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Twist Of Fate~MN-SG FF-Imp Note Pg152-18/9/11 (Page 35)

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 11:00pm | IP Logged

very nice.. update...
i loved..
the update...
mindblowing...
amazing...
very nice..

but please.. mayank ko.. bura.. mat banao.. i can't take.. that...
please....

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Posted: 25 March 2011 at 3:51pm | IP Logged
update soon..................!!!
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Posted: 26 March 2011 at 5:19am | IP Logged
PART 8 on PAGE 31
THANKS NOTE

Hey guys,
Thanks a lot for your awesome, fabulous comments, I completely loved them and also thanks to everybody who pressed on 'like' :).
I read them a lot of times and reading your guys comments really did make my day, thanks :D

Though, I truly want to reply to every comment individually but I can't as I am really getting busier day by day :(. I hope you guys aren't angry by this fact but let me tell you once again thanks guys for showering me with your love and support, please keep supporting and loving as it means a lot to me :D.

I am glad to know you all liked the part and I hope you'll like the upcoming parts too. :)

Guys, your response was really overwhelming :).


If you have any question and which I forget to answer please do make me remember.

I'll update the part most today or tomorrow, hopefully :)

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Luv u all<333
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PART 8 on PAGE 31
PART 9

***FLASHBACK***

6 years ago, Nupur lived with her brother, Arjun and her father, Shashank. Their life was full of happiness, they loved each other a lot. Nupur was the princess of Arjun and Shashank, they pampered her a lot. Arjun and Nupur were really close to each other, they shared everything to each other. Apart that, Arjun was really protecting toward Nupur. One slight bruise on Nupur and he would made sure that person a lot.

Shashank was a doctor by profession as well as the dean of Sanjeevani. Arjun was a businessman, he was always interested in commerce and trade thus he opted this field. His father and sister were really proud of him.

Everything was going smoothly in their life, but then everything changed.

***FLASHBACK END***

Nupur closed her eyes in pain, she didn't want to remember the bad part of her past as for now. She would make sure, those parts are revealed in front of the right people. Unwillingly, her thought went back to her past but to the time when she met Mayank. He was like a fresh breath in the atmosphere.

***FLASHBACK***

A year later, Nupur had joined Sanjeevani hospital as an intern along three other interns. Nupur, was not the same as a year ago, she wasn't the same bubbly and extrovert girl, she had completely gone into a shell yet she was there to complete her father's dream. From the last 8 months, her father was admitted in the hospital and he was in a coma state.

Two interns introduced themselves to Nupur. "you must be the new intern right?" asked a chirpy girl

Nupur nodded her head "I am Dr Nupur"

"nice to meet you, I am Sapna" Sapna intoduced herself with a smile

"and I am Amit" Amit introduced himself as well with a smile.

"nice to meet you" Nupur said in a polite tone, in purpose to not offend them.

Most of the time, Amit and Sapna were talking while Nupur stayed quite. Suddenly a fresh wind attracted her toward the entry. A guy, in her early 20s entered through the gate. He was really handsome and guy who could kill girls with his looks. He had beautiful dimples as well as smile and blue hazel eyes. In short, he looked a Greek God.

Only a minute, she looked at him then turned her gaze away. Though he was handsome, still she was in her dull mood. Nothing could probably help her.

"hi I am Dr Mayank, you also must be the new interns, right?" he asked with a killer smile.

Sapna and Amit introduced themselves and Nupur in low voice introduced herself too. "Dr Nupur, why are you speaking in such a low tone?" he asked with a smile.

"The loud talk taught me a lesson. I don't have the gut to be a loud person again" she said in morose tone and went to the cabin where they should be at that moment.

Once upon a time, she used to be a loud person, first to introduce herself and blabber away non-stop but now everything was changed. Her life had changed, so drastically that no one could ever imagine.

The doctor greeted them and announce them what they have to do. All were happy including Nupur, as she had come there to complete someone's very dear dream.

After their rounds, Mayank came to Nupur and asked "Nupur would you mind having a cup of tea with us?". Amit, Sapna and Mayank were going to have tea so they decided to ask Nupur.

"ok" As Nupur herself wanted to have a cup of tea she agreed and joined them. Through the tea break, Mayank cracked few jokes.

"Boss: Where were you born?
Sardar: India ..
Boss: which part?
Sardar: What 'which part'? Whole body was born in India" Mayank said with all the gestures and a comic tone. Amit and Sapna burt out laughing. But Mayank didn't stop as he wanted to see something else.

"PROFESSOR:
Akal badi ki bhais?
MUNNA BHAI:
Bole toh pehlay date of birth bata mamu."

"Sardar: What is the name of your car?
Lady: I forgot the name, but it starts with 'T'.
Sardar: Oh, what a strange car, starts with Tea. All cars that I know start with petrol."

Amit and Sapna were laughing non stop. All the while the thing Mayank wanted didn't happen, he wanted to see Nupur laugh was mills away from her. All she did was a weak smile. Mayank sighed and thought he will keep on trying to make her laugh.

Even tough Nupur was listening his jokes but she was lost in her thoughts. What drastic changes came into her life in the last 8 months only she knew.

As Amit and Sapna left for their duties, Mayank asked Nupur "Nupur can't we be friends?"

"uh Mayank I need time" she said hesitantly. She had have experiences of her known which led her to think ten times before trusting someone.

"It's ok Nupur, take all the time that you want" Mayank said with a smile.

Hearing this, Nupur felt happy that someone wanted to be her friend and was ready to for her agreement of the friendship still she was unsure.

One more thing she made sure about was late working hours, she did many extra hours to keep herself busy. She didn't want to go in an empty house where there is no one.

The whole next week, Nupur still was a bit distant, she didn't get mixed up with them, she didn't joined them in their conversations, she was mostly quiet. As she was done with her duties, she was making her way outside.

A nurse rushed to her and said "Dr Nupur, the patient N13 of children ward is having a breathing problem"

As Nupur heard this, she quickly rushed to the children ward and saw the patient N13, it was Ria. As per the patient chart, she was admitted a month ago. Nupur knew her as she was in charge of her.

Seeing the little baby in that state made Nupur panicked. Luckily Mayank was in the hospital thus he came to her. He had seen that she was worried for that girl. Mayank ordered the nurse all the things. Mayank comforted Nupur and they work together with Ria.

Soon enough, Ria was fine and in a stable situation. Mayank kissed the girl on her forehead and left. Nupur also went out with a lost look overtook her. A while ago she felt really helpless and she was really thankful to Mayank.

"Mayank" She called him.

"yeah" Mayank was walking alongside her

"Thank you for being there for me when I needed someone" she said with a smile. For the first time that smile was real and she was really appreciating what he did.

"hmm I will accept you thanks only at one condition" he said with smile.

"and what is that?" she asked in normal voice.

"Friends?" he said taking his hand out.

Nupur smiled and shook his hand "friends". Finally Mayank and Nupur were friends. Their newly founded friendship was going really great.

***FLASHBACK END***

"and that day I accepted his friendship as I felt like it. That day what he did for me made me respect him. He was so sweet to that girl" Nupur thought with sly smile.

Their friendship... it was unique. She didn't speak much to Amit and Sapna but soon someone became an exception.

***FLASHBACK***

With time, Mayank and Nupur become great friends. Even though, they were friends but Nupur didn't like to share about her past as it hurt her. She was still a very dull person, who didn't talk a lot yet with Mayank she had started to open.

Now when Mayank shared jokes Nupur would join them in laughing. Mayank was always there with her when she needed someone.

Nupur was laying on her bed and was thinking about her friendship with Mayank, with a smile on her lips. As her phone rang, she came out from her thoughts and picked it up.

"hello" Said Nupur, knowing very well who it was.

"hi Nupur, how are you?" Mayank asked her, with a smile

"I am fine Mayank, you tell?" Nupur asked while twirling on her bed.

"I am also fine. So what were you doing?" He asked, he laid on his bed.

"nothing" both kept on talking when they got tired and slept with the phone near her ear only God knew. They both slept hearing each other's breath. That was their last months routine.

The next day, in the hospital, Nupur complained "if we keep on sleeping with the mobile on, I will go bankrupt"

"Don't worry, I will give you loan" Mayank teased her with a wink.

"Shut up" Nupur glared at him while hitting on his arm.

"wild cat" He said sticking his tongue out.

"After all I am your friend" Nupur said, while giggling.

Mayank shook his head and looked at her. She was clad in a blue anarkali dress, with minimal make-up and jewelery, which is a pendant, earrings and a ring. She looked really beautiful.

How and when they became best friends, only God knew. Like before, Nupur didn't say a word about her past but they shared everything concerning the present.

Not only with Mayank, Nupur was also trying to talk to Amit and Sapna. Because of Mayank, she was becoming normal again.

Like any other day, Mayank and Nupur were talking on the phone and Mayank asked her "Nupur tell me something about your family?"

Not that he hadn't asked before but she didn't say anything. She tried to avoid but he wanted to know.

"Mayank, please can we not talk about it" she said in a watery tone. Neither she said ever anything about her family nor she asked the others as it would give them a reason to ask hers and she didn't want it.

"Ok Nupur, I won't talk about it till you feel ready to share about your family" he said in a comforting tone as he felt her voice going watery.

Nupur felt really thankful to him, he understood her really well. In the last three months, she was changing again, she was becoming the same Nupur that her brother and father knew thanks to Mayank.

Although her father was in another hospital yet time and again she visited her father. As soon as, she saw him, her eyes filled with tears. How once their happy life was destroyed. All she wanted was to have that back, she wanted her father fit and fine and her brother back. She closed her eyes in pain as she didn't want to remember those painful memories that ruined her happiness.

Meanwhile, Mayank and Nupur's friendship got even more closer, they got so much dependent on each other. So much that often Nupur would buy Mayank's clothes and Mayank Nupur's. They appreciated each other's choice a lot.

Not only that, their long phone calls included questions like what to wear. "Mayank what should I wear?" she asked looking through her wardrobe.

"Hmm how about the red anarkali with white border" he said as he remembered buying it for her and she still hadn't worn it.

"ok" she said with a smile, taking the dress out. She continued "I will get ready and then call you"

"Hey hey Ma'am, have a break, who will select my clothes" he said with a frown as if she could see him. There wasn't any different scene in Mayank's room, he was standing in front of his whole wardrobe, with a confused look.

"How about blue jean with a white shirt?" she suggested, thinking about the clothes that he had.

"ok done" he said with a big grin and both went to get ready. Getting ready, Mayank went to Nupur's house and picked her up to go at Sanjeevani. That was their daily routine.

During the lunch, Mayank would fetch dinner for both and they would enjoy it sharing jokes. Not only that, whenever one was eating something as in a chocolate and if they didn't have another they passed to the other one. That was their beautiful friendship.

***FLASHBACK END***

How much happy she was to have Mayank in her life. He made her feel lucky and wanted. With this remembered one of the most happy moment of her life even tough....
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Hey guys,
So Here is the the next part, I really hope you liked the part :D
I truly wish that you enjoyed it and that you would want to read in the future too. :D
No credit to me for the jokes. The jokes are taken from this site:
http://www.jokesonline4u.blogspot.com/

I want to dedicate to all my friends, my readers and to people whom birthday is in March (Happy Birthday guys, may you get all the success and happiness. Be happy and keep everyone happy :D).
Apart that, to everyone, A very Happy Holi

Please leave your comments, even a word, good or bad-Or even please press the 'like' button. As your comments mean a lot to me, they encourage me to write further :).
If there is any mistake do tell me, don't hesitate :D

All criticism, suggestion and questions are most welcome.

And I'll PM later :)


Luv u<333
Kashish



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Posted: 26 March 2011 at 7:18am | IP Logged

very very nice update...

but still i have a equst..
ki please don't make.. mayank guilty..
i won't bear him at this level...
please..
could you do this.....
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Posted: 26 March 2011 at 7:32am | IP Logged
awesome part bt no sajan part.............i luv dem alot plz dnt ignore dem nd put their part too................
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Posted: 26 March 2011 at 8:17am | IP Logged
Nice part.
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nice part......

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