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geet and maan..es upt12/07/2012 last part epi (Page 15)

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All are danced…………………

Ragini comes and put…………..a kala teeka near the ear

Sach beta kitna ache dance karthe ho.

Aur hum sab ko bhi……………….dance karadiya

Tak gayee hay hum

Yeh toh hay  chutke ka kamala

But she felt his eyes on her

Everytime she move

What 's wrong with khadoos singh khurana……………………..

Yesa kyon dekh rahe hay muje

But maan is seeing her

Slim waist

Her beautiful white body

Slim curves……………………………

Hazzle eyes

Beautiful kissable lips

Want to kiss her to the eternity

So on on

Ragini observed this from…………………….a distance

The glow on his face whenever he sees geet…………….

His smile is not un-noticed by her…………………….

She smiled.seeing him happy

He is not a person who can accept feelings easily……………………….

And then the function started.

And ……………………

Soham slipped ring on pari 's finger

Pari blushed……..

Oye didi..baad mein phursat mein………………….blush karna…pehle ring toh pehnalo.

Chutki chup……………..

Bm……….

Kaha na chup.shaitaan karika..

Where all laughed.

Yeh chup hi toh ache hay

Armaan said in anger.

Kiske mazaal hay joo meri gudiya ko chup karene ke

A stong male .authorised voice………………………answered back

Everyone turned to see the person

He is the most handsome person………………..

Veerji.

Geet screamed

And rushed into his arms

Just like a little baby runs to her father..

He engulfed into his strong arms…………………

He is avinash handa…………………..

The elder of handa family.

He introduced to all.

Everyone praised him………..

And girls drooled over him………………….

He came by giving geet side hug……………..and……………..came to darji and bend to his feet,

He hugged pari and congratulated ……..soham………..

And smacked armaan.

Tum mere gudiya ,,,mere princess………….ko chup karne ke liye bol rahe hoo.

How dare u.

No vadde veerji.mein toh yese mazaak……………………………….

Gudiya.kya kare iska.

He asked putting hands on geet's shoulder

Isse baad mein dekhenge veerji…………………………………….

Just then party is over..

They all left for home…..

Next day morning……………………………….

Maan open his eyes.to find her smiling……………uffo

Yeh ladki………..muje pagal kardegi……………………….

Just then he noticed something near bed.

It was her jhumka……………………………..

He smiled.

Who nahii hay par tum ho toh sahi..

With that he ready for collage.

He got a call

Sir I got the information………………………

Yes who.

I don't know the person but he is the underworld don's some relative is studying in the same college…….

But and information regarding some secret mission………………………….

He enter  to the college

To find anivash is talking to someone

His face is backwards.

Sir ur supposed to come after 2 weeks an

Yes prithvi.but I need to come.

After ur information……..

U and me well know that it is not a accident……………….how dare anyone come near to my gudiya………………..

Privthi…..i want best officers…………….for her safety……………………………….

No mistake this time pritvi……………….

I cannot afford to loose her….

And haa pritvi………even check all her friends……………….and the people envying her ……………………………………..

U know her ..she trust everyone easily

Innocence and nave………..and good at heart.

May be do lot of mischief but never hurts anyone……………………………

And she is my life pritvi takecare of her……………..

I know she hates security ……………….and she wants to be a free from all.

But I can't let her to that.

Take care…………………………

Ok…..

Ok sir……………………..

And one more thing ………………………….pritvi…………………….

Pls don't let her know about u…………………..

U need to be undercover………..

Don't worry..sir………..

Everything under control…….

Good…….

Maan looked at them.

Geet ko kisse itna katraa.hay

Aur…………………………

Just then he saw geet is walking with her friends………………..

His heart skipped a bit to find…………

Geet.

She is wearing green color knee length top …………….

Looking gorgeous……………………………….

How can be so wonderful………………..

With in a minute she is In library

Hello sir..im going to do project on ancient sculptures for my social project……can u guide me where ar e the old books store……………………

He showed the direction………….

She is checking all the books…………….

She looked at the old book.it is full of dust.as she above to remove……..a journal fall from it

It is college old…………journal………………………

She looked at the pictures

Find a person with a  trophe………………..

It was bike race champion ship

Her eyes popped up.to see the face

Maan singh khurana on bike…………………………….

And a gossip magazine he with a college…………..

Yeh who is she

She is sameera kapoor………………………

She smiled………………………..

And the news

The new mms for the hot couple at the hotel xxx…………

And xxx……..

After that they broke up………………

mms.aur ksk……………………….

She laughed………………………………..

But where is mms………………………….

I need to find out.andonce I got it.

Mr ksk.u will be regret for messing up with gh…………………..

She flicked her hair………………………………….

 

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loved the update...
maan has fallen fr her...
but geet?
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Lekin iss mms ke baaremein kisis ki pass information hona hay

Anee…….

No ways.

With that …………..

She came from the library.

But she thought.

No geet ho saktha hay.usne tere saath teek nahii hay.lekin yeeh uska personal matter hay………………lekin iss mein uske badnami hogii………………………

Just then maan sees the journal in her hands…………………….

He feels bad.

Lagtha hay yeh phir se saitiaani par tule huwee.

I need todo something………………………….

Geet.then called a number……………..

The number……………….

Is ayush.

Yeh ayush……I need to find some information……..

Regarding some mms.

Geet ar e u crazy………………………..mms.geet handa.

Oh shut up.agar jyada bhole naa………..dekho seedi seedi mere madad karoo…warna too bank accounts open kartha

hay…………wrong tareek se…………………….then……..police tumara kya haal karegee…………………..phir……….

Are babaa………….pls muje batadoo.kis ki bareemin information doond ni………….

Dekho hamare college.

She said all the details………….

And after that lot of information she given to him.

And she return to the home………………………..

She saw him.lost in the thoughts……………..

Sadoo kareeka….hamesha……………….akele mein ghoomtha hay……………

Next morning.she went to km……………

His room………………

His fragnance……

Baat kya hay sadoo ka……………lekin strong ascent hay……………………..muscle………..sussle……….

She laughed……………………….

At that time…anee and she busy on chatting.

Just then she got sms…………………..

It information………….

And she runs I nto the room.and opens her mail box.

She shocked to find.the information.

Next day party at the km…

As she is getting ready.

A slight push……………………..

And she is pinned to the wall…………….

She looked into the strong intense eyes….watching her in anger.

What 's wrong with u miss handa……why are u after me…………….i know im rude with u that means ur going to play with my life..how dare u interfere in my life…………..why……………

Look………im pertaining u because of my bro.as we are relatives………..that's it………………….if u again interfere then no one can stop me………..nor even ur darling family.rightdo something ……..which Is less information.

Her hand is hurting with his grip.tears are in beautiful eyes…………………….not stopping…

But she realizes…………herself.and rans from there……….

And the party is over…………………………..

Just then sasha smiles for her plan.

So miss handa.

I saw journal in your hand….

And I inform maan.that ur going to publish this article in latest gossip magazine…………….

Because I know ur working with latika……………..news magazine member,

May be ur talking different.but I made the plot that ur exactly talking about maan.

So my plan worked.

Now maan hate u like anything………….and u will pay for insult at me….darling………..

She smiled mischeviously……………………….

Geet is sobbing………………….

She is crying.never in her life anyone hurt like her………………

Just then…………………

Annee came and hug her.

What's wrong with u

Nothing…………

There is something is going on..i didn't see u crying…then why ur crying.

Nothing …………..anee…..

Please just leave me alone……..

Just then she heard…………..sasha and group talking

Finally that stupid handa had payback my revenge,

Now maan will hate her……………………

She had faced the strong maan singh khurana's anger.i know it he even insulted her………………………..

That the thing I planned………………..

Today im happy…

Maan bhai had insulted geet.but why………………………….

She went to maan's room directly.

Maan looked at anee…………….

Maan bhai I need to talk to u………….

No anee im In bad mood……………….

 Anee Oh ya………..why u insulted geet……………..

 Maan:It is none of the business…u know she annoyed me………………

Anee I need answers bhai

Maan:anee she wanted to made fun of me of with that stupid cd…………..

Anee:do u know what is in cd…

Maan:yes that mms.

Anee:no bhai even there is something in that cd she doesn't even dare to do so…………………….because she knows the truth

Maan:truth

Anee:yes bhai the truth u me and arjun knows that…………….

Maan:what kind of rubbish is this how can arjun knows all these

Anee:yes bhai…that day I heard all the conversation between u and arjun………and even the promise made by arjun………………………

Maan:shocked….

FB:yes maan.please save her on that contra.im going to marry……anee………

Maan:arjun.but u know .this is against my principles.

Arjun:I know but if it….comes out.then my family has only one option to commit suicide……………

Maan:But this leads to the reputation of khuranas family

And im the elder….so this lead to…………my insult and reputation………………..

Arjun:I know but it will be less when compared to ours…………….

Don't think.i will promise that I will always keep anee happy…….and what ever happens I will always love her.and be with her………………………………….

Maan: ok.. I will do…………………..

But one thing arjun im not want sameera in my life make sure she Is away from me.i don't want her in my life.

Arjun:don't worry maan im going to take to London……………….and we are not returning back…………………..

Only I will come……………for anee marriage……………………….

Maan:ok……………..

And one more thing………….please this to be with us…………..and no one is going to share to any one

With that the FB ends………………….

He looks at anee

Anee:bhai kal raat geet mujse mil n eke liye aye hay.mujse saari sachaii.jaane ke liye.jab usne saari sachii sun lee usne kaha hay………….ke hamne galati ki.hame kam se kam sachii ghar mein sab ko inform karni chahee hay………

 

FB:anee and geet:

Geet enter anee room.and show her the cd……………

FB:anee..bhai ghar ka sab ka favourite tha..pehle bachaa tha isliye ghar mein sab unee sab se jyada pyarr karthe the.kaas kar ke dadaji.aur dadi….dadi toh unke best friend hay……………….har baat unse share karthe they……………..

College mein happening dude tha……………………….

He used to be favourite………….

Rathod family hamere bahut ache family friends hay

Unka do betiyaan aur ek hi beta hay

Pehle beti hay sameera………………

Bahut sundar hay……………….

Bhai aur sameera ek hi college mein padthe they…………………………..

Hot and happening couple hay

Ghar mein bhi sab unke shaadi ke baaremein soch rahe ethi,

Doosri beti.nainatara……..jo dev bhai ke girl friend hay

Aur arjun………………mera………………….

Ghar mein sab ne decide kiya tha.ke maan aur sameera ke engagement announce.kar ne wale thee…………

Usse mein sab log khushiya manane ke liye…………………….hotel.mein ek bahut bade…….party de rahe hay……………..

Us din khusi mein maan bhai ne kuch jyada piyaa hay………………………

Us mein.jab who room poucha too unno ne sameera ki saath………………..apne best friend rahul garewal ko ek saath uss hotel room mein….dekh liyaa tha……………

Lekin pat anahii.agle din.uss news………………..TV channels.aur kisi bhi tarah………mms mein agaya hay………….

Uss din…………….uss room mein…………….sirf maan bhai aur sameera hay………..isliye sab ko laga hay.ke ohh mms maan bhai aur sameera ki lekin asliyat mein who.rahul aur sameera ki hay.

Yeh kabar se.

Ghar mein sab ko………………….shock laga.hay maan bhai ne sab ke samne apne galati sweekar kii…is ke wajah se dadaji ko heart attack ayaa.aur kuch  mahiino mein who hame chod kar chale gayee.hay………………

Sab ko lagtha hay ke galatii maan bhai ne ki………..

Dadaji akari baar sirf maan bhai se mile thi.unno ne confirm kiya ki unka bada pota……….ne koi galati nahii kiya

Aur wada liya hay ke chahe kuch bhi hojayee.woh kabibhi ghar chod kar nahii jayagaa……………………………

Geet shocks…………

And she also explains the convo between maan and arjun……………………

And arjun's promise……………………………..

Geet felt bad for him…………………..

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loved the update...
oh thats the truth abt maan and sam...
now maan will realize his mistake...
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