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geet and maan..es upt12/07/2012 last part epi (Page 56)

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awesome update...

i loved it...

its really amazing...ki abhi se maan babu my geet...

thank u very much fr such a lovely update...

continue soon plz...
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Geet in the class room

She saw the changed expressions on face of ane and Vicky, when they see mr garewal

And sasha is so exicited on seeing him……………………………….

Then suddenly nimmy one of her student

Geet why did u bring rocky to our college u know na prince

Relax fatty….she calls as she is little fat……………………..

As rocky need to vaccination

For that I need to deviate him otherwise it is going to bite all the nurse and doctors………

So just……

Then anee came and they are at dancing room…………………………

Where geet got ready In her tracks.

She gave a smile at anee which is looking a tarjun.

She smiled.

Not knowing that the pervert came along with sasha………………………………………

They start dancing

His dirty eyes on geet.

Geet is dancing………………..

As the dance is going to change…………………………………………

Rahul came forward to hand over

But suddenly a hand stopped and came in front……………..

Maan came forward…………..

Looking extremely hot in his black tracks…….and teashirt…………………………………….

First two buttons open…………..

Giving one of his sweet smile togeet

Where others practically stop dancing………………………….

He grab the waist of geet and took away from the rahul

Where rahul felt a slap on his face

Geet felt thankful to him and once againlost in his eyes…….

Where maan saw rahul dirty eyes

He want to remove the eyes from the socket

And he also saw the dancing mentor is there

And rahul used the situation…………….but he thought to play the game

How can he use the opportunity to loose …………………….

Sohe came and danced with her

Note(this is a other song) b ut I translated this

So enjoy

Sweet sugar lolly doll

Don't say hold me not

Snow flowers like my gal

Don't say touch me not

When you deny me to touch you with my hand

When you prevent me to come near oh my heart

What will I become at last

I was born to make you as my wife

If you are not in my reach, waste is this life

When I laid my hand on flower, she cursed and abused me

Describing you as a golden bloom, she sent me away from her

Don't come after me

Thorn strewn around flowers

If you dare to touch it, twinge will creep all over your body



When I laid my hand on a creeper, she cursed and threw me out

Describing you as flash of lightning, she sent me away from her

Thunder follows lightning flash

Thunder followed by rain lash

It is perilous for you, if it turns in to a torrent

I shall deem it a boon

Even if it is a surging rain

I shall find solace in drowning

To tie the knot, oh my darling

Breeze touches you

Earth touches you

what is wrong if I touch you?

Breeze turns into breath in my life

Earth leads me in my strife

Tell me what is great in you?

Light touched you

Shower too touched you

Why is this prejudice on me?

Light shows me the way

Shower bathes me

Why to compare you with them?

Those will be with you only when you live

And the song is completed………………………

They came back to the senses.

Rahul was furious,,

Now he want geet at any cost…………………….

He is fuming in anger,

And he also see something more I n his eyes

Never he saw in hi m for sameera also

Passiveness,……………………………………………

That means geet is his love and sure he wil l getit

Vicky came to maan's room

Bhai that b……………..d came back

And maan looked at vikcy

Yes I know he Is here

I know there is still enemity between me and him and I don't want anyone to interfere

Bhai

But I fear he may,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Next day..maan is busy in his new project where his dad gave him.

He is too busy

On the other hand geet felt restlessness.

When shecame to college

Her innocent eyes are searching forhim…………………………….

Her heart is depressed

Well this got by anee and she informed misha also

As she isgoing to the corridor.

She bumped with rahul and before rahul touch her……………………………

A hand stopped rahul

As misha came in…………………..

Hey sweety what are doing here

Mish she felt relive on seeing and hugged her………………………….

Ad they got the way to the bike……………

Rahul

But someone also watching this

Thank u anee u messaged me saying that bhai is in office

Bhai doesnot want that pig near to geet

And he doesnot want anyone s drama in front of college

So I alerted misha

But they need to act.

Next day………………

Geet came to mansion,

She is very much exited to see maan,

As she missed

But she managed to do bahana saying that she is missing her rona pari………………………………..

She managed to go to his room,.

Maan is working in laptop to the late night so he slept late.

He is sleeping,……………………………

Geet about to trip on seeing him

Looking lovely and manly in his black vest

Innocent face in sleep……………………

She giggled………………………….

And her heart starting race…………………..

She lookeda t anklets which are making noices……………………….

Maa nn is deep sleep…………………………

Thank god

And she carefully went near to him……….

His ruffled hair is disturbing him

She smiled and started drooling over his handsome face………….

Uffo babaji kya banaya apne

Sach mein,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,sote waqt kadoos nahii dikete

Itna kaam kyon karte hay

She saw Vicky………………………………………….ad dev

Kuch kaam uss idiot Vicky kokyon nahii deta hay

She saw sweeat on his forehead……………………….

She want to touch…………………………………

She touched lightly

Maan stirred in sleep

He listened to some talk but he felt the dream

But open hiseyes to find his dream in fron t of him
but he start to act.

He remembered how she ran away after his cute romantic dance…………………….

He smiled pagal…………………………….

But now she willing came to his room.

So he thought of play long…………………

Continued

 

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