Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee


Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

OS: The Camera Blunder (Page 5)

-Mrinalini- IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 03 February 2011 at 12:50pm | IP Logged
Fantastic!!! Pls PM me!!!!!

sejal1986 Senior Member

Joined: 08 December 2010
Posts: 405

Posted: 16 February 2011 at 5:08pm | IP Logged
More and more I read your different OS, I feel like I want to see all these scenes on screen, please you should join CVs and I m sure you would prove yourself better. Please go for it. I swear if it is in my hand, I would have changes CVs.
sldeeps IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 16 February 2011 at 10:40pm | IP Logged
*She was his wax doll. He could mould her in any way he    wanted.
*And she loved it that way.
*The only thing that mattered to her was that he was  there.
*She did not have to think of right and wrong, when he made a decision.

*He had thought of teasing her, but looked like he was going to be the one unable to sleep that night.
*He wasn't sure what was driving him crazier.
*That she was so beautiful and desirable or the innocence and infinite trust with which she was ready to do everything he asked of her?

u killed me with these lines Embarrassed

love ur OS for these lines Star

these lines depict the perfect understanding, trust and relationship between MAANEET

u have represented true MAANEET in ur ur OS for not changing their charcterization a bit Smile
spvd IF-Addictz

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Posted: 26 February 2011 at 12:54am | IP Logged
wow so lovely...............
RageOfAnAngel IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 05 March 2011 at 8:45am | IP Logged
Really Loved It ! The concept was really sweetEmbarrassed
Mina_T Senior Member

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Posted: 01 April 2011 at 10:36pm | IP Logged
great fic!!!
Eccentric.Being IF-Rockerz

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LD-Radha IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 02 April 2011 at 10:29am | IP Logged
That was're such an amazing writer Smile

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