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Twist Of Fate~MN-SG FF-Imp Note Pg152-18/9/11 (Page 145)

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Posted: 06 September 2011 at 5:38am | IP Logged
nupurs pain was unbearable 
continue soon

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Horrible Past..!
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Posted: 06 September 2011 at 6:51am | IP Logged
amazing prt ...
updt sooon ..thanx 4 d pm 
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nice
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Posted: 06 September 2011 at 4:15pm | IP Logged
beautifully written
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Posted: 06 September 2011 at 8:52pm | IP Logged
Amazing update.. Mayank is actually worse than a beast!
Please Continue in the present for now! 
Continue Soon and Thanks for the PM :)
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Posted: 08 September 2011 at 1:08pm | IP Logged
Hey guys,
Thanks a lot for ur lovely compliments :D
I will update the 'teaser' today or tomorrow, hopefully ;)

Luv u guys<333
Kashish              

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Posted: 08 September 2011 at 1:21pm | IP Logged
Part 29 on Page 142

TEASER


"And then she even forced me to come here to complete my studies as it was my mother's dream, which I did" Samrat said ending the past events. "soon after, we forced her to join back hospital as Gayatri aunty was there and Shashank uncle too, to take care of babies and Nupur needed to make their dream come true"

"I destroyed her, I completely destroyed her... her, her life, her identity, her dreams, her smile... Everything" Mayank said, lifelessly. Hearing all this, he felt really shallow. Without anything, he left the room "I made her go through her, she had to suffer because of me, I hurt her, I abused her, I tortured her" without thinking anymore he entered in his room.

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Before going, Nupur met her father, who was still in coma and she went to the police station but didn't have the gut to meet her brother. If her brother saw her like this, he would be broken and he would never forgive himself.

As she reached in a new place, she felt better, she felt relaxed. "baby this is the start of our new life there would be no sadness in our life anymore" she said talking to her baby.

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After a second, she felt her breath getting heavier, she said worriedly "I can't breath" she was getting out of breath. She tried to control her breath but was feeling suffocated.

"no, please take breath in and breath out" he begged her, he couldn't see her like this. He took her to the hospital as soon as he could.

Who is the person having difficulty to breath?

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Hey guys,
Here is the teaser, a long one, I hope you liked . :)
Do tell me if you liked the promo or not?
All comments, criticisms, questions and suggestions are most welcome. Please comment and press like button guys :)


Luv u<333
Kashish

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