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ff carnival of love-(abhiya)(updated) (Page 17)

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Posted: 06 February 2011 at 2:54am | IP Logged
i loved it ....it made this boring sunday so awesome
 i start dreaming whenever i read your ff it sounds like it is actually happening do continue soon

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Posted: 06 February 2011 at 2:57am | IP Logged
Originally posted by koyal-kajal

i loved it ....it made this boring sunday so awesome
 i start dreaming whenever i read your ff it sounds like it is actually happening do continue soon
thnk u sooooooooooooooooooooooo much fr da complimentBig smile
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Posted: 10 February 2011 at 12:43am | IP Logged
awww
soo sweet and cute ff
i loved it loved it just loved itThumbs Up
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u write so well.....i really liked your style of writing
plzz continue soon and do never forget to pm me

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Posted: 10 February 2011 at 12:44am | IP Logged
Originally posted by blossom1234

awww
soo sweet and cute ff
i loved it loved it just loved itThumbs Up
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u write so well.....i really liked your style of writing
plzz continue soon and do never forget to pm me
i will not Big smilethnx fr da compliment i m flatteredSmile

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Posted: 12 February 2011 at 2:38am | IP Logged
  hi frndzSmileso without wastin nymore timez heres my update.........
                     LOVE IN THE AIR
Piya was unabl to 4rget da incident n abhay as well,only one thot was pondering in her mind n dat was hw did abhay cm to knw who was der n she culd hv died?n who were dey ?
seein piya dazed in thot mish din interrupt n went to sleep but she was unable to sleep as well,piya was restless n so was abhays situation misha n arjun culdnt figure out wht was actually happening to them,maan culd frget geets face n geet was afraid dat she will agn fall in love but fate smiled to itslf as it had already strted da carnival of love.
 
Nxt day geet got up erly as she knew maan was goin to cm and as soon as she came downstairs she saw maan cming twards her ,she gave butiful smile n maan also reciprocated it
maan-geet r u okay?n feeling better
geet-yep but can u plz gv me lift to my collage
maan-yeah fr sure?
geet n maan walked towrds the car n went to geets collage
whn dey arrived geet culdnt open da car door so she tried to open with all her strength n wht resulted was da lock broke maan became furious
maan-look wht hv u done u knw da name i gave u b4 was absolutely correct u r a jungli billi
geet flared up
geet-xcuse me i think u din change at all u shuld be called dusht danav
geet got out of her car n strode awy maan so her goin n with n angry mood zoomed is car awy,misha so evrythin as she was waitin near da collage gate fr geet she gave a rueful smile nn said
misha-so was dat ur lover
geet got ngry
geet-oh plzz he is not he is a dusht danav
misha-wht?dusht danav?
she strted laughing
misha-alr8 nw calm down babes n lets go
da two frnds headed towards drama club
 
meanwhile piya saw abhay sittin alone in da classroom n thot of askin da coz fr sittin alone she opened da door n wnt to him
abhay-nw wht ?
piya-i wnted to ask y r u sittin alone
abhay was quiet then said
abahy-i dun want to ans ny ouestion of urs
piya-but hw did u knw last n8 hu were der in mid jungle?i dun think they were animals n hw did u cm to knw i wuld die if i had gone der?
abahy looked up n agn looking outsaid said
abhay-think whtevr u wnt to think i will not ans ny ouest of urs so nw jus go
piya din find it gud to stay der so she went awy
 
in da drama club evry1 went n was seated arjun came in n called misha n she went to him
arjun-so my darling hv i brought wht i said?
misha fumed n said
misha-frst of all sir i m not 'ur darling'n yes i hv brougt but nt 'as you like it' but 'romeo juliet'
arjun shot up his eyebrows n said
arjun-i think u were my assistant but yes u hv chosen a gud play
misha gave a grin n then da audition fr da characters strted nd piya was chosen as juliet but none of da boys culd play romeos part
so piya thot of abhay n went n called him he vcame n arjun too found his lil bro to be apt fr da role
 
da collage finished but misha n geet had to wait bck fr sm wrk n hlp arjun
misha-piya u hv to go home alone
piya-but i cant drive
dat moment abhay came n offered to gv piya lift to her house piya once more thanked abhay n they went
in da car piya so lot of cd collections n curiously asked
piya-u love muzic
abhay-yeah i m music freak u can say
piya-me too so wht collection do u hv?
abhay-lots but i love hindi songs more dan english
piya-oh me too
dis conversation went fr long n then abhay said
abhay-we  hv reached ur place
piya got out n said
piya-thnx n see ya
abhay watched her go n said to himslf 'bye piya'
 
precap-preperation fr da concert n lot of romance
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this my last update b4 my board exams sry fr da inconvinienceTongue
wid loadz of love
frm asmiSmile
                                  
                                  
                                                                                       
 
 
 
 
     
 
  
   
 
 
 
 
  
 
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Edited by ASMI95 - 12 February 2011 at 2:46am

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Posted: 12 February 2011 at 2:54am | IP Logged
beautiful update .....but cant wait till the next but i understand examssssssssAngry i have them too

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Posted: 12 February 2011 at 2:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by koyal-kajal

beautiful update .....but cant wait till the next but i understand examssssssssAngry i have them too
yeah n this is board exams so hv to take it seriously n thnxSmile
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Posted: 12 February 2011 at 3:05am | IP Logged
nics ff keep it up.gre8 jobClap

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