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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely update
Thanks a lot for the pm 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Mulan.. swty. I just the updates from 14 to 17.. i wasnt here for a couple of days.. and look what you have done.. OMG... its just terrific..
 
Beautifully written dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update mulan.
aww poor mayu & the last line he said  was too good.
continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago

SUPERB UPDATE .

TRUELY MIND BLOWING UPDATE ....................
I JUST LOVED THE ROMANTIC SCENE OF OUR MAYUR ...........
FINALLY .BOTH HAVE CONFESSED THEIR FEELING .............
AND WHAT AN ENRTY OF UDHAY BHAIYA .
KABAB MEIN HADDI FOR OUR LOVERS👏👏👏😆😆😆😆😆😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
eekss... wt an update mulan☺️
part 17....sooo romantic..😍
mayu & his tatics...☺️
😆& d dori scene....😍
i'm soo luvin it....😳
continue soon
& haan.. take care of ur health!🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part...
do continue soon
thanks 4 the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago

PART 18

 

Gunjan was sitting in her room…in their room… she was married to Sam an hour ago and now she sat waiting for her husband …. Her heart was filled with the joy of knowing that the person you loved , was equally in love with you….

She heard the door creak open.. her nerves took over and for a moment she was anxious…

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Sam entered the rooma dn saw his Gunjan … my wife , he corrected himself sitting there. Her face was covered with ghoonghat but her hands lying on her knees were trembling…he realized she was afraid… afraid of this new life… he went towards her and pulling aside the ghoonghat , he gently uplifted her face to look in her eyes….

Sam: " I love you Gunjan…"

Gunjan saw the love in his eyes and felt her fear seep out of her… she loved him too dearly to let anything come in between them…

Gunjan:  "I love you too Sam…I always will…"

They hugged each other and letting go of everything except their love, became one soul……….

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Mayank entered the room after having seen to all the duties he was supposed to check on.as soon as he entered the room his eyes searched for Nupur…he wanted her to be close to him , now that they were finally able to be alone together…

The room was lightly lit with candles.. Mayank saw the shadow of Nupur lurking in the balcony…. A smile playing on his face ,he moved forward to meet her…

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Nupur stood with her back to the door, lost  in thought. Her heart was waiting for Mayank … she loved him from the very core of her heart and now was finally ready to be a wife to him… but somewhere in her there were the normal apprehensions ever girl face on the brink of womanhood. She hugged herself shivering from the cold wind…

"if you ask me I guess my arms will do that job better…"

Nupur turned around to face Mayank…

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Mayank's breath caught when he saw the striking beauty infront of him.. she was wearing a pink nightgown with her hair left open to flow about her giving her an aura of unreal…

Mayank came closer and enveloped her in his arms.. he could see she was shivering but from cold r fear he was unsure of that…

He kissed her forehead, followed by her eyes and lastly her bare neck…

Nupur: " Mayank…"

Mayank kissed her and stopped all her protests…

Mayank: " I love you Nupur.."

The passion in his voice bereft her of all her protests and she submitted to her husband……
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Posted: 13 years ago

awwww..that was really lovely..the emotions came out very well..😊

all the best for tommorow..🤗
Edited by -Mehak - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Mulan... short but very impactful...
 
Beautifully written and all the best for your exam.. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

VERY VERY ROMANTIC PART.

LOVED IT .
BUT IT WAS TOO SMALL.
PLEASE NEXT TIME DO A BIT LONGER UPDATE ..............
FINALLY MAYUR ARE GOING TO BE ONE.......................
"BAAHAON K DARMEIYAN DO PYAR MIL RHE. HAI.......................
BAAHAON K DARMEIYAN DO PYAR MIL RHE. HAI.............................
JANE KYA
BOLE MAN....
BOLE SUNN KI TARAN,.
DHADKAN BANI ZUBAAANNNNNN..........
BAAHAON K DARMEIYAN DO PYAR MIL RHE. HAI.........................."
"AATE JAATE . HASTE GAATE.
SOCHA THA MENE MAN MEIN KAI BAAR .
WO PEHLI NAZAR HALKA SA ASAR ..........
KARTA HAI KYU IS DIL KO BEKARAR...
RUK K CHALNA CHAL K RUKNA......
NA  JANNE TUMHE HAI KISKA INTEZZAAR.........
TERA VO YAKEEN KAHI MEIN TO NAHI
LAGTA HAI YAHI KYU MUJHKO BAAR BAAR.
YAHI SACH HAI .
SHAYAD MENE PYAR KIYA.
HA HA . TUMSE MENE.PYAR KIYA..........