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FF (M&G):Lethal Attraction(2)-[FINAL Pg.64] (Page 40)

mrs.msk IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 11 February 2011 at 7:02pm | IP Logged
Hey guys: Here is the next usual...criticizm and/or comments are welcomed...
Chapter 33
Killer past:
He stares at the wall...he sees her eyes looking at him with anger when he was little...
Boy: I I I didn't do anything...
Women: You are a burden...look at yourself...if you die no one will miss you...(stares at him with anger and hatred filled eyes)
Boy: I am so soo sorry....(looks down)
Girl: Look at the mess he made...ewww
Women: Go in that room and don't show me your face...(he quietly goes in his room..he sits down and stares out at the window)
Boy: no one loves me...I hate both of them..I hate this place...I hate everything...
The next day Maan arrived at the crime scene...Neha and everyone else were already there...he goes near the body and see the body of a girl with masked face just like every other murder...
Maan: Adi who is the girl?

Adi: Her name is Anjali..we don't know anything more besides her house address...we have to talk to her parents

Maan: hmm she is so young though...hmm something seems to be off about this murder

Adi: Like what?

Maan: It looks like her body was placed here and there are a lot of struggle marks around her body unlike other girls that we found

Neha: You are right that means the killer acted on impulse...he couldn't resist...

Maan: looks like our killer made his first mistake...

Adi: hmm that's a good news...who is going to talk to girls parents?

Neha: I will go

Adi: I guess I will go with you..Maan you look tired...did you get enough sleep last night?

Maan (looked at Adi shocked..he remembered Geet's surprise last night) umm yeah just was up all night thinking about the case...

Adi: hmm in that case it is better if you stay here and help Rahul and Sasha...

Maan: Alright...let me know what happens...ohh one more thing Neha

Neha: Yeah..

Maan: Adi told me that you are really good at fighting...

Neha (looks at Adi): of course Adi saw me in action

Maan: Than you mind teaching Adi some moves...he was complaining that he doesn't know anything for self-defence

Adi (embarrassed): umm Neha let's go..he is joking...(They both left while Maan stayed back looking for some kind of clues)
Adi and Neha at Anjali's house:
Neha (knocks on the door...a women opens the door): umm my name is Neha from CID and this is Adi he is the head of the police station..

Adi: Nice to meet you...we are here to talk you guys about Anjali...

Women (crying): Please come in (they both went in) did you guys find the killer?

Neha: No not yet..that is why we are here to talk to you....we want to know where was Anjali last night? (Women breaks down in her husbands arm)

Anjali dad: I am can see we are going though a lot she was our oldest daughter..

Adi: We will catch the there anyone that we can speak too? Prehaps if you have another duaghter or son.

Anjali dad: you could probably talk to our another daughter Nisha..she is upstairs

Neha: Thank you...(they both went upstairs to Nisha's room) Nisha hi we are from the police..we want to talk to you about your sister...

Nisha (crying): about what?

Neha: Listen if you want to help us catch the person..could you tell us anything that your sister told you as a secret.. (Nisha hesitates)

Nisha: Anjali told me not to tell mom and dad about it..

Adi: Nisha if it is important we need to know...please tell us...

Nisha: Ok...she told me that she was going to a beach party with her friends and Anjali didi lied to mom and dad saying she is sleeping over at her friends house

Neha: Thank you Nisha..that was more than enough...(they both leave the place)

Adi (outside of the house): How did you know that Nisha might have some news?

Neha: because even my sister and I used to share everything with each other that we don't want our parents to know about..

Adi: hmm intersting...well than lets go back to the beach I think we might find more clues over there...
At the beach:
Maan looks around...he notices some homes right across from the beach...there were some empty beer bottles and bonfire... "kids and their parties" he shakes his head and looks around the area for something else....soon his thoughts were distracted by Rahul
Rahul: Damn looks like some kids had fun last night

Maan: yeah looks like it...I want all of these bagged up and taken to the lab

Rahul: Are you serious?

Maan: of them have to give us some clues...

Rahul: Yes sir....(he gives him salute and walks off...Maan walks over to the far end of the beach to catch a breath...he looks at the ground and notices a bush with branches broken...he goes near the bush and notices some footprints and some blood....he quickly puts on his gloves and calls Sasha and Rahul over)

Maan: Looks like this is the place where the girl was this area for any clues..(he bends down and picks up a bottle) Sasha I want these bottle to be examined and Rahul go to the lab and get me the results ASAP

Sasha: Yes Sir (Both of them left as per Maan's instructions...Maan stayed back looking for some other clues...Adi and Neha met up with Maan at the beach...
Maan: Hey did you guys find anything from the parents?

Adi: Yeah it seems like Anjali had lied to her parents saying that she is sleeping over at her friends house while she was here partying with her friends...

Maan: hmm that makes sense then...we found some clues here as seems like Anjali was killed here in this spot..we also found some bottle that might be crucial to this case...(He looked at the houses near the beach...)

Neha (looked at Maan): What happend Maan?

Maan: I have a hunch that killer might live here somewhere...maybe in one of those houses... There was a party here last night so that means that the killer must've seen the party and when he saw Anjali he couldn't resist...he might've saw her coming here talking on the phone so her parents don't hear the loud music in the background and killed her while everyone was busy in their own world

Neha: You might be right...

Adi: Let's go and check out the houses team...we are like three amigos (Both Maan and Neha looked at him confused as Adi walked ahead)

Precap: Killers house
Geet and Neha meet!

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maaneetkimeet Goldie

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Posted: 11 February 2011 at 7:15pm | IP Logged
lovely update 
bhanu_rekhag IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 11 February 2011 at 7:20pm | IP Logged
nice update

Edited by bhanu_rekhag - 11 February 2011 at 7:35pm
mitzi11 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 11 February 2011 at 7:37pm | IP Logged
awesome update
pls cont soonnnnnnnn
maankigeet4ever IF-Rockerz

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Posts: 6440

Posted: 11 February 2011 at 7:39pm | IP Logged
hmmm...the case is getting interesting,,,i wanna know abt the killer's past....missed maaneet in ur update but no complaints...thanks for the double update :)
shah10 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 11 February 2011 at 7:44pm | IP Logged
amazing update.
maanmeet1 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 11 February 2011 at 7:51pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by mrs.msk

Originally posted by maanmeet1

pls add me to ur PM list.....superb story n can d killer b a gal???? i mean pari?? dont knw.........have u ever watched criminal minds????? m sure u will love it........
the killer will be reaveled slowly
when I update next killer's past will be revaled but not all of it...little by little as Maan and Neha finds clues about him..his past will be more clear to you guys....
Criminal minds?? hmm I have heard about the show..but I don't think I ever watched it..I will def. check up on it..I love watching these type of shows LOLLOLLOL
currenly, I follwo up on bones..damn good show LOL
and of course CID

even i love dis kind of shows........i dont watch CID
CRIMINAL MINDS(dis is FBI's behavioral analyst unit just wht neha is doing....profiling killers)

u will love it...........u can watch it on
--Zehnaseeb-- IF-Stunnerz

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Posts: 25457

Posted: 11 February 2011 at 7:53pm | IP Logged
Its interesting. Plz continue soon.

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