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Twist Of Fate~MN-SG FF-Imp Note Pg152-18/9/11 (Page 139)

kashishk IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 02 September 2011 at 1:30pm | IP Logged
Part 28 on Page 135


"Ah, I can't breath" she cried in pain, trying to control her breath. She felt suffocated. 


Before going, Nupur met her father, who was still in coma and she went to the police station but didn't have the gut to meet her brother. If her brother saw her like this, he would be broken and he would never forgive himself.

As she reached in a new place, she felt better, she felt relaxed. "baby this is the start of our new life there would be no sadness in our life anymore" she said talking to her baby.


Who is the person having difficulty to breath?


Hey guys,
Here is the promo, I hope you liked . :)
Do tell me if you liked the promo or not?
I thought to make a poll concerning to continue with the past or add a bit of present. But after reading the comments, I come to the conclusion to continue with the past but add a bit of present if possible :) is that ok?
All comments, criticisms, questions and suggestions are most welcome.

Luv u<333

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DhanakZ IF-Dazzler

Joined: 18 June 2010
Posts: 3583

Posted: 02 September 2011 at 1:37pm | IP Logged
nice promo dear
and I am fully in support of your's decision
i know past is imp but I wanna read it with Present Specially Mayur scenes dear
cont soon

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Irum. IF-Dazzler

Joined: 29 August 2009
Posts: 4372

Posted: 02 September 2011 at 2:27pm | IP Logged
hey i to want see past bt as well as present too.I feel that if too much is told about past the story will not move ahead.Hum past main hi reh jayan ge.SO present is also important.
Specially mayur present scenes.
I can't see  Mayank  like this anymore.Plzzz do somthing.
I know whatever he did was wrong.Bt he is regretting now.WE know he was not a bad person but he was made to do this.
He should b given a chance.We should also consider that Nupur still loves him.I feel very sad for Nupur .If giving Mayank a second chance can make her life happy 'So both shoud b given a chance and moreover now their children, They should have love of both father and mother.WE should think about them.They should not be deprived of father's love when all the other children in their family would be blessed with the love of both parents.
We all commit mistakes in life and after realization we want a second chance...

Edited by mayurlove - 02 September 2011 at 2:32pm

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SujaLuvsMayur IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 02 September 2011 at 2:36pm | IP Logged
very nice promo.
waiting for update.

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Shafoo IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 15114

Posted: 02 September 2011 at 2:49pm | IP Logged
tht was nice promo

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Bhawna_arti IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 03 September 2011 at 1:01am | IP Logged
Nice promo.

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crazzygal_jenny Goldie

Joined: 03 March 2011
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Posted: 03 September 2011 at 1:26am | IP Logged

Past plus present n specially SG scenes dnt u feel with the mayur past thing SG are lost somewhere .. There are hardly any scene of them
but the promo was great loved it!

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Maria. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 03 September 2011 at 1:33am | IP Logged
Nice promo...

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