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Twist Of Fate~AR-RM FF-PromPg146/T:NtPg153-29/7/11 (Page 13)

kashishk IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 5:27am | IP Logged
Originally posted by k_anjali12

I ThinkTom In Ur Note  Means .. Today Na' ?????????????

Hey Hima di,
Well today really meant yesterday but I couldn't, it was a hectic day. When I reached at home, I completed the editing of the short story once I was done, I had to revise for my exam :(
But I'll post it today, as soon as I can :)

Luv u<333

k_anjali12 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 5:50am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kashishk

Originally posted by k_anjali12

I ThinkTom In Ur Note  Means .. Today Na' ?????????????

Hey Hima di,
Well today really meant yesterday but I couldn't, it was a hectic day. When I reached at home, I completed the editing of the short story once I was done, I had to revise for my exam :(
But I'll post it today, as soon as I can :)

Luv u<333

Ohoo Its Ohkies Then .. All The Best For Ur Exam

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kashishk IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 6:05am | IP Logged
PART 1 on PAGE 6


After eating, Ridhima and Rahul cleaned the table and retired to their respective room.

While they were sleeping or trying to sleep. There was a guy, sitting in a hospital ward. He was sitting near a hospital bed. "Vivek bhai...How are you?... I guess fine...bhai she is back...I won't leave her..."

He was talking to the Vivek, who was lying on the bed. He was in coma for the past six years. He was still talking when a nurse called him. "Dr Armaan"

He turned and looked toward the nurse "yes Ms Lovely"

"woh, Minni app ko bula rahi hai"

"Ok I'll come in a while" Armaan said with a nod.

Ms Lovely nodded and left. "Ok bhai, I am going. Take care of yourself, I'll see you in a while" saying that he left and went in the children ward.

Entering in the children ward, he saw a girl in her 11 years. Her arms were crossed against her chest and she was sulking. He knew he was in trouble.

He went to her and said "I am sorry Minnie, mein kuch kaam mein phass gaya tha, please forgive me" there was no effect on her, she was still looking on the other side "So you aren't going to talk with me?" he asked with a pout but this has no effect to then he used his pawn card and took out chocolate from his pocket "hmm ok then I guess, I'll have to give this chocolate to Gappu and take him to watch the..." he was cut before he could finish as Minnie jumped and took the chocolate. Armaan chuckled at this and hugged her.

He kept on enjoying with her and other children's. After a while, he left for his home. Entering in his home, he closed the door and went toward a big photo with a garland. "Abhi bhai, kaise ho aap? Bhai, I miss you so much. You know she is back Ridhima Gupta is back and I promise to destroy her life, so much that she wouldn't be able to take a breath of peace. All the pain she gave us, she'll have to pay for them." he said with rage in his voice and then he wiped his tears.

He then made his way toward his room, before entering in the room, his eyes fall on a room in the other side, the door of that room was locked. He quickly shifted his gaze in the other side and entered in his room. He took his night dress and put it on the bed.

He took a cold shower and stood under the water for several minute on the purpose to calm himself. Coming out he threw the towel on the bed and he quickly got dress in the short and t-shirt he had placed on the bed. He put the towel back in the bathroom.

He came out the bathroom, he knew what to do. He needed relaxation. He called Maya, "hey baby, how are you?"

"I am fine, you tell?" Maya replied, feeling excited.

"I am also fine" He replied in a sweet tone.

"Oh baby! I am so missing you, last night was so much fun" Maya said, with a wide smile.

"If you are missing me that much, why don't you come at my place" said Armaan sexily.

"Oh really?" she asked seductively. Both knew they wanted the same.

"Yeah Really" he replied in a hoarse tone. He knew really well how to play his cards. After all, he was an expert. Moreover, those girls also wanted the same thing as him.

"Ok then baby, I'll be at your place in half on hour" she answered back in a sugar coated tone.

"Ok baby, I'll wait for you" he hung up the phone and went in the kitchen.

He prepared a coffee for himself and drank it. After drinking he placed the cup in sink and making his way in the hall, he turned on the TV.

Soon enough the bell rang, he went to open the door. As he opened the door, he saw her in mini dress, it was like she was wearing nothing, she was wearing a wear short skirt of blue colour and shirt, sleeveless and strapless. The shirt was way more up to her belly.

She leaned forward and hugged him then she kissed him, he too kissed her back. Holding her by her waist, he laid her in a guest room. He made her lie on the bed and then he turned off the light off.

As the sun arisen, Ridhima muttered "please Sun, let me sleep, I am really tired" she mumbled in a kiddish tone, as her request had no effect she mumbled again " Sun you aren't going to let me sleep, right?" she was talking like a cute baby.

In the same time, Rahul entered and saw her mumbling which made him chuckle. He closed the curtain and then he heard "thank you sun" saying that she dozed of again.

Rahul giggled, while shaking her head and left her to sleep. He knew she was tired and she needed to catch up with her sleep. He went in the kitchen, he had his breakfast and he had also prepared the breakfast for Ridhima.

Before leaving, he wrote a note:
'Hey Baby,

I have to go to hospital as I have an important surgery. I would have waken you up, but I know you are tired and you need to sleep . Moreover your duty are starting tomorrow.
You take rest and have your breakfast.
I'll be back at home by afternoon.

Love you baby (k),
Take care,
Bye :D'

He stick the note on the fridge and then he left with his stuff. He entered in the hospital. He stopped and turned as he heard Muskaan's voice."hi" greeted Rahul

"Hi...Didn't Ridhima come?" asked Muskaan

"No, she will come tomorrow as her duty is starting tomorrow. Moreover she is really tired, her night was sleepless." Rahul said casually not noticing that Muskaan has taken it in wrong way.

Listening 'her night was sleepless' made Muskaan sad as she thought they have consumed their relation. As Rahul looked toward her, he understood what she was thinking but he didn't make any attempt to clarify the misunderstanding 'we give clarification to the persons that are our own' thought Rahul . He excused himself and made his way in his cabin.

She was still standing there with tears in her eyes. As she felt a hand on her shoulder, she wiped her tears. Turning toward the other side, she found Armaan. "what happened what were you doing with Rahul?" asked Armaan with concern

"nothing, I was just asking about Ridhima" she replied while wiping her tears with the back of her hand.

"why?" he asked with a frown

"actually she didn't came with Rahul, so I just asked him" she said in low voice. No matter, the more she tried to ignore it the more she was trapped in the web of love.

"hmm and what did he reply?" Armaan asked, with curiosity.

"He said, she'll join from tomorrow" She said looking down.

"ok" then he thought 'Ridhima Gupta, the more you'll stay away from me the more it would be better for you. But I don't want you to be away from me' he smiled evilly.

Around 11:30, Ridhima woke up and saw the time "it's quite late, Rahul hasn't waken me up" she stoop up from the bed and searched Rahul "Rahul...Rahul...RAHUL..." she was now looking in the kitchen when her eyes fell on the fridge. She went there and read that note. A smile took place on her face, he was a really nice person and always took care of her. She left the note stuck there.

She thought, that there was some time for Rahul to come back at home so she would prepare the lunch after taking a bath. She took a shower and wore white jean and yellow shirt.

After that, she went back in the kitchen, quickly had her breakfast. After that she looked in the fridge to see what they have at home and what she could make "hmm...I guess Pizza would be the best...yeah"

She gathered all the stuff to make the pizza. After an hour, she put the second Pizza in the oven. And went to open the door as she heard the bell.

As she opened the door, she saw Rahul with his colleagues "Hmm, actually baby, they wanted to have treat so I thought to have lunch in a restaurant?" he asked her hesitantly.

"no, we'll have lunch at home, come in guys" she greeted all of them expect Armaan, really warmly. "guys take your sit, I am making..." she was interrupted by Rahul

"Pizza, my favorite" he said happily. Muskaan was sad to see that Ridhima knew about Rahul so much and that she was just doing as if it was her own house but then she thought 'well, It would be soon her house or actually, it already is." She was really sad, she had imagined lots of time, her doing the stuff Ridhima was doing.

"Yeah" ridhima confirmed and made her way back in the kitchen.

"Do you want my help?" Rahul offered his services.

"No" she shook her head and continued "with you in the kitchen it would be more creating mess than helping but yeah set the table"

Anjali and Atul chuckled at this and Rahul smiled sheepishly. Rahul set the table and then all sat down, out of habit, Muskaan was going to sit next to Rahul but before she could Rahul said "hmm Muskaan, it's actually Ridhima's place, I hope you don't mind"

She shook her head and sat on the opposite side of the table. Her heart was shattered. Soon Ridhima came and placed the tray on the table with Pizza, and then she sat next to Rahul. Everybody complimented her expect Rahul and Armaan.

"Armaan, didn't you like it?" asked Atul

"It's ok" Replied Armaan casually

"And Rahul you should also praise her" Anjali said with a wink. Clearly she was teasing him.

"hmm actually, there is something miss" said Rahul, ignoring the teasing tone.

"and what is that?" asked Ridhima, with a frown.

"taste it yourself" saying that he placed his piece of pizza near her lips, she took a bite.

"No, Nothing is missing" said Ridhima confusingly

"Oh really?" asked Rahul and took a bite from the same place Ridhima did."hmm actually nothing is missing anymore, you made it tasty" he said in a flirting tone and then winked at her.

Atul and Anjali laughed at them. Meanwhile, Muskaan was feeling bad but she was glad to see that Rahul was happy, that was all she wanted. Armaan wanted to beat Rahul to death, he didn't know why.

"Oh shit, I forgot the water, wait guys, I'll bring it right now" said Ridhima as she noticed water wasn't placed on the table.

"Ridhima you eat, I'll bring it" said Muskaan and Ridhima smiled in response.

Muskaan went in the kitchen and as she was going to open the fridge when her eyes fell on the note. All the words written by Rahul pierced her heart. She was actually crying, she wiped her tears and quickly took the bottle of water then she made her way in the dinning hall.

'how am I going to live without you Rahul' Muskaan thought in her heart. No matter how much she denied with her words but she still loved him a lot.
Hey guys,
I am sorry for updating a day late but I had a hectic day yesterday :(. Anyways, here is the last part, I really hope you liked the part :D
I truly wish that you enjoyed it and that you would want to read in the future too. :D

I have a question, Nikki suggested me to change the title from 'twist of Fate' to 'Fate'. So what do you guys think?

I want to dedicate to all my friends, my readers and to people whom birthday is in January and February (Happy Birthday guys, may you get all the success and happiness. Be happy and keep everyone happy :D).

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If there is any mistake do tell me, don't hesitate :D
All criticism, suggestion and questions are most welcome.
And I'll PM later :)

Luv u<333

Edited by kashishk - 28 January 2011 at 6:07am

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prachi06 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 6:08am | IP Logged



I m first

the part was fantastic

yaar, par i think it was some confusing between rahul and muskaan

pata hi nahi chal raha ki rahul ne kabhi muskaan se pyaar kiya ki nahi

aur apun ke AR ka pakka koi past hai , hai na?????????

continue very soon

Edited by prachi_mjht - 28 January 2011 at 8:44am
k_anjali12 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 6:26am | IP Logged
Nice Update Fazi ... I LoVed It !!!

Armaan .. Hmmm Man !  A Lot More There 2 Reveal Reg. Him N Riiddhima 2  .

Will Be Waiting For It .. The "Them" Which U Used In Last Part Is Reg. Riddhima's Kids ??

Lolz Me N My Stupid Guessings.


Anyways Do Update Soon .. All The Very Best For Ur Exam.

TakeCare ... LoVeE U


Edited by k_anjali12 - 28 January 2011 at 6:56am
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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 6:38am | IP Logged
lobed it...
thnx 4 da pm... n da title fate will be more powerfel n impactful...twist of fate is also very gud bt...fate is more a BIG word...dats jst my opinion..
thnx 4 da pm
sakshilovesAR IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 6:50am | IP Logged


verry nice partt plss dont make AR hate each other!!!

thx for the pm

continuee soon


vidu87 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 6:56am | IP Logged
superb part
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