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geet and maan..es upt12/07/2012 last part epi (Page 9)

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They both landed on floor…………………….

At that time……………….there is special feeling inside him…………….feeling the soft creature in his hands,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

She is trying hard to get up……………..

I n these………………hair is disturbing her……………………

It is dark..and the moon light……………………giving him…………sensation.

If life ends there….he want tobe there………………………like this position…………

She is frustuated.

She knows if she gets late…….then everyone comes there………..and there is going tobe mess..

Hello ksk……………………..leaveme…..why are u hugging me like this.

Hee came into this world.an d realize her……………

And try to get up…………………

She made to move to the garden.it is the entrance…

And she dragged him with his hand in her hand,,,,,,,,,,,

At the other side of the garden……..suddenly lights on………………….

And maan looked around..

It is second part of the garden..

It is lonely place….

A cute dinner table……with candles and balloons……………………

A sweet cake on the center…..

On that name …………………to my love and would be partner..

A surprise.

And a greeting card………………….with a love message………………….

Ur the one who make s my life fill with happiness by your love…………………………..

Ur my only love…………………and only life………………………………

With smiles…………

He smiled………….

Oye tu kyon has raha hay……………….

Kardiya na.mere surprise ka satya naash……………tuu such mein khadoos hay……….tu saath saath dust danav bhi…………

Har kahani ka villan hay too……………….

Oh yesi kya dekh rahe hoo…chalo.isse pehle sa bko lage ki yeh ,,,,,,hamara date plan hay…………..

Chalo….

She saw……….pari is coming in other direction………..

Oh no pari didi ne yeha dekhiliya toh mein toh gayee kaam se…….aur….mein kya karoon…………

Geet……………..kuch karo..

She dragged maan to the bushes…………

And they are hiding.

Maan is completely confused….

He is about to yell…..now this time……..she closed his mouth with hishand……..

Maan …………………….cannot breathe of this sensation……………..

The soft hand on his lips………………….he tempted to catch………the hand…..and give lot of kisses……………….

And the lips…………………………as she is biting …….out of tension..

Even though the situation..is irritating but…….

Suddenly she came to his side……this decreased the distance……….between as she is busy in watching the scene………………….with curiousity…………………………….

Maan……………is enjoying the proximity…………………..of her…..her feminine scent………….is creating intoxicating him……………………….

He turned to the direction……..

Saw his brother……….coming in  other direction…………………

He is lookingin the direction…….

And pari……………bumped with him,,,,

They both turned for the surprise..

He never saw soham smiling…………………

He is smiling……………..and said something in pari's ear………….

She blushed………………….

Geet is excited……and hugged maan unintensionly…..

Maan confused……and smiled at her child like behaviour…………………….

She is mad.but he like his madness………………

He smiled after long time…………………

They are in a position………………for long time.

After sometime…………….

They cut the cake and fed with each other……………………..

Oyee………mere liye thoda chodna…..

And they find all are escaped from the bushes.

They quickly……………left each other.

Jeeju………….sorry for the break.but it is getting late.agar andar nahii chala……toh handa haveli mein toofan ayaaga….aur hum behek jayee.waise bhi muje bachane wala………bhi nahii hy…………

And all laughed…

Prem and raj came behind.

Geet is right.

Any how future couple,,,,,,,sorry for disturbing.the romantic episode………………………..\but really it is late…………….

And they take pari.with her..

Maan looked at her ……………………………..

Pari and soham blushing like anything….

Their date…………in their own garden………………

This is fantastic.

Then at that time……………………….they saw………….brij is coming in the opposite direction………………….

They quickly hide…..

As brij are aap log yeha kya kar rahe hay………………………………

As they fumbled with words……

At that time……..maan is wondered…

As geet shouted.

Oh no.didi yeh apne kya kiya……..

Apne khandani ring kho dee ne apne………………apko pata hay na..panditji ne……aap ke aur…………..soham jeeju ke kundali se adaar se banaya…………….hay…didi…

Jeeju kya kar rahe hya aap.agar bm ko pata chale na……toh gadbad…………..

Chalo.

Brij bhai.aap bhi doond leejiye na…

Yaad hay pechle baar………aap nee bhi ring kho di toh bm ne kya kiya…..

He remember…………bm made him…..to round 108 rounds on the temple……………………

He feared…and start searching…………………………………..

And geet dropped some ring…

And took it.and told that it is safe……………………………

She winked at pari.

And they both screamed…..mil gayee……..

And they ran to the haveli……………………….

Wher emaan amused at her antics……………..

How can she think so fast…………..an d he felt bad for brij……itne asaani se buddu ban gaya..

This girl is literally mad……………….

Pari:tere dimak mein yeh ideas kaha se atta ahya….

Geet:iske liye.demak ke jaroorat hay......................................

And she winked at pari…..

Are tum dono.kaha they…………………………

Who mein…………….

Date pe gayee thee…………………

Kya all said in unison.they all surprised……………………….

She winked………

As maan enter into the haveli………………………………….

As everyone looked at maan……….he looked shocked.

She smiled.

And said..nandu kaka ke saath pata hay…nandu kaka ki halwa……………………wow kitna yamee hay….kitne baar kaha hay kaka se mein unee pyar karthe hoo………

Lekin who kehte hay…………ke chutki betiya……….kya karon mein………………kaka……..pls halwa dijeeya naa…………………………..

She winked at them.

All laughed……………………….

She didn't notice………….that…………..nandu kaka blushed……………….

Chutiki betiyaa aur unke shararat ke bina yeh haweli toh………………..bilkul..soona hay…………..

Are shaadi ke gharhay bhaii.kuch hangama ho jaayee………………..

And all smile at her antics………….

Dadimaa…looked at her………………

She makes everyone happy………she is the bliss of happiness…………..

She smiled on looking ather…………

Where others are happy……………..

On seeing her………………………..

Khuranas and khannas leave the place……………………..


 

 

 

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very nice update....
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Awesome update 
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hi everyone
i met with accident.......................
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