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geet and maan..es upt12/07/2012 last part epi (Page 23)

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They remain sometime in the dark………………………………………………….

He realized that geet really scare of dark ………..and on that day she is not acting

He feels like a 5 yr kid got his favorite candy……………

He smiled

Where geet got irritated…

She is trying her level best to open the door.but it sounds impossible…………………………………

She tired

Where maan looking at her lovingly……………….

On the other ha nd.

Shourya came and see mahi………………confused……………..

Tum yeha.

Haa mein toh soha m and pari ke saath bahar jaane wali tha…..lekin

Its ok im just looking for angel……………….we thought of moving out.

Angel……

Sourya.looked at her…

She is my angel.my best friend……………………

And they sat each other………………..

They talked…………..

Sourya said…………………….

Mahi I need to say something.

Im the only son of mom and dad.

And my grandfather is the raja..left all the property on my name.

Being the only son.i always sourrounded by guards and people……………so I never allowed to talk to anyone

I used to see all my friends …………………….playing and running……………..around where I cannot .
I cannot eat my food……………………..

I cannot play andfly like my friends.

After some time we are shifted to Shimla……

One day.i m just alone watching the playing of my fellow mates

I saw group of cars.came there

In that a very old 12 yr old boy got down

He is sourrounded with two other boys

In tehm in saw group of girls.

In them I saw a three girls.

But the 12 yr concentration is only on…………………the car

I just looked at the car.

The car open to find  alittle girl of 4 yrs years

She is wearing a  white frok…………looking like a princess from the heaven.

The boy lifted her and took her to the court……………..

All the girls and boys sourrounded the boy and girl.they start playing……………………………

And the girl miss the goalbut the boy came made the goal.

She laughed.

Her smile is wonderful. I forgot all the pain and worry……………………..seeing the little girl.

Everyone I used to watch her from the distance.

Suddenly.one day after my school///////im waiting for my people.then I saw her

With a little chocolate nibbling and another chocolate in her hand………………………………….

She is looking  at me.

And she came

And ask who are u…………………………………in baby language……………………….

Im sourya…….the prince

But u look dimboo…with ur spects.

I saw her.she is indeed angel….the lovely hazzle beautiful eyes………………………………the cute smile…………………………………..

Aur tum……………………

Meingeet.

Just then our people came and try to shove her away

The big boy ccame along with some people

Our people shocked looking at the people………

After some days I came to know that they are handa more wealthier and powerful them ours

But I called u angel.

And u will be my best friend always

I don't want people to say anything against my angel.then I will turn this world ups and side down.

Mahi looked at them

No need to tell any thing toi ne sourya because I like ur friendship………………………………..when I saw u both…………………….

People like u found very rare

Everyone want to me change…………………………..but if I change then I will loose my sanity which is my strong support and strength that is the reason.everyonne maintains a distance from me.but I love my moma and I cannot disappoint her………………

I came to know ntaht she is best friend of your mama……………………………

That is the reason I want to talk to u

The alliance and all……….

He really impressed by mahio……she is not the type of the girl which fall for him with in minutes…….and not the show off typesl…..\even though she looks rough she is soft inside.

Don't't worry mahi I will not force u for any thing……………..so relax

I don't understand….why angel didn'trang to me

Ohb my god……..i think she done it purpose to arrange a meeting bet us………………..

U knowshe is truly monster….

I will just ………………………………find her………………………

She smiled and gave nhim a sweet look…………………………………………..and plea.

They smile each other.

On the other hand.

Geet is feeling sleepy………..and she is drossing……and her head is about to toucn the board……………..where is wshe is a twall.

Maan came slowly toward sher……

And put her head on his shoulder……………………..

She  felt .something soft and hard and slept peacefully…………………………………

Where maan cannot sleep peacefully.

Suddenly he saw a number………………….

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