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SGP Poetry Time: Ishaan agar kavi hota to? (Page 2)

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Posted: 14 January 2011 at 3:06pm | IP Logged
v nice one venture...ishaan aur suhana ne hume shayar bana diya hai ! seriously do you write outside SGP or you dont ?

I do think that har baat bolna aasan nahi hota but at the same time bolna bhi jaroori hota hai !

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Posted: 14 January 2011 at 5:24pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by poshah

v nice one venture...ishaan aur suhana ne hume shayar bana diya hai ! seriously do you write outside SGP or you dont ?

I do think that har baat bolna aasan nahi hota but at the same time bolna bhi jaroori hota hai !

Yes, I use to write short stories and poems, nothing big , never got published or anything. Helped me a lot during my teaching career of 1-5 year old children, stories in an instant!!!! so they always loved it, my children were the same, bed time stoies were always made there and then !!!!! I love poetry of subcontinent, they are close to my heart.

Khena tum jo chahatay ho,
woh dhadkan meri janti hai
teri har nazar mai hai pyar chuppa
meri nazar issay phechanti hai
toh kahay kabhi kay ya naa kahay
teri har dua mujhay maangti hai
Ab khena sunna aur hai kiya
tumahy payar sirf mujhee say hai
Teri Dhadkan jo mujh say jo kheti hai
ab toh sari dunya he ye janti hai


Edited by venture - 14 January 2011 at 5:25pm

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Posted: 14 January 2011 at 8:58pm | IP Logged
Wao.. nice poems.. Thumbs Up
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Posted: 15 January 2011 at 2:45am | IP Logged
jawab haasir hai

Meri har dhadkan tumhare pyaar ko mahsoos kar sakti hai
Ankhen tumhare  unkahe shabdon ko padh sakti hai
Dil tumhare unkahe jazbaat sun sakta hai
Magar fir bhi aaj, man woh baat sunne ko bekrar hai
Mehsoos karna chahti hoon Saanson ka tej hona
Mehsoos karna chahti hoon Chehre kaa surkh hona
Aaj tumse nazre milakar tumhare dil ki baatein sunna chahti hoon
Sunna chahte hoon woh saare un kahe jazbaat
Taki apne dil ko samjha sakoon ki yeh koi galat fahmi nahi hai
Haqeeqat hai, khwab nahi
Haqeeqat hai, mere dil ki nadani nahi
Sunkar khud par ithlana chahti hoon
Sunna chahte hoon woh saare sapney jo tumne dekhe hai

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Posted: 15 January 2011 at 3:58am | IP Logged
Poshah beautifully wrtten, good choice of words , excellent as we say . wah wah, mukarrar mukarrar ( repeat , repeat)

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Posted: 15 January 2011 at 4:44am | IP Logged
Originally posted by poshah

jawab haasir hai

Meri har dhadkan tumhare pyaar ko mahsoos kar sakti hai
Ankhen tumhare  unkahe shabdon ko padh sakti hai
Dil tumhare unkahe jazbaat sun sakta hai
Magar fir bhi aaj, man woh baat sunne ko bekrar hai
Mehsoos karna chahti hoon Saanson ka tej hona
Mehsoos karna chahti hoon Chehre kaa surkh hona
Aaj tumse nazre milakar tumhare dil ki baatein sunna chahti hoon
Sunna chahte hoon woh saare un kahe jazbaat
Taki apne dil ko samjha sakoon ki yeh koi galat fahmi nahi hai
Haqeeqat hai, khwab nahi
Haqeeqat hai, mere dil ki nadani nahi
Sunkar khud par ithlana chahti hoon
Sunna chahte hoon woh saare sapney jo tumne dekhe hai




ClapClapClapClap nice poem... meaningful lively lines. well done dear...
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Posted: 15 January 2011 at 5:07am | IP Logged
guys am in full on shayari mode today, venture this is in response to your lines abt ishaan

some lines maybe the real ones that ishan in obs/sgp has said but here it is

na jaane kabse is pal ka intezaar tha
itni door thi, ab itna pass ho,
magar yeh kuch kadmon ka fasla tay karte waqt kadam saath nahi de rahe hai
jis pal ko sirf khwabon mein dekha tha, aaj woh haqeeqat bankar samne hai
magar zuban saath nahi de rahe hai
har woh baat jo tumne sirf mehsoos kari thi unhe bayan karna chahta hoon
kai aise baatein hai jo tumhe batana chahta hoon
kai aisi khushiya hai jo tumhse baatna chahta hoon
kai aise gum hai jo tumhe dikhana chahta hoon
kai adhure sapne tumhare sang pure karna chahta hoon

mana sona meri dost hai, par mere dil mein kai aise raaz hai jo sona nahi janti :) unhe tumse baantna chahta hoon - this is a cheesy line to make sona critics happy Tongue

kya tumhe pata hai, kaunsa woh pal tha jab maine jana tha ki pyar kya hota hai
kya tumhe pata hai  ki tum khule baalon mein jyada khubsoorat lagti ho
kya tumhe pata hai, ki tumhara thakur kehkar pukarna mujhe pasand hai
kya tumhe pata hai, ki yeh mera pehla nick name hai (lets forget that he was called bholu)
Man hi man bahut si baatein kar li, magar ab mein tumhe apne man ki saari baatein bolna chahta hoon
bus, tum kuch pal aur mera haath tham lo.

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Posted: 15 January 2011 at 7:41am | IP Logged
wooowww great loved both of your poetry amazing......speechless venture great job and poshah you were amazing.......Clap

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