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OS: The Camera Blunder (Page 3)

najch Senior Member
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Posted: 16 January 2011 at 12:12am | IP Logged
Very beautifully written Big smile, but the only thing i didn't like was Maan being portrayed Godlike. 

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Posted: 16 January 2011 at 1:38am | IP Logged
u know i always had thoughts of wat if geet ever 4get that the camera is in her room.........lol...i wonder wat wud maan have done had she changed fully..ROFL
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namitasin Senior Member
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Posted: 16 January 2011 at 4:58am | IP Logged
Too good u did it again just amazing not only this one but all os are great hope we culd see smthing like that in serial too.thanks for writing such an awsome OS.
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Posted: 16 January 2011 at 11:28am | IP Logged
you write very gud and ur style is really romantic which is my favorite and add to that Maaneet it gives a perfect mix!!!
read all of your fics at a go and liked the sazaa fic the most!!!
do write more and great going...keep it up dear!!!
swaram Goldie
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Posted: 16 January 2011 at 12:03pm | IP Logged
Written very beautifully! Very romantic.Why can't the CV's think o f such scenes? Anyway, I could imagine the whole scene and satisfy myself. Keep writing more.Smile
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Posted: 17 January 2011 at 12:53am | IP Logged
nice one sharmishtha....... ... all ur others OS are also lovely... the writing makes it seem very sensible & lively... to belive ........ way to go dear.........
-afsha- IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 17 January 2011 at 11:30am | IP Logged
Sweet romantic OS
Loved how she trusted him
Maan n his teasing nature
It was really fab

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