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geet and maan..es upt12/07/2012 last part epi (Page 8)

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The pooja is taking some time…….

Mean time…………………geet is discussing something with her two jeejus…..

And they gave a high figh……………..

All take blessings from darji………………..

And all guests are served.

Meaantimee………………..geet introduce to Vicky anee and group…………….

And all others……………..

Prem and raj winked at geet……………

At the night……..pari is in her room…………

Geet dragged……….soham…………………

And she said something.

Maan looked at them felt some strange…..feeling.

Yeh ladki sach mein pagal hay……………………….

And on the other hand……

He find pari is blushing furiously….

And arhaan and nitya are playing with geet……………

Where arhaan gave kisses in his girl friend's cheek.

Heer and simran done lot of shopping.

They all meet with the khurana' and khanna family.

All are very much fond……………………….of………..heer and simran……

They all thought what a lovely family they have………..

Heer hugged geet………………………..

Tang karne wali……………………………….

And they are set for dinner……….

As the dinner is completed……..

They are set for and they moved to the handa haveli.

All men are talking about business………………..

Suddenly anee asked whose is the most beautiful room…..in this haveli…………..

Arhaan answered without any question……………………

Only one room……

Oh.which is one sasha……….asked…….

None other than..my darlings……

Even mom says that  so………..

Simran……….yes………………….and no one dares.to do any changes…..other wise………………

Abhinav bhai…….will take lifes…….

He is over protective regarding this…………..

Chutki…………………….

And all ar einto discussion..

Where rajji coming in opposite direction…………………bumps with him…………………………

And accidently she slips the juice on maan's kurtha……

He gives an angry look………………………..

And asks for wash room.

She shows the direction..

He moves in the direction and suddenly enter into the room…………

With out glaring………………………………

At the room…………….

He cleans and come out…..

To find the room………..

The room is colour ful……..the light pink color………………furnings..

And the room is filled with photographs………..

And a large photograph with a  garland.

The same cute couple………………….in the hall.

And on the other side..

A group ofphotographs of a cute baby from..her childhood to elder stage…….

And a big photograph…………………where ……………………….a girl is licking icecream………………..

Geet handa..the darling…..

His mind striked that ye……….this is geet room…………….

On the other hand….geet forgot something…in her room……she came back…………………..

And turned her back……..

As maan looked at her…………

As he moved to exit from the room…………………….

As geet locked the door………………

As her hook is opened……

She came to adjust……………….

She didn't notice that ther e is someone……………………….

In the room…

Poor maan has no other option he is stuck at the door.

He is hiding……..

Geet…….took her duppatta off…………threw on the bed.

The silky white…………………………duppatta on her bed.

Give the magnificent sight to our hero………………………

Her thin………………..slim waist……………………………….as she is checking her self in the mirror

The mirror is so lucky……as the beautiful sight ………………….

She is the best……………….

The lovely eyes…………………….

The perfect figure…….

Maan is breathless…………….he forgot to blink……………………

As she is trying to reach the hook………………….

There ar etwo strings and hook for the blouse………………

The back sight…………………….

She turned away from the mirror……………….

The waist covered with bangles……………..

The hair…..is loosen……………

She is looking great.

Suddenly she realized……………that there is someone……in this room………………………….

As she about to shout…….

Maan came forward and close her mouth with his hand…….

The eye lock session……..

The scene is one hand covering her mouth and one hand on her slim waist……………………

No not again……………

But this time..no response from geet………..as she is into the deep brown dark eyes…………………….with intensity…………………………

The same time maan is once again lost in the hazzle eyes……………………..

He is ……………..looking into her

What made her to look out side the world…………

She is the one every man die for……..

The lovely eyes………………..the figure perfect……………………

Everything the point…………

Same like.geet

What made this man so different…………

He is arrogant rude but different In others…….

\the body………….the perfect man………………….

She never seen such a person…………..

She cannot deny that every girl sure die off………………..

She heard from……………her friends….

That sameera is his girl friend………………………..

Oh no…….she suddenly realized the name………..and she came back to the senses…

And she tried to free her self………but the same time………………………..

Maan is lost……….and he isnot paying any attention to the things……………………

He is just looking at her……………………

Meantime…there is a knock at the door.

It is rajji……………..chutki darwaaza kholo……kitne thi too……pata hayh…………darji aur sab tuje doond rahi hay………..chutki…darwaja kholo.

Maan came back……….

He don't know what to do…………………………..

He feared that she may said something……………….

But …………………..he realized her…..

And she open the door….

Chutki:kaha thi too….chalo………….

Haa rajjididi aap chaleye…..mere hook loose huyee hay……..teek karn eayee hoo…………..

Please………………………..

Aap jaiyee…….jaiyee na……rajji leave……………..

The place………………..

On the other hand…………………

Maan came ………..

As he about to speak..

Dekh…..iss galat fame e mein mat rehna,,,,,,,,,,,,ki…………….

Tumee bachaya………..kya Karen majboor….agar yesa nahii kartha na……………..toh mere plan fail hota…isliye…………

Aur ab.ek kaam karna…………………..

Waise bhi iss kamre ka doosri raasta hay….tume usee se ……………jaana hay………………….

Maan shocked…..doosra raasta……………………

Yaa.

She took him to a trap door attached to it…

It leads to the balcony………………..

It is short cut……and there is a small…………..side.where easy to escape.

Ab mere chere kya dekh rahe hoo….come on……move…

Oh oh……and she showed him…

Msk………oh ……………….a escape…………..

He hit his forehead for frustuation…………..but no othe r option.as if he don't there going tob e problem for both of them…………………………

And they……………….move…………….as he is going to slip………..geet catch his hand…….

Oye ter e elephant body ko mein nahii uta sakthi………………….apni apko keechoo…………..

He looked at her in anger……

Oye……….gusse se muje baat mein dekhne…aur muje marne ke plan bhi baaad mein karne……..pehle……………………………keech na…………………….

And he gave lot of squeeze

And he came out…

And they both landed on floor……………….

 

 

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