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CAPTIVATED HEART..mjht ff... ended (Page 14)

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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 6:08am | IP Logged
nice part. so mayur romance starting up!!!!! looking forward to your updates.

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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 6:24am | IP Logged
oh it ws sooo beautifulClap
nice part dear jus love am-mayu convo.....
oh wow mayur scene ws soo beautiful...
cont soon dear
luv u

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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 7:25am | IP Logged
nice part
mayur scenes were cute 
so sam is coming 
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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 11:45am | IP Logged

mystery kiya hai!!!!
and naughty SAM LOL
kitna intezaar karwatti ho sajan ke meet main LOL
cont soon...
thnkxx 4 da PM

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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 12:43pm | IP Logged
Wao so beautiful update
Sam is so naughty
Mayank is do cute
Thanks for pm ans cont soon
I love this Ff so much

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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 2:21pm | IP Logged
tht was soooooooo cool

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Hi its a nice story...............when are u updating?

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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 4:29am | IP Logged

 

 HELLO FRIENDS!!!!!!!  HugHugHug SORRY FOR TAKING SOOO LONG BUT WAS FACING WRITER'S BLOCK! Tongue

HOWEVER ALL THANKS TO MY BEST FRIEND KINZA ARSHAD I GOT OVER IT!!!! THANKUUSSS KINZUUUUUUUU!!!!!!! Big smileBig smileBig smile

ALL MY LOVELY  FRIENDS THANKUUU SOOOO MUCH FOR ALL THE SUPPORT !!!! I AM ALWAYS TOUCHED BY THE LOVE YOU ALL SHOWER ON ME AND IT HELPS ME KEEP GOING!!!!!! LOVE U ALLLL !!!!!!!!! Heart

HOPE U LIKE THIS! DO COMENT! Big smileBig smile

                                    PART 6

Nupur was standing in the balcony and looking out at the garden laden with endless rows of flowers. This home was her dream place 'but what about her dream man?

Nupur wanted to bring happiness in their relationship..she wanted to accept him'but she was afraid' she was afraid of this new relation'she was afraid of knowing nothing about the man who now owned her life' in her heart she wanted to know him.. somewhere in her heart she wished for happiness in her married life' she was touched by the consideration Mayank showed her last night' she wanted to take the next step' towards making her  marriage a success'

 

 

Orey manva tu to bavra hai''
Tu hi jaane tu kya sochta hai'..
Tu hi jaane tu kya sochta hai bavre''.
Kyun dikhaye sapne tu sote jaagte'..

Jo barse sapne boond boond'..
Nainon ko moond moond'
Jo barse sapne boond boond'.
Nainon ko moond moond'.
Kaise main chaloon, dekh na sakoon'.
Anjaane raastein'''..

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Mayank woke up and his eyes caught Nupur standing in the balcony.  Nupur's  hair were blowing in the soft morning breeze and her pink night gown was flowing around her. she was hugging herself as if she was cold' she was lost in thought'

Mayank's heart ached for her'he was always shocked by the unknown strong emotions she aroused in him. 'he wanted to reach out and envelope her in his arms..to sooth her' to tell her she can let go of her fears' he wanted to make her his 'but' last night he had realized there was a barrier between them'

 

Gunjasa hai koi iktara iktara, gunjasa hai koi iktara'.
Gunjasa hai koi iktara iktara, gunjasa hai koi iktara'..
Dheeme bole koi iktara iktara, dheeme bole koi iktara'..
Gunjasa hai koi iktara iktara, gunjasa hai koi iktara''.

 

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"Nupur'"

Nupur was brought back to reality by her husband's voice'

Nupur turned around and his heart was again captivated by her beauty'

Nupur: " jee.."

Mayank: " errmmm.. I guess we should get ready. We have to go to your place for lunch.."

Nupur: " hmmm' okay.."

She gave a weak smile.

Nupur was leaving when she was stopped by Mayank's voice'

"Nupur.."

Nupur: " jee'"

Mayank came closer and looking in her eyes said : " you were looking beautiful last night'"

He tucked her loose hair behind her ears.

Having done that he left leaving his wife in an elevated mood for which she was unable to find any reason'

She was careful at choosing what she wears and unconsciously was more cautious while getting ready'

 

Sun rahi hoon sudh budh khoke koi main kahani'
Poori kahani hai kya kise hai pata'
Main to kisiki hoke yeh bhi na jaani'
Ruth hai ye do pal ki ya rehgi sada'.
(kise hai pata' kise hai pata)'.

Jo barse sapne boond boond'
Nainon ko moond moond'
(Nainon ko moond moond)'
Jo barse sapne boond boond'
Nainon ko moond moond'
Kaise main chaloon, dekh na sakoon'
Anjaane raastein'.!!!

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Nupur was ready wearing a pink saree and matching earrings and bracelet. She was trying hard to wear a diamond locket that her mother had gifted. At her house she usually left this task for Gunjan so was unable to latch the locket.

 

Mayank entered the room all set to go and saw Nupur glowering and quarrelling with the  locket. He smiled and moved towards her.

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Nupur felt a hand at the bare part of her neck and she felt a shiver ran down her spine... his touch made her feel warm all over.. but she didnt ..couldnt ... move away..... MAYank was standing very close to her and it was acting as a drug on her senses...... she could feel him...... She saw his reflection in the mirror and their eyes met....'' Nupur was lost in the passion she saw in MAyank's eyes'... while Mayank was lost in the depth of her eyes.....

Gunjasa hai koi iktara iktara, gunjasa hai koi iktara'..
Gunjasa hai koi iktara iktara, gunjasa hai koi iktara'..
Dheeme bole koi iktara iktara, dheeme bole koi iktara'''
Gunjasa hai koi iktara iktara, gunjasa hai koi iktara''''

 

 

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                         DIL  KHO KER HE TO TAQDEEREN MILTE HAIN''.

Edited by mulan. - 24 January 2011 at 4:49am

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