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awesome suchi .. it was brilliant ...very good characters and each and every one is so realistic

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Chapter 5

Scene 2

 

" Bhaiyyah! You could have asked her to wait. Maine dekha bhi nahi unko" complained ikshu


 

"SHHhhhh…!" Ma paas khadi hai' nudged rithul as he hit his brother on his chest with his elbow.

 


It was their evening tea time together. Rithul was sitting in between Ikshu and Shravan on their living room sofa.

 


"Tayiji, ye aapko kya sooji ki iska naam aap "IKSHU" rakhain. Kithna weird naam hai" teased Rithul as he grabbed one samosa from the plate in front of him.

 


"Ikshu ka matlab hai , mithaas. Aur ye naam mujhe bohot acha laga. Iskay papa ko bhi bohot bha gaya tha ye naam. Hai na shamita" smiled Hansa as she savored the memory in her mind


 

"Han bhabi. Sahih kaha aapnay. Aap ko tho humesha ek ladki ki chah thi sharavan kay baad lekin ye ullu aa gaya." Said Shamita holding Ikshu's ears

 


"Oh please! Mujhe tho tayiji ko ma bulathay hue ajeeb lagtha hai. Meri maa tho aap ho" said Ikshu hugging shamita.

 


"Aur meri maa aap ho" came the voice of Idha who had just arrived back home from her college and hugged Hansa from the back.

 


"Acha adla badli ker li aap dono nay. Ek kay betay ko dusray ne le liya aur dusray ki beti ko pehlay nay. Wah!" Aur main , beech main reh gaya.

 


"Na tayiji ka aur na aapka ma" said Rithul putting up a sad face

 


"Thum tho hum don okay ho!Humaray bablu" Said Hansa kissing on Rithul's forehead.

 


"Shukr hai , ma nay thumhay bablu nahi bulaya sana kay saamnay" reminded Sharavan laughing


 

"Sana.. achi larki hai" said Hansa thoughtfully and then looked at Rithul curiously who had turned his sight away from her.


 

"Ye sana kon hai" interrupted Idha. She was unaware of the happenings in the house earlier but sensed that something else was definitely cooking as she saw Ikshu and Shravan exchange smirks with each other.

 


"Idha, kal milwadengay..kiyun rithul" Said shravan

 


"jo bhi ho, Dolly ko bohot pasand aayi hai. Jab sey gayi hai, usi kay baray main baat ker rahi hai. Ki sana didi nay mujhe candy diya. Voh ithni pyari hai. Voh bohot achi hai… bus ek hi naam jap rahi hai..

 


Sanaa.


 

 

Sanaa..

 


Sanaa" Sighed Sharavan with a mischievous smirk on his face

 

 


'Ye kiskay naam ki jaap ho rahi hai baar baar!" Came the voice of Hasit who was joining the others with Neel.


 

"kuch nahi Papa. Sana ji ki baat ho rahi hai' replied Ikshu

 


"Sana, wonderful Girl! Ithni professionalism dikhayi hai na usnay. I am really impressed. Ithni achi larki hai lekin ek baat mujhe samaj nahi aayi ki voh humaray ghar per kiyun aayi hai kaam kernay ke liye" asked Hasit curiously


 

Neel who had already expressed his concern about this earlier joined his brother in agreement asking for further clarification.

 


Rithul started to feel uneasy. The questions were directed at him as he could feel all their eyes scanning his body language, waiting. He knew that they must have put two and two together but did not wish to accept it this soon.

 


"Ahem…" Rithul cleared his throat

 


"Main abhi aaya. Mujhe ek phone call kerni hai" said Rithul without meeting anyone's eyes

 


"Kisko?" Bhabi ko? Asked Idha laughing out loud.

 


Idha was the blunt one in their house but with the heart of gold. She knew how to say the correct thing at the wrong time.

 


"Kya!?" Said Hasit


 

"Kya!?" said Neel


 

Together.

 


'chup ker' yelled Rithul


'kuch bhi bol jathi hai' he said and scampered out there

 


He could hear their laughter which slowly died out as he headed upstairs towards the cabin that he had made for her.

His heart was racing and the only face that squirmed around him was of Sana.


How he longed to hear her voice, smell the beautiful fragrance that seemed to emerge from her. His thoughts were moving around her face sometimes stopping at her beautiful brown eyes and sometimes flowing along with her long silky black hair.

 


He sat on the chair that earlier had the pleasure to grasp her in its arms and relaxed his back on its soft cushion lost in her thoughts.

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Suchi! Hug OMG, I am so enjoying this story and absolutely falling in love with Rithul. What an utterly adorable guy! Awww, I love how much he is drawn to Sana! Day Dreaming You have written Scene 1 of chapter 5 so beautifully, it was very heart wrenching, Sana's talk with her mother really brings tears to your eyes. Suchi, you are such a brilliant writer that I could actually visualize Sana & Hema's picture, as if it were right in front of me. Nice going!! Clap Waiting to read more of this! Smile Thanks once again for doing such a fabulous job and sharing the SS with all of us. Hug

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Thanks sweetheart it means a LOT~~~~

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Posted: 23 January 2011 at 5:29pm | IP Logged
Wow Suchi mindblowing piece of work loved it specially rithul he is such a sweet and adorable character

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Posted: 23 January 2011 at 6:52pm | IP Logged
Wow Suchi scene 1 of ch 5 was very touching. I felt really sad for Sana and her mom. Thoroughly enjoyed Mehra family's loving masti in scene 2. I am starting to love all your characters. I am kind of partial towards Sana's character, I love her attitude but Rithul seems really cute and lovable too. You have built really wonderful characters.

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Posted: 23 January 2011 at 8:50pm | IP Logged
Suchi...what a contrast between the 2 families...u have set it up so well - Rithul's family is the perfect place for Sana to heal and regain faith in men...that should be one hell of a journey and a treat for us readers...keep up the good work Suchi!!!

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: ) thanks guyzz !! Thank you very much means a LOTTT

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