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Twist Of Fate~AR-RM FF-PromPg146/T:NtPg153-29/7/11 (Page 40)

sweety7395 Senior Member
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Posted: 12 March 2011 at 7:58pm | IP Logged
hey awesome part.....so happy to see RM together
hate Muski's dad......hopefully ARmaan will find out soon that Vivek is bad
i want AR's misunderstandings to get cleared out soon too
thanks for the pm
continue soon

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Posted: 13 March 2011 at 3:17am | IP Logged
THANK GOD RM ARE TOGETHER
HAD TEARS IN MY EYES
N WATS ARMAANS 1ST BETRAYAL
CONTINUE SOON
N THX 4 D PM
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Posted: 13 March 2011 at 12:54pm | IP Logged
hey dear,
loved the update.....finally muski is going to rahool and not marring armaan.......
continue soon
 
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Posted: 14 March 2011 at 1:36pm | IP Logged

that was awsum...

he was doing all this just for armi's property..........

bt i hope after this....things get better....

b/w AR..........

thnx fir the pm.................

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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 1:04pm | IP Logged

Before I proceed to the Thanks Note, I want to let you all know from the last three days, I am suffering from gastrointestinal and still the pain is there. I hope you guys aren't angry for the delay :)




PART 7 on PAGE 35

THANKS NOTE

Hey guys,
Thanks a lot for your awesome, fabulous comments, I completely loved them and also thanks to everybody who pressed on 'like' :).
I read them a lot of times and reading your guys comments really did make my day, thanks :D

Though, I truly want to reply to every comment individually but I can't as I am really getting busier day by day :(. I hope you guys aren't angry by this fact but let me tell you once again thanks guys for showering me with your love and support, please keep supporting and loving as it means a lot to me :D.

I am glad to know you all liked the part and I hope you'll like the upcoming parts too. :)

Guys, your response was really overwhelming :).


If you have any question and which I forget to answer please do make me remember.

I'll update the part most today or tomorrow, hopefully :)

PS: IMPORTANT: please add me to your buddy list if you want PMs :)

Luv u all<333
Kashish


Edited by kashishk - 17 March 2011 at 1:06pm

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good one....ab ar ko bhi milado plz....
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Get Well Soooon Fazi Smile

But U Know I'm Waiting A Lot Lot More More For Ur Update ... But Its Ohkies ... Do TC Yaar Smile

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Posted: 18 March 2011 at 10:27am | IP Logged
PART 7 on PAGE 35

SPECIAL: I wanted to know if someone of you was interested in write poems, or making siggies or VM that you want me to include in this FF, feel free to do it as I would really love it. All you have to do is to post the work in the FF concerned and PM me :D


PART 8

"you were just using me to have Armaan's property, I hate you" Shouted Muskaan

Armaan was left shaken, the man he considered as his father was actually after his property. He had believed that man blindly and what he received: betrayal. One more betrayal in his life.

Soon enough the police reached there and said "we are here to arrest Mr Rishab, in the charge to use her daughter, in order to make her married a rich man"

"this is not the truth" Rishab shouted but all in vain.

"then prove it in the court, anyways we have all the proofs" the police said gesturing the constables to arrest him. Rishab, who was shouting and cursing was dragged.

Armaan was so much shocked that he stood frozen. How could Rishab do that to him? Is money everything in the world?

"now enough of emotional drama, let me get my brother and sister in law married" Ridhima said with a smile and taking their hand, she took them toward the wedding pavillon.

Armaan frowned, how did she become Rahul's sister. Anyways, he thought to ask Muskaan later.

Just before entering the pavillon, Muskaan called Armaan, who finally came out from the trail of thoughts.  "Armaan even tough we were to be married but you know I always considered you as a big brother. Would you make me lucky enough to have my Kanyadan from you and Ridhima?" she asked, hoping a positive response.

No matter even if they knew they were supposed to be married, it was a big compromise as Armaan had also considered her a sister but they were forced to marry due to Rishab's promise. Finally, everything was sorted out.

"Of course" Armaan said with a weak smile. He was sat with all the happenings but happy for Muskaan. She was going to get married to the man she loved. Infact, unlike Armaan, Rahul was lucky.

Forgetting their differences, Armaan and Ridhima made them sit down and when the time came, Ridhima tied their knot and finally died their Kanyadan. Rahul and Muskaan were really happy.

As they were done, Rahul looked for his shoes but they were no where in sight. "where are my shoes?" he wondered in a loud voice.

"Well Rahul as you don't have any 'sali' to do the 'stealing the shoes ritual', I am doing that honour with Armaan and Atul, right Armaan and Atul?" Anjali said while looking at Armaan and her husband.

"absolutely" Armaan and Atul replied in unison. Armaan wanted to make this day memorable for the newly wedded couple.

Nonetheless, if it wasn't for Rahul and Muskaan's wedding what they would have done to each other only God knew.

"what do you want?" Asked Rahul, with a frown.

"We want three things" Atul said cheekily. Finally, he was getting a chance for a pay back. He still could remember all the leg pulling and teasing on his wedding.

"Oye no three things, just one" Ridhima joined her brother, Rahul.

"Well three is also a less number to have married a princess to Rahul" Armaan replied with a wink.

"whatever" she said in a non interested tone. "by the way make sure you bride also find her shoes" Ridhima added with a wink.

At this, Armaan, Atul, Anjali and Muskaan turned to look for Muskaan's choose but they were also no where to be seen.

"Arre where are Muskaan's heels?" Atul wondered while continue looking around.

"So now if you want the bride to go bare foot, you can say three things" Ridhima said with a victory smile.

Armaan, Atul and Anjali looked at each other and sighed. "ok, the deal is on for two things" Anjali said.

"Ahan and what are they?" Ridhima asked with a frown.

"First we need handsome sum" Anjali said, getting excited to empty her 'jijaji's' pocket.

"how much?" Rahul asked, while scrunizing the three musketeers.

"hmm 30 thousand rupees" Atul said with a grin.

"no not more 20 thousand rupees" Ridhima tried to negociate.

"ok, this is the deal" Armaan said, while nodding.

Rahul handed them the money and then waited for the other thing. "we want the groom to kiss on the bride's forehead" Armaan said while whisteling, joined by the others.

The newly wedded couple blushed but Rahul did kiss on her forehead as he himself wanted to. It had been so long that they had any close moment. Finally she was his now.

Just for the happiness of Rahul and Muskaan, Ridhima and Armaan put their problems aside as they didn't want the wedded couple's day to be messed up more than already done.

After all the rituals, Rahul held Muskaan by her waist and led her out of the hall, with Ridhima on their side. Carefully, Ridhima and Rahul helped Muskaan and Rahul sat on the other side of her. Ridhima joined them in the front.

Reaching at home, Ridhima welcomed them with the 'arti', a pot of rice. Then she placed a plate in front of Muskaan with red water. Muskaan happily put her hands in the plate and then placed her hands on the wall. As she took her hand back, she saw the red color. Eventually, Rahul joined with his red hands.

Rahul and Muskaan felt content to see the hands marks next to each other. After all the hardships, pains, sorrow and tears they were together.

"Rahul, you wait here, till I take your bride in your room" Ridhima said with a wink, while Muskaan blushed and Rahul passed his hands through his hairs shyly.

Ridhima helped Muskaan to her new room, where she was going to spend her future, which she hoped was going to be really beautiful unlike few marriages.

She made Muskaan sit on the bed with her mehnga spread in a circle. Once Ridhima was satisfied with everything se left the room. She couldn't bear to stay longer in that atmosphere, the reason being it remembered her something and she felt nauseatic.

"Can I enter now?" Rahul asked impatiently.

Ridhima giggled and said "not so easily"

With a frown, Rahul asked "and why is that?"

"well you have to pay before entering" Ridhima said as she stuck her tongue.

Rahul sighed and wondered "weren't Muskaan's party enough that my party is also asking for money?". Anyways, he passed her the sum om money she wanted.

"Rahul can you promise me something?" Ridhima asked in a serious voice, before he could enter.

Hearing her tone, Rahul sensed that there was something serious. "Of course Ridhima anything" he said holding her hands.

"Please never hurt her as I know how it feels to be hurt. I don't want anyone else to endure it" she said as a tear leaked out.

This hurt Rahul as well, he knew her better than anyone. He knew all that she had gone through. If it had be on him, he would have beaten up that person who hurt her but he knew Ridhima wanted to do all in her own way.

"I promise you, I will never hurt you and I will never let come any harm on you as well" Rahul promised, while wiping away her tears and hugging her.

Ridhima felt assured. All that she had suffered in her life were really hurtful, her heart was deeply wounded. For outside world, she made sure that she looked strong and happy but in true she was really weak and broken, still she had to be strong for the persons related to her.

No matter, how long it took her but she was going to make sure that the persons who hurt her were punished as well. No one would be an expection in this. What she had suffered was way more than any forgiveness.

If it hadn't been for Rahul or her father, Shashank, she would have died and no one would have cared.

"Now you go, Muskaan must be waiting for you" Ridhima teased him. Meanwhile, Rahul shook his head at Ridhima with a blush and entered.

As he entered, he saw the room enlighted with the moon and the candless, the big bown of water full of rose petals, the room engulfed in a romantic rose scent, the bed decorated with roses. In the amidst of everything, his bride was sitting on the bed.

All looked so heavenly, it was the moment Rahul waited for ages: To have Muskaan in his life as his wife and finally It had come true.

With steady step and nervous breath he went to her then sat down. Gently, he held his hand and placed them against his lips. After that, he took her veil off and found and blushing Muskaan, with her eyes lowered yet with a light smile.

"You are looking really beautiful Mrs Muskaan Rahul Grewal" he said while kissing on her cheek.

Muskaan closed her eyes, feeling him so close. After so long they were sharing close moments like this. Soon enough, Rahul captured her lips, they had a veyr passionate, full of love kiss. Already, romantic room had become more romantic with the moans and groans. Rahul hand was wandering around her hairs and veil, in order to take the veil off. Meanwhile, with one hand around his neck, Muskaan managed to open his wedding sherwani.

In not time, they were touching skin to skin to each other, loving each other and savoring each and every part of their better half till they felt tired. They slept in each other's arms, feeling content. Finally they were one.

In the other side, Ridhima was sitting in her room with her back rested against the pillow. That day, she felt like going through memory lane. This wedding had stirred something that she had buried deep inside her. The facen the events, everything.

***FLASHBACK***

6 years ago, Ridhima lived with her brother, Arjun and her father, Shashank. Their life was full of happiness, they loved each other a lot. Ridhima was the princess of Arjun and Shashank, they pampered her a lot. Arjun and Ridhima were really close to each other, they shared everything to each other. Apart that, Arjun was really protecting toward Ridhima. One slight bruise on Ridhima and he would made sure that person a lot.

As Shashank was a doctor by profession as well as the dean of Sanjeevani, Ridhima opted for medecine as she was really qeen on helping people. Arjun was a businessman, he was always interested in commerce and trade thus he opted this field. His father and sister were really proud of him.

It was a very beautiful moment, the time was almost 12 o'clock in the midnight. It was a very special day to Arjun and Shashank as their princess came into the world on that day.

Arjun and Shashank had made loads of plans to make her day special. As the clock was going to struck midnight, they toptoed in Ridhima's room. As they reached their, the clock struck and it was midnight. Arjun and Shashank shouted 'Happy Birthday Princess'

But to their shock, there was no reaction. Usually, she would jump out of the blanket but this time nothing. They looked at each other worried and moved forward to take the blanket. At that precise moment, someone jumped on their back.

Arjun and Shashank got scared at the sudden attack but they realized it was their angel. "Angel you scared us" said Arjun, while huggin her.

"so what it's my right" she said with a giggle and hugged her father as well. She was really bubbly and sweet, down to earth.

After the birthday wishes, they moved to cut the cake. Ridhima fed them and then messed up their faces with cake.

"Princess, you are gone" Arjun said, taking hold of a piece of cake.

Instead of moving back, she opened her mouth "first feeed me" she said with a sweet look.

With a sigh, Arjun fed her the cake. She knew very well how to melt her brother. The next whole day, they spent together, sight-seeing, shopping and watching movies. It was a family day in and out.

Nonetheless, she was showered with gifts, not that she needed any as she got gifts from her father and brother every other week.

Such as an incidence of those moments, Ridhima and Arjun were seeing TV when a advertisement of a new mobile went on she really liked it but didn't say a word about it. The very next hour, she had the mobile in front of her, a gift from her brother.

Although, she was pampered badly still she didn't take advantage of it. She didn't behaved like a spoilt brat, she was the most lovable person. She made friends in a snap of finger, that was her magic.

Everything was going smoothly in their life, but then everything changed.

***FLASHBACK END***

Ridhima closed her eyes in pain, she didn't want to remember the bad part of her past as for now. She would make sure, those parts are revealed in front of the right people. Unwillingly, her thought went back to her past but to the time when she met Armaan. He was like a fresh breath in the atmosphere.
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Hey guys,
I am really sorry for the delay, but in the previous note I told you the reason, I was sick.. Finally I am a bit better and was able to complete the editing of the part. Thanks a lot for all of your wishes :D
So Here is the the next part, I really hope you liked the part :D
I truly wish that you enjoyed it and that you would want to read in the future too. :D
I truly wish that you enjoyed it and that you would want to read in the future too. :D

I want to dedicate to all my friends, my readers and to people whom birthday is in March (Happy Birthday guys, may you get all the success and happiness. Be happy and keep everyone happy :D). Apart that a very Happy Holi


Please leave your comments, even a word, good or bad-Or even please press the 'like' button. As your comments mean a lot to me, they encourage me to write further :).
If there is any mistake do tell me, don't hesitate :D

All criticism, suggestion and questions are most welcome.

And I'll PM later :)


Luv u<333
Kashish




Edited by kashishk - 18 March 2011 at 11:25am

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