaya

wat a wonderful FF yaar..........
bt m sad it ended......Cry.......but also happy that it ended on a happy note......Smile
& the funny part was GUNUR both of dem gave birth 2 twins @ the same time.......
the update was soooooo cute.......Embarrassed
plzzzzz write more FF'S & m the 1st 2 commnt.......feels gr8.....
take care of ur health.......
& keep continuing writng more FF's 4 us........
best of luck.........Thumbs Up


thanku soooooooo much ekta!!!!!!!!!! SmileSmileSmile i will definately try to write a new ff soon!!!!!!! hope u like tht too!!!!!!!EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

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Originally posted by ridi_onasis

it was superb............loved it

thanku rida!!!!!!!! :)
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A very lovely ending.... Mayank-Nupur their relationship didn't start well but ended all good... Yet another amazing ff Mulan... A very beautiful ending... Hope too see more ffs from u...

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