Fan Fictions

India-Forums

   
Fan Fictions
Fan Fictions

Twist Of Fate~MN-SG FF-Imp Note Pg152-18/9/11 (Page 95)

zarfishanzahid IF-Rockerz
zarfishanzahid
zarfishanzahid

Joined: 04 December 2009
Posts: 5198

Posted: 21 July 2011 at 5:05am | IP Logged
very nice promo plz update soon plzzz

tukun2009 Senior Member
tukun2009
tukun2009

Joined: 07 August 2010
Posts: 448

Posted: 22 July 2011 at 3:49am | IP Logged

awesum Smile waiting for the update.pls continue soon

kashishk IF-Sizzlerz
kashishk
kashishk

Joined: 19 April 2006
Posts: 15080

Posted: 22 July 2011 at 1:48pm | IP Logged
PART 21 on PAGE 90 + Promo on PAGE 93
THANKS NOTE

Hey guys,
Thanks a lot for your awesome, fabulous comments, I completely loved them and also thanks to everybody who pressed on 'like' :).
I read them a lot of times and reading your guys comments really did make my day, thanks :D

Though, I truly want to reply to every comment individually but I can't as I am really busy :(. I hope you guys aren't angry by this fact but let me tell you once again thanks guys for showering me with your love and support, please keep supporting and loving as it means a lot to me :D.

I am glad to know you all liked the part and I hope you'll like the upcoming parts too. :)

Guys, your response was really overwhelming :).


If you have any question and which I forget to answer please do make me remember.

IMPORTANT POINT: If you ever find I wrote love making scenes explicitly please let me know :)

I'll update the next part tomorrow, hopefully :)

PS: IMPORTANT: please add me to your buddy list if you want PMs :)

Luv u all<333
Kashish

The following 17 member(s) liked the above post:

salma009cutiepie12ginny09DhanakZAnjali_12-Samira-taibaaazarfishanzahidlove.mayurartiagreatperhapssreevijayanSujaLuvsMayur..Ambika..dynamic_dollFaria.Silent.DreamerCrazyCutesy

DhanakZ IF-Dazzler
DhanakZ
DhanakZ

Joined: 18 June 2010
Posts: 3583

Posted: 22 July 2011 at 2:03pm | IP Logged
We are waiting

-Samira- IF-Rockerz
-Samira-
-Samira-

Joined: 08 August 2008
Posts: 5430

Posted: 22 July 2011 at 3:49pm | IP Logged
Can't wait to read Kashish
agreatperhaps IF-Rockerz
agreatperhaps
agreatperhaps

Joined: 14 March 2010
Posts: 8589

Posted: 23 July 2011 at 12:46am | IP Logged
We are waiting Kashish..!
kashishk IF-Sizzlerz
kashishk
kashishk

Joined: 19 April 2006
Posts: 15080

Posted: 23 July 2011 at 7:03am | IP Logged
PART 22 on PAGE 90 + Promo on PAGE 93

PART 23


"Rehu baby what happened to you?" as Aruhi to him.

"have you see her Aruhi Maami, she was looking so pale when she ran away" he looked scared that something had happened to her.

"she is fine baby. Your mother is with her, you trust your mom right?" she asked while hugging him.

Rehan looked at her and nodded. It wasn't even a question to ask. He loved and respect his mother a lot so he had full faith on her.

Will Gunjan accept being pregnant at this stage? What is the past of Mayank  and Nupur?  Will Mayank  ever receive his family's love?

Meanwhile, Mayank  saw their beautiful bonding and wished he could be part of it. He would sure had been a part for it, if he hadn't done the biggest mistake of his life.

He still remembered, one of their moments before their unfaithful marriage. When they were together planning their future.

***FLASHBACK***

Mayank  and Nupur were cuddled up together in their fire scape, "Mayank , just three days and we will be married, it feels like a beautiful dream"

"I will make this beautiful dream a beautiful reality" he said pecking on her hairs.  "ok, tell me how many kids do you want?" he asked while nuzzling in her hairs.

Nupur blushed deeply hearing this, they were not even married and they were already planning how many kids do they want. "My soon to be bride is blushing" he said pecking on his cheek teasingly.

"Mayank " she said shyly, while hitting him then hugged him.

"seriously Nupur, how many kids" Mayank  asked playing with her fingers lovingly.

"I want two kids" Nupur said as her face turned into crimson color.

"but I want four please" he said like a baby

"no Mayank , two are more than enough" she said while resting her head on his chest. "I will have to suffer through pain not you" she said with a frown.

"Ok then two are fine" he said with a dull face, for sure he wasn't happy, he was upset.

"ok let's make it in between. Three kids" she said, while forwarding his hand. All she wanted was to cheer him up.

"ok done, if God wish, we will ave three kids" he said with a big smile, placing his hand on her hand. "I love you sweetheart" he said while closing his eyes.

"I love you too Mayank " she said while pecking on his lips.

***FLASHBACK END***


Mayank  left a painful sigh. How he painted their beautiful future. How he gave her hope. At that time, she only depended on him. He was her life and he destroyed it without any second thought while doing that.

How he loved her as blushed, how he loved her as she smiled, how he loved her as she looked at him. He loved her a lot. Not from a day, a month or a year but from the time, he saw her the first time.

On the other side, Gunjan slowly came back to conscience. She still felt dizzy and weakness in her body. She was tired of vomiting.

"Gunjan congratulations, you are pregnant" Nupur said with a smile and hugged Gunjan happily.

Hearing this, Gunjan felt shocked. All sense left her. She felt world turning around her. She didn't know how to behave.

"Gunjan, Gunjan" Nupur called her but to no avail so she looked at Samrat worriedly, who was looking equally worried.

Samrat was feeling really afraid, he was really worried. He couldn't come to even think what would be her decision. He sighed with his closed eyes and opened his eyes. No matter what, he would always support her.

"Gunjan" Nupur shook Gunjan slowly, Gunjan came back to her sense.

"I am pregnant, but we never planned, I am not ready" she said, the next second her tears came out.

Samrat felt his heart shattering. "Gunjan, feel this" Nupur said while placing Gunjan's hand on her stomach.

"what are you feeling?" Nupur asked softly.

"I don't know" Gunjan asked confusedly.

"This is your baby. Your and Samrat's love symbol. Can you feel it now?" Nupur asked her gently.

Gunjan closed her eyes and saw a beautiful angel. A smile came on her face. She opened her eyes and nodded. Then next second her smile vanished "I am afraid" she said with fear in her eyes.

"fear?" Samrat asked her, side hugging her. For sure, he saw a bright hope in Gunjan's smile.

"Yes Samrat, what if I let you or our baby down? What if I am not able to fulfill my responsibilities? I don't think I am ready" Gunjan was really scared, she didn't want to be a bad mother.

"Gunjan, jaan, you can never let me our our baby down" Samrat said lovingly "you know all a baby wants is love and attention. I know you would be an ideal mother" he said while kissing on her temple.

"and Gunjan, about being ready? Let me tell you something about me. When I was pregnant, I was all alone, I had no one with me to support when I was suffering. Do you think I was ready to be pregnant, specially when I was alone? Do you think I was ready to be a mother of twins?" Nupur asked her and then replied herself with a straight and emotionless tone "I wasn't ready but my angels made my life bright and beautiful. Just knowing I was pregnant, all my suffering felt nothing in front of my happiness. I used to talk to them all the time. I was no longer alone..." she took a pause and continued "see Gunjan, you are lucky, all of us are with you to support and pamper you. We are here to guide you."

"So jaan, are you ready? would you give our baby birth?" Samrat asked her while holding her hand.

"Samrat" Gunjan asked him with bewildered eyes. Samrat felt scared once again. "how could you even think, I would abort our baby. No matter what we have planned, but this our part and I would have and would never think about harming it" Gunjan said with disbelief in her voice.

Nupur and Samrat felt relieved and happy hearing this. "Are you happy Gunjan?" Asked Samrat caressing her hairs.

"Yes I am Samrat. It is not that I wasn't happy. I was happy but just a bit scared but now I am really happy and excited" the happiness and excitement was visible in her eyes "would you be always there with me?" she asked while forwarding her hand.

"Gunjan, even after out last breath, we will be always together" he said kissing on cheek.

"so now soon to be mummy and papa, it is time to go call and tell everyone this good news... But... but before that congratulations once again..." she hugged them and said "I am so excited, I am going to become bua" she said happily. She put her hand on Gunjan's belly "hello baby, I am your bua." Nupur introduced herself to the baby.

Samrat and Gunjan looked at Nupur and then at each other, they were really happy now.

After that, Nupur went out with a straight face and called everybody in. All entered and showered them with dozens of questions, even Mayank  was worried for her.

"I am fine, and there is a good news" she said with her eyes lowered with shyness.

"what is that Gunjan, you are alright, right?" asked Mayank , while holding Gunjan's hand.

"Uncle, please stay away from my maami" Rehan said angrily

"Rehu baby, he is Gunjan's brother" Nupur told Rehan as at this moment she didn't want to make Gunjan tensed. Her happiness were important to the whole family as now she was big part of their family.

Whilst, Gunjan noticed something was fishy. She didn't know what was going on but she knew something was wrong. The way, Mayank  was being treated, there was something wrong in this. She thought to ask Samrat.

Rehan just didn't reply and hugged Gunjan "I was so worried for you maami" he said sweetly in a babyish tone. Diya joined them too on the bed.

Gunjan was mesmerized by the little angels, now she was sure, she was ready for their baby. She felt assured and fearless.

"What happened to you? what is the good news?" Shashank repeated the question that was left half unanswered.

"Uncle, actually, me and Samrat... I... I mean we... I... uh..." she was fumbling badly to tell the good news. She looked at Samrat for help, who blinked his eyes.

"Uncle, actually we are going to be parents" Samrat said with a proud smile, while side hugging Gunjan, who was blushing badly.

"wow that is a really good news" exclaimed Aruhi happily and hugged them. Followed by the others.

"Now only we are left Aruhi. I think we should get married first. Seriously it feels odd, like five years ago and few months, we were planning about to get married still we are not married and our kidoo siblings are married and having babies" he said in a casual tone, and shook his head.

"My bhai is getting impatient. Don't worry bro, we will get you married soon" Nupur said with a wide grin "and to your advantage, Rehu and Diya will also dance with me" she said with a wink.

Arjun smiled hearing his sister. Now he couldn't wait any longer to marry Aruhi. To tell the truth, he was craving to be married to her. Honestly, all the years craving was enough for him. He had suffered a lot.

As Mayank  heard their words, specially Arjun's, he felt really guilty. Vivek's shadow was like a nightmare to this family and he just hurt them further.

After a while, all left Samrat and Gunjan to have rest. As soon as they left, Gunjan held Samrat's hand and asked worriedly "Samrat, what is going on? why is Mayank  being treated differently?"

"Jaan, this is the other fact of the past that is hidden from you. I know you should know it but I don't think this is the right time as you are pregnant. I don't know if you will be able to take it." Samrat said with a concerned look.

"Samrat don't worry, I have you with me. Please tell me" she requested him to tell her. She wanted to know everything.

Samrat took a sigh and replied "Gunjan, I am not the one to tell you about the past this time. I want you to ask Mayank "

"why?" Gunjan asked with a frown full of curiosity.

"because, now, at this very moment, only he or Nupur can tell you what happened in the past. I want you to ask this Mayank " he said while assuring her.

Gunjan nodded and then Samrat said "now rest for a while". He took Gunjan in his embrace more comfortable. She soon dozed off for a short nape.

Meanwhile, Samrat said there completing how would Gunjan take the facts of Nupur and Mayank 's past.

On the other side, Mayank  was going into his room when he heard sweet voices coming from Nupur's room. Her room was left ajar. He saw the most beautiful sigh. Rehan and Diya were kissing on both of Nupur cheek, who was chuckling happily.

"Mom, we love you so much and you are our world" Said Diya and Rehan while kissing Nupur again. While Mayank  stood in the background with tears in his eyes.

Soon enough, he was lost in his land.

He was sitting on the laptop doing some work. His children rushed in and clang on Mayank , showering him with kisses "hi my sweetpies, what happened?" he asked them sweetly.

"papa, mama is trying to make us drink milk" Rehan said making a bad face

"And mama was trying to put a rubber on my hairs" Diya said with a pout.

"why are teasing your mama?" Mayank  asked with a frown.

"because, she looks so cute" Rehan and Diya said while kissing on his cheek again.

"Mayank , what are you doing? please tell them to listen me" Nupur said angrily, as she entered in the room with hand on her hips.

"yes sweethearts, Nupur is right." he saw Rehan and Diya's sad face, then he added looking at Nupur "what about you add chocolate powder in the milk for our prince and princess ribbon for our prince" he said solving the problem and making everyone happy.

"we love you papa" they kissed him once again and rushed out. Nupur was also about to leave, when Mayank  held her hand.

"Mrs Nupur Mayank Mallik" Mayank  said and continued in a husky voice "..I love you"

"I love you too" she said with a blush and rushed out.

Then his eyes fall on a big family photo. Where Nupur and Mayank  side hugged, while cuddling Rehan and Diya in their arms. A picture perfect. A perfect family.


As his phone rang, he came out from the beautiful dream, where he was happy with his family. Feeling upset that it was just a dream. He felt really shattered
________________________________________________

Hey guys,
Here is the the next part, I really hope you liked the part :D
Back to present, now there is a lot more to come all i need is ur response and if u have any goods ideas for their moments don't hesitate to share it with me. :)
I truly wish that you enjoyed it and that you would want to read in the future too. :D

I want to dedicate to all my friends, my readers and to people whom birthday is in July (Happy Birthday guys, may you get all the success and happiness. Be happy and keep everyone happy :D).

IMPORTANT POINT: If you ever find I wrote love making scenes explicitly please let me know :)


Please leave your comments, even a word, good or bad-Or even please press the 'like' button. As your comments mean a lot to me, they encourage me to write further :).

If there is any mistake do tell me, don't hesitate :D

All criticism, suggestion and questions are most welcome.

And I'll PM later :)

PS: if you want PMs and are not in my buddy list, please add me in ur buddy list :).

Luv u<333
Kashish

The following 51 member(s) liked the above post:

salma009ShumiNo1miriam3mangaloriansupriyamnfankomal991shonu631binudamaniamayurian-artianmayur-ki-diwaniaysha1989ginny09valliyahcutiepie12NirvrithiDhanakZkheya-mayurgopi06daniella05kirti123crazymayuriandrmahaBhawna_artiAnjali_12-Samira-taibaaasreevijayanShwePoozarfishanzahidsaduf-Ambarish-preety88KuchBhiMatBol-Anila---jiya--..Ambika..love.mayurartisariska_mnartiAuroni.92shafy_MNdrfizaahmedar_sajan4evr-NightDreamer-dynamic_dollShafooFaria.Silent.DreamerCrazyCutesy...EhSaas...Krishna_SouravNikki_Titli

shafy_MN IF-Sizzlerz
shafy_MN
shafy_MN

Joined: 22 July 2010
Posts: 18282

Posted: 23 July 2011 at 7:46am | IP Logged
I THINK ENOUGH ID ENOUGH NOW...NUPUR... SHOULD... FORGIVE.. MAYANK.. THIS IS SOMETHING... REALLY.. BAD.. PLEASE...
NOE ITS TIME.. FOR PATCH UP...

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

Shafoo

Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Author Replies Views Last Post
~Betrayed by fate~ pt 12 uptd 27/04

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 56 57

Author: hinz   Replies: 455   Views: 33587

hinz 455 33587 10 November 2011 at 11:17am by hinz
Siddhima-AR FF: Fate, O.S.C.Fate [Completed]

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 38 39

Author: malluangel   Replies: 311   Views: 51247

malluangel 311 51247 14 October 2011 at 8:31am by sweetie_angel
Fate's Cruel Game [AR ff] ~ *Part 13*page 95(10/9)

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 97 98

Author: lilangel_soumya   Replies: 783   Views: 52076

lilangel_soumya 783 52076 10 March 2011 at 7:33pm by -Prithi-
Just Married#2 UPDATED:PG14~Riddhima's fate

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 20 21

Author: IsabellaCullen   Replies: 167   Views: 26311

IsabellaCullen 167 26311 10 September 2010 at 9:11am by Riddss

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category / Channels
Forums

Fan Fictions Topic Index

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.

Popular Channels :
Star Plus | Zee TV | Sony TV | Colors TV | SAB TV | Life OK

Quick Links :
Top 100 TV Celebrities | Top 100 Bollywood Celebs | About Us | Contact Us | Advertise | Forum Index