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geet and maan..es upt12/07/2012 last part epi (Page 5)

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Posted: 09 March 2011 at 8:21am | IP Logged
awesome
next time long update...pls

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awsome ...supreb.
love it
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Geet leaves…..

Where maan stands still.

What's wrong with him…………everytime…..he sees her he is lost…………….

But he thinks she will be always cute……………………………

She is different……….

The first girl ever sees doesn't fall for his look…….every girl dream to be in his hands…………………….

But she is different………………………..

Everything…….her smile……..so cute……………………..she is so good..

What the hell why he is thinking of her………………

Girls …..are one who destroyed….

The girl.which destroyed his happiness……………………he hate girls………..and this isfinal………………

He moves in the direction…………………………….

Where he overhears,,,,,,,,,geet smile in anee 's room………….

She is giggling…………

Anee is smiling……..after a long time…anee didn't smile often…she is a serious and weird type of girl…………………………….she always make rules…………….she isdifferent……..she never feels……….enjoying between her friends……….he liked the thing different..bonding what anee shares with geet……….she is really some special…………………..

And then he sees Vicky and dev entering their room…………..

Vicky…………….takes her to….his music room…

Vicky plays guitar well……………

She took the guitar……and she start playing……

Everyone surprised…………..as geet is expert in this…………………

She smiled……..and said she learnt from….his big brother………………

And everyone asked where he is……………..

He is……………………………

Mr abhinav handa…….the elder…of all the handas..and he Is a airforce officer…………………….strict….

And his life Is geet……………………….

Only the person………………which loves geet……………….more than hislife……………..

She smiles……………

As she is the only person…………..she calls veerji………….

Elder of all………………………….

Eldest son.of mohindar………………………….

And rano…………………..

And dev………………….is busy in preparing……………….assignments……he is always studious and shy type guy…………………….

Savitri devi entered into the room..

Where he finds……..anee and vicky dev are at oneside……………………………

She felt happy……some thing is really…………………..great…smiling…..geet in between them…………..she liked in first look.

\ragini called them from………………………breakfast………..

They offered for geet,,

No aunty.itis cute.but bina kanaa….mere cm anee chotimaa………………muje ghar se ek kadam bhi bahar nahii bejegii……………………cm na mujse bahut pyar karthi hay,,,,

Maan comes and joins for the table….

Where geet is still talking……with………………….anee.

She gets a call…

Ohno bm……..

Haa bm……..

Bm:chutki itn subha subha kaha chale gayeee……….hoo….pata hay na…………aaj sham ko pooja..hay………………………….toh jaldi

Aur yeh kya tune chotimaa ka baat nahii manee..chamke dekh ke bhag gayee hoo……………

G:hey bm.relax……

I will take car……………..love u…………….nahii mere pet bhar gayee…………pls aap tension mat lijeyee…..babaje aur mere jodi pehle se bangayee hay.muje unne manee ne kilee pooja karne ke……….jarorat nahii……………………..

Bm:chup kar.chutki..

G:bm gusse mein bahut soni lagthe hoo……..tuje ched ne ka majaa kea lag hay……and she smiles……………………………

She smiles……………………chup kar besharmii……..and she cuts the call..

\geet winks and smiles.waa badimaa..sharmaa rahi.hay………………………….

And she smiles……….

At that time…………………….

A hot sexy girl comes there…….she is NT……………..

Oh chutki………I mean.geet where is ur mom …………..

Is there are not with u………….

Anne and other s keep mute…………………

All others froze………..and they wonders…………………………..

Where with all surprise

Maan looks NT with anger.everyone knows that geet parents are dead……..then why she is saying so toget hurt…………….

Where geet turns and smiles……..

Wow mere babaji ke pass hay….aur kaha hay…ki when ever I smile they watch me……smiling…

And they had given bm and cm………………………..badepapa aur chachu…….hay na……………………………………any ways………..anne lets us move to college……

Aur ha..sorry guys.sham ko hamara party hay na……post pone karna hoga………

Kyonki,,,,,,,bm na,,,,,,,,,,kabhi kabhii……………………..poolan devi ban jaate hay…..wow n babaji se kudh jyada hi darthe hay…………………aur agar mein ne kuch gadbad kii na….woh rona dona shuru karegee…..aur muje naa.rona dona bilkul pasand nahii………….aur haa…..moo pholakar betne wala bhi………

She looks at maan.

\maan gives a angry look………………..

She gives her the cute smile……………………….

His anger turns to pleasant………………………………

As no one notices ……except one person…

Ragini…………..

Maan turns his face…………………………….

An dthe gang leaves…………………………

Accidently bumps with nakul………

Chot nahii lagaa…………….nakul jee………he is in own world…………………………….

She smiles…..

And moves from there.

Where

NT feels bad……..she always want to be special for khurana family.

But somehow………………………….she couldn't.

As she knows …………dev's nature…………………

She is thinking…………………

And she calls her gang…….tasha and sasha…………………………………

Part ends

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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 3:59am | IP Logged
nice update
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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 4:44am | IP Logged
all part are awesome 
loved it 
pls cont soon.
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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 4:46am | IP Logged
Hi Read all the updates, loved your concept. Could you please add me to your PM list
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nice update.
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