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Posted: 29 January 2011 at 2:04pm | IP Logged
Very nice and lovely update Mulan... hope your play went off well

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Posted: 30 January 2011 at 6:54am | IP Logged

HELLO FRIENDS!!!!!!! HugHugHug

THANKU SOOOOO MUCH FOR ALL THE WISHES AND OFCOURSE FOR ALL THE  BEAUTIFUL COMMENTS THAT KEEP ME GOING!!!! MY PALY WENT GOOD AND I AM BACK WITH THE NEXT PART!!! HOPE U LIKE IT!!!EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

DO COMENT PLZZZZZ!!!!!!!

 

 

 

                                                            PART 9

 

Mayank woke up pretty late to find it was already 12pm. He looked around for Nupur but she wasn't in the room. He got up and went downstairs to look for her, still angry with her for the last night. As soon as Mayank reached the end of stairs he heard laughter emitting from the kitchen. he inched closer to the open door.

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nupur was constantly laughing since the past hour because of Samrat. He arrived earlier that morning o surprise Mayank and as Nupur has expected when she first talked to him, he was a really nice, friendly man.

Mayank was indeed surprised to see them but he was not as surprised by Sam's arrival as he was by the laughing Nupur. Her laughter was like music to his ears and the joy her face portrayed, traveled to his heart by an invisible cord.

Suddenly Nupur looked up and saw Mayank standing there with his eyes still drowsy and his messed hair made him looked so handsome and cute at the same time that her heart warmed for the man and she inched closer to him unconsciously.

These little gestures were not lost on Samrat. He knew his friend too well to ignore the love in his friend's eyes for Nupur and Nuur was too innocent to hide her attraction towards Mayank.

Sam: " ahem ahem.."

Mayank and Nupur both blinked together and and simultaneously turned to Sam.

Mayank: " hello bro."

Sam and Mayank shook hands and unusual as it was of Mayank to show emotions, he hugged his best friend. He had missed him. It was a relief to have Sam beside him to distract him from the bitter realities of his past when they threatened to influence his present.Sam had stood beside him for too long.

Sam: " hey dude!"

Nupur: " Sam subah he aa gaye thay'"

Mayank looked up at Nupur. The intensity of his gaze made her go red.

She quickly shook herself. she had to cover for her bad behavior the previous night.
no matter what she had to do.

Sam stepped forward and touched Mayank's forehead.

Mayank: " Sam I guess you need to rest' long flight has effected your mind too much.. what exactly do you think you are doing?"

Sam: " Checking for symptoms of fever. What else can explain your sleeping till this late?"

Mayank: that wasn't funny."

Sam: " yeah it isn't. after 2 years of constant bickering over my late sleeping habbits here you are sleeping till 12pm! Nupur what did he had for dinner?"

Nupur was busy laughing.

The ringing of bell interrupted them.

Nupur went to open the door and warmly hugged her sister.

Gunajn: " hello dii! How are you?"
she seemed a little down.

Nupur: " I am fine! Tumne bataya nahe tum aa rahe ho! Ao na ander ao!"

Gunjan : " unfortunately I am not alone dii."

Nupur was confused but not for long as soon her two cousins came infront.

Nupur : Ria aur Pooja tum?"

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Ria and Pooja were standing there dressed up in mini skirts . both were highly fashionable, not to forget rude and shelfish.

Nupur and Gunjan disliked them both and have always tried to avoid them but here they were again facing each other.

Moving Nupur aside they both entered.

Pooja: " nice house Nupur."
Nupur: " thanks Pooja."

Pooja: " arrhgghh ! how many times have I told you? its pooh not pooja!"
Nupur: " oh yeah Pooh!"
 they were soon joined by Mayank and Samrat who have come to find the reason behind all the commotion.

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Samrat and Gunjan saw each other and Samrat grinned which made Gunjan groan inwardly. "not him too".

Samrat: " hello there Gunjan."
Gunjan made a sound that resembled a groan but passed as a "hi" which made Samrat's grin broader.

However at that moment Ria stepped forward.

Ria: " oh Sam!"

She hugged him which made his grin turn to a grimace.

Sam: " oh Ria.. u here?"
MayanK: " hello Ria."
Ria : " hello Mayank. Aray pooh look whom we found here."
Pooja stepped towards Mayank and kissed him on his cheek which made Nupur felt a hot rage flow through her body.

Mayank trying to remove the entangle of her arms which have shortly followed her kiss , " errmmm.. I guess  there is some sort of introduction required."
Nupur : " but for that Pooja will have to let me distinguish between her and you."
Pooja: ' arrggg! Nupur its pooh!"

Nupur : " oh yup pooja!"

Nupur felt little satisfaction at calling Pooja by the name she dispised.

Gunjan: " Hi jiju!"

Mayank: " hello Gunjan. He finally succeeded in creating some space between him and Pooja and moved to hug Gunjan.

Nupur went to stand beside him and entangling her arm with his , like an over possessive wife said: " Meet my husband Ria and Pooja! And Mayank this is .."
Samrat provided: " Ria and.."

Mayank provided : " pooh!"

Pooja and Ria : " exactly! "

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Edited by mulan. - 30 January 2011 at 7:01am

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Posted: 30 January 2011 at 7:15am | IP Logged
part 6 
so beautiful...Day DreamingDay Dreaming
i'm in mayur land!!!
totally luvd it!!!
its shows their unsaid understanding!!!!!
awwww............so sweet.
totally luvd it.

part7
beautiful update..................Nupur was so nervous.........i love Mayank's sudden kiss......it was really sweet.
finally nupur relealed herself a little, but she still dintn knw abt mayank.
nice update.....loved it.

Part8
lovely......... lovely update
i loved mayank's hesitation............. he was right.
bt i really don't understand nupur...... what does she want??????
mayank s nice husband..Day Dreaming awwwww......all time niceDay Dreaming
finally nups had gt sense............too right decision.

Part9
m accidentally fist in commentLOL 
it was grt.
loved sayank convo........mayank was too reserved to express his feeling.
i hope, sanu teach him, hwo to enjoy life!!!
sajan clash was very nice.
n Pooh n Ria.........OMG!!!! it was so entertaining....its gonna b fun to watch Mayanks reactionLOL
ur update made my day.
thanks for the pm.




Edited by SujaLuvsMayur - 01 February 2011 at 7:21am

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Posted: 30 January 2011 at 7:38am | IP Logged
greatt
Thanxxxx fo d pm
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Posted: 30 January 2011 at 7:57am | IP Logged
great update dear

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Posted: 30 January 2011 at 7:58am | IP Logged
nice partSmile

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Posted: 30 January 2011 at 8:06am | IP Logged
Awesome update..!

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love nupur possesiveness and sajan mayur r osom

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