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ff carnival of love-(abhiya)(updated) (Page 9)

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Posted: 25 January 2011 at 12:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by koyal-kajal

loved it ... update soon and pm me as i said pls
abhay piya zindabadSmile

yep abhiya zindabadSmileLOL

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 8:57am | IP Logged
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Posted: 01 February 2011 at 2:08am | IP Logged
hello shello to all my lovely frnds
i asmi m bck wid my updateSmile
                    SLOW UNFOLD
misha n piya aftr cmin bck frm college freshen up n piya decides to take a walk n come she tell mishe dat she will cm bck before 9 n misha says fine but misha was actually thinkin abt 150 ways to gv n xcuse 4r not bcoming arjuns assistant
   maan n geet r silent as maan is driving so geet frst spoke to to brk dat eerie silence hmmmmmmm well hw com u r here maan replied-for sm business matter n as dadi is ill so i will be stayin wid her until she recovers geet said-oh i hopoe a speedy recovery then a chat a lil n geet dosent realise at all dat dey had already reached home maan stops his car n hlps geet to get out of da car geet winces in pain maan said-wht happened geet replied -oh my leg maan hlps n tks her inside geet 's mom opens da door n shocked to see maan again but asks her to cm in but he refuses and says nw we r neibours again so ill com tomorow to see wether geet is f9 n goes
piya tking a leisurely wlk din notice da time but whn she saw da watch she jumped in shck it was 9 n she said she wuld reach home .she was in dilemma wether to tk da lng way or da jungle way so she chose da 2nd as it was shrtcut n she wuld reach home quickly.
piya had tken jungle way numerous times n she din fear da way but tday she felt n eeries a stillness which gave chill to her spine she had hrd many tales abt da mid jungle no one went der tday she suddenly thot of xploring da mid jungle-THE JUNGLE OF DA LIVING DEAD
piya walked twards da mid jungle but stopped as he felt a fgr pass by her throat became dry she stred walking again n dis time male voice called him -piya stop!
panic strted n piya strted running she ran as fast she culd but he was faster he caught hold of her hand n turned her around so dat she culd face him n covered her mouth wid his palm so dat she wuldnt shout piays eyes widened but slowly it relaxed as da face came into light.it was abhay
he slowly released her frm his grip n fr a moment da silence of da jungle prevailed abhays eyes fell on piyas those deep brown eyes relaxed n xpressed infinte emotions den slowly it came down to those inviting lips he had sudden feeling to posses her to tk her in his arms but he jrked himslf n remined who he was n tore his gaze frm hers n said in a stern voice-r u out of ur mind ?do evn knw u wuld hv breathed ur last brth if i din com on time?piya was bewilred on hearing dis abhay said nw plzz cm wid me so dat i can drop u home.
they walked in silence abhay walked ahead n piya like n obidient child followed suddenly she cried ouch ! abhay turned bck instantly n he saw a thorn had pricked piya feet n BLOOD WAS CMIN OUT
precap-arjun growled at abhay n said we hv spcl qualities did u 4rget dat?n i can see da future which will be trblsm fr u due to dat girl piya...........
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Posted: 01 February 2011 at 2:38am | IP Logged
awsome one yaar...loved it 
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Posted: 01 February 2011 at 2:42am | IP Logged

Nice one dear
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Posted: 01 February 2011 at 2:42am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mrk_1

awsome one yaar...loved it 
thnx dear atleast u commentedSmileit feels gud
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Posted: 01 February 2011 at 2:43am | IP Logged
very niceClap loved it...Big smile pls update soon n thanks for d pmSmile
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Posted: 01 February 2011 at 2:43am | IP Logged
Originally posted by gurtilover


Nice one dear
thnx

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