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geet and maan..es upt12/07/2012 last part epi (Page 46)

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Who mera favourite bachaa tha

Shekar aur suniana tha

Lekin uske nishaan geet k o chod kar gayee

Geet…

Maan had tears in his eyes………………

She is keeping his father promise to smile

He remembered the words she said when NT asked about her parents…………………

He smiled………………………..

Tu hamesha akudu banke kyon ghumtha hay,

He turned back to look at his angel…………………..making a face at him……………………..

Yeh to mere role hona chaheyee na,,,,seeing stars remembering parents etc………………….

But ur some different piece…….

Yaa I remembered someone is saying that she has more mama and papa..where everyone loves u………………………………

Tum se ek baat poochini thi

She said fumbling

Maan smiled.

Sherni geet handa fumbling words this is new thing

What u always say…………………………..

Yes twist……

Kahani mein twist

Dekho mein tuje sach mei n ek serious issuebaat karne ke liye bulaya……but tum sa b se bada akudu.sadoo aur………………dust danav singh khurana hoo………………..

She stamped foot in anger………………………

And went inside…………………….the party for …………………………..with her friend

Sadoo kamse kam birthday wish kartha……………..

Tum uss sadoo kyon………….

He looked a tmoon.

Badi sonii lagthii hay jab gussa karthe hay.toh

Aur haa yeh  nakraa sirf mere liye the………………..aur kiske liye nahii,……………………………………….

He smiled mischeiviously…….kyon miss han da shararat tu hi kar sakthi hayu

Mein nahii…………….

And all enjoying the party.but geet mood is off…………

Maan smiled…………….

At the end she put a happy smiling face for her family and friends.

At theend the party Is over

Geet had change d her dress

She looked at moon…………..

As soon as she turned she saw shadow her mind alerted.as she about to pounce on the person with hockey stick……

The two strong hands cupped her hands and pinned to the nearest wall.

The moon light on the face geet.open to find the dark brown in tense eyes………drinking the sight in front ………………

The cute pink and white pjs ……………….with hair open the brown hazzle eyes………….looking more pretty in anger

On the other hand the greek body .white and black trousers and shirt…………..two buttons open revailing his chest.

Tum..yeha kya kar rahe hoo.

She looked a tteh time .it is exactly 11 :45

(According to dadajis instructions the party last for 11:00)

Bu t maan came out of thetrance.

Before she pushed away.

There is sound at the door

Chutki yeh awaaz kaise hay………………………it is armaan' s sleepy voice along with choti chichi/

Kuch nahii chotimaa…………………..billi………..

Billi.maan twisted her…

Geet moaned………………………………..

Suddenly chichi……………tut eek to naa….billi….tum yesa awaaz kaise hay

Thesound of cat.meow…………….

She surprised it is from maan………………………………………….

In a cat sound

Tum yeha kya kar rahee…………………..

Tum s e milne ayaa tha

Sochas that um muje danta na katam huwa hoga yaa………………………..cha l raha hay

Wahi dust danav,monster das sar wala ravaan.etc

Geet fumbled how he know

Yes he is right sheis gi ving lot of galis to him………………………..

But she is not expecting him to come but some part of her heart dancing ……………………………

No………I was not thinking about u………………

Liar…………………….

No.

Ok I wait till u accept it.other wise im going to open the door

Open the door what.are u crazy.waht everyone will think.

Oh no.

Dangerous situation………………………………

Oh no………………………

Kya karoon……………………………….

Ok………….im thinking of u and im not angry on u

No not this way………………..smiling cutely………………….normal way.

Hee hee .im thinking of u.and im not angry on u

N o games miss handa his voice is serious………………………………………..

Ok……………im mthinking of u……………………

At that time armaan is verge of break the door…..

Then maan open the door.

All the family members shockedto find maan In geet room

Geet dumbed for a moment

Oh sorry.darji and others

Actually I forgot to tell…….one important message .

In party I messed up with

He looked at geet

Who is dumbstuck.

Well mr avinash message isto take care of geet.

As u know na.even khurana mansion securities are also take care by me……………………….

And there is slight change in securities from today itself.so I came to check in.

As most security to geet sroom so I came personally to check ……………..all in position or not……………..

He gave  a sweet look to geet which is seeing him wide mouth open O………………………..

Sorry to bother u all for the Inconvience.

Its ok.beta we are happy that u take care of our family as ur family…………………….

We appreciate ur thought………………………….

With that they escorted him to car.

Its ok everyone I will manage……………………………

As all one to leave he bend for something

Geet came front to look.

He pulled her to the side wall..

And kissed her cheeks.

And said it is 12 o clock sweetheart happy birthday…………………………………

And walked to car leaving shocked geet…………………………….

 

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