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Suchi, amazing story. Getting really interested to know what happens next. Please continue soon.

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Chapter 9
Mom meets Mom
Scene 3

'Bhabi, khana lagnay wala hai. Tho sabko bulalain?' asked Shamita

 

'Han , han'

 

'Dolly nay khaas farmaish ki thi , kal walay pasta ki. Usnay ithni achi banayi thi aur Daal bhi!' Said Shamita in a surprised tone.

 

'waqay main. Ithna acha banaya unhonay, pehli dafa khaya tha na..mujhe tho bohot pasand aya. 'Agreed Hansa

 

She looked at Hema and saw that she bore a confused look on her face

 

'Darasal , meray devar kay saat ek haatsa ho gaya tha' explained Hansa

'abh voh teek hai. Doctor kay paas gaye hue hain. Athay hi hongay' she continued quickly looking at Hema's shocked expression.

 

' bohot madad ki na bhabi?' interrupted Shamita

'bilkul. Umr bhi kam hai lekin samajdar ithni , ki bas hum tho hayraan hi reh gaye' said hansa in agreement.

 

'usnay puray ghar waalon ko bari hi samajdari kay saat sambhala. Hum tho ghabra gaye thay. Kuch samaj nahi aa raha tha ki kya karain, kya na karain. Hai na shamita?' asked Hansa

 

'ji bhabi…meri tho jaan hi nikal gayi thi. Agar voh na hothi mujhe nahi lagtha ki hum sahih waqt per hospital pahunchtay ya kuch bhi ker patay' agreed shamita

 

'lagtha hai bohot achi larki hai' said Hema

 

'achi? Humain tho bohot bha gayi. Ithni mehenthi hai ki bus. Aur athm samman tho ithna ki, hairangi wali baat hai, ithni choti umer main aisa pehli baar dekha hai maine.' Said Hansa with a hint of pride in her voice

 

Hema smiled as the image of Sana surfaced in her mind.

 

'Han bhabi, Mera dil jeet kya usnay' added shamita

 

'aapkay yahan kaam kerthi hai' asked Hema

 

'nahi…humaray yahan tho nahi lekin humaray saath kaam kerthi hai. Unka apna business hai aur meray betay kay saath kisi project per kaam ker rahi hai. Maine kabhi pucha nahi' smiled Hansa

 

'aapko milwa dengay abhi' said Hansa

 

'voh apkay ghar per hain?' asked Hema

 

'Ji .. uper office hai humara vahan per hain meray betay kay saath' added shamita.

 

'acha… tho kafi shor hotha hoga' asked Hema

She had assumed that there might be more people working upstairs.

 

'Nahi . bus yahin hai aur koi nahi' said Shamita looking at Hansa. A smirk had grimaced her face but it went away as soon as it had come.

 

Hema realized that there was something more to this.  How can only one person work, but she did not voice her opinion.

 

Hansa did notice the slight crease on Hema's forehead. She knew that Hema must have realized that it was quite odd for a stranger to work in the house of their work partner.

 

'Darasal humara beta unhain bohot pasand kertha hai' said Hansa

 

Hansa was not amongst those people who liked to tell about their family to outside people but she somehow felt that , Hema should know. She could not finger point the reason but she did feel the urge to tell her and to clear any misunderstandings that might have arose in her mind.

 

'Acha!' Smiled Hema

 

'Lekin usnay humain bataya nahi. Aur voh bhi meray khayal main ye nahi janthi ki humara beta unhay pasand kertha hai.  Voh tho kaam kernay aain hain' said Hansa

 

'Han, Rithul, mera beta, voh chahta hai ki pehlay ghar walay ussey milley, janlay aur voh bhi humain jan le. Isiliye Rithul nay usko ghar wali office sey kaam kernay ko kaha hai' added shamita

 

'Aur yahi hua. Humain tho bohot achi lagi. Aur unko bhi hum meray khayal main thoray thoray pasand aa rahe hain. ' added Hansa smiling.

 

'bilkul' said Shamita agreeing.

 

'Ye tho bohot acha socha aapkay betay nain. Aaj kal kay bachay pehlay apnay beech sara kuch tay kerthay hain phir ma baap sey milathay hain. Lekin Jo aapkay betay nay kiya , ye bohot samajdhari wali baat hai' said Hansa surprised thinking about the approach of their son.

 

'ji bilkul. Waise mujhe tho lagtha hai ye sirf humaray betay ki merzi hai' said Hansa

 

'acha kiyun, kya voh larki pasand nahi kerthi? Aapka beta tho bohot acha aur smajdar malum hothay hain' said Hema voicing her thoughts

 

'han lekin merzi tho donon ki honi chahiye' said Hansa.

 

' ji sahih kaha aapnay' agreed Hema

 

'memsahab khana lag gaya hai' announced Makhan.

 

'Chaliye, Hemaji' said Hansa as she got up to show Hema to the Dining room

 

' Shamita thum ja ker sab ko bula ker aao'

 

 

Scene 4

'Papa sambhalkay'

Rithul had returned with Neel from the hospital.

 

Hasna and Shamita rushed towards the door to help Rithul .

 

'Dheeray' Urged Hansa as they walked behind Rithul, who was walking besides Neel.

 

'main teek hun bhabi. Bus Shoulder main dard hai. Thoray dinon main voh bhi teek ho jayega' Said Neel as he walked towards the living room.

 

Neel sits on the Sofa and notices Hema.

 

'Maaf kijiyega…

'Neel, ye Hema hai. Aaj humain super mall main mili thi. Darasal, Dolly humaray haathon sey ghum ho gayi thi…'explained Hansa

 

'fikr nahi karo….'she added quickly looking at Neel who had started to loose color.

 

'Hemaji nay usey humain sahih salamat wapis ker diya' Said hansa as she smiled at Hema and Neel.

 

'Bohot shukriya aapka' Said Neel full of gratitude

 

'BHai sahab , aap sharminda nahi karain. Ye tho mera farz tha' said Hema

 

'Neel chalo khana lag gaya hai. Hema ji, aap aayiye' invited Hansa.

 

'Rithul thumb hi aajao aur , saath le ker aa jana' said shamita as she pointed upstairs towards Sana's room.

 

'Han bhabi lekin main pehlay change ker lun'

Neel left to his room while Hansa, Shamita, Rithul and Hema proceeded towards the dining room.

 

'Oh my God!' Exclaimed Rithul as he hit himself on the forehead.

 

'maine File ki CD ghadi main hi rakh di' he said turning towards to the main door

 

'Kya hua? Kahan ja rahe ho?' asked Shamita

 

'Ma, voh unko file deni thi' He said as his eyes flickerd towards Sana's room

'Agar nahi di na , bus, bohot naraz ho jayengi' said Rithul.

 

Hema looked at Rithul and smiled at his child like innocence.

 

'Koi baat nahi , pehlay khana kha lo. Vaise bhi lunch hai na voh bhi neechay hi aathin hongi. Phir le aana' said Hansa

 

'Oh no no Tayiji. Voh tho pehlay sey naraz rehthi hai mujhsey. Main nahi chahtha ki voh aur bhi naraaz ho jaye. Aap tho janthi hai na, kitni particular hai' Said Rithul as he dashed out towards the main door.

 

Hansa, Shamita and Hema looked at each other and giggled together thinking about Rithul's behavior.

 

'Pagal..' said Shamita as she shook her head.

 

'aap ayiye'

 

 

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Chapter 10

Out in the Open

Scene 1

 

'baitiye' said Hansa as she pulled the dining chair for Hema.

 

'Aap bhi'

 

'Shamita zara dekho na. Sabhi log aye kiyun nahi abhi tak' whispered Hansa

'Lo, Rithul aa gaya' Shamita indicated towards the door as she saw Rithul walk into the Dining room.

 

'Thank God. Voh aayi nahi na abhi tak?' He asked his mother

Shamita smiled at him and said no.

'Thu ithna pareshan kiyun ho raha hai' she laughed.

'Main abhi unko de ker aatha hun' said Rithul as he made his way towards the stairs.

 

After few minutes, Neel had joined the table. He had informed Hansa that , Hasit would not be joining the lunch with them today as he had extra errands to run due to Neels' absence.

 

'Dolly nazar nahi aa rahi hai' asked Neel

'Voh so rahi hai' answered Shamita

'Aur humaray Rithul sahab?'

'Voh uper gaye hain. Kuch file denay gaye hain'

'Hema ji aap humaray ghar aayin. Bohot Shukriya. Waise aap yahin shehar main rehthi hain?' asked Neel

 

'JI nahi main kal hi Florida sey aayi hun' answered Hema

'Neel, Ye apni beti sey milnay aayin hain' said Hema.

 

'Shamita bulao unko dair ho rahi hai' lo aa gaye dono' said Hansa as she pointed towards the stairs.

 

Hema looked up and saw that Rithul was walking with a girl besides him

She was unable to see her face as his broad shoulders obscured them.

 

'Kithni dair laga di. Hema ji kab sey intezaar ker rahi hain' said Hansa as Rithul moved towards the side where Neel was sitting, allowing Sana to be completely visible.

 

'MOM!? AAP?" Exclaimed Sana..

'Aap yahan kya ker rahi hain!?' Cried Sana, wide eyed.

'Sana? ' said Hema meekly not able to understand the turn of events.

 

Hansa, Shamita, Neel and Rithul Stared at both mother and daughter. For a moment no one spoke.

 

'S-Sapna le ker aayi hai aapko?' asked Sana waiting for an answer.

 

'Nahi beta voh main. Amm' Hema seemed to have lost her words.

 

'Sana, beta, ye tho hansa aur shamita ko supermall main mili thi. Darasal dolly kho gayi aur inhonay kafi madad ki thi'unko.' Said Neel

 

'Leking what a pleasant surprise! Hemaji ye tho aur bhi kushi ki baat hai ki aap Sana ki ma hain' said Neel smiling looking at Hansa and Shamita who seemed to have gone mute.

 

'Bhabhi.. amm Bhabi' Neel called out trying to wake hansa up.

 

There was a sudden worry that had come over Hansa's face. She wanted to think on the revalation but, she decided to let it pass.

 

'Sana baito beta' offered Shamita, who seemed a little hesitant as well.

 

Sana sat besides Hema looking completely taken aback. This was the last thing she had expected.

 

Rithul, who had been sitting besides Neel, seemed extremely uncomfortable.

 

Every one except Neel and Sana were feeling bit disoriented.

 

'Kya ho gaya hai sabh ko?' asked Neel

'Lunch nahi karengay koi?' he asked

The silence mounted on

 

'Meray khayal main mujhe jana chahiye' Said Hema suddenly

 

Sana looked at her mother's tensed face and knew at once that something had happened.

'Mom kya hua?' she asked in an undertone.

'Sabh teek tho hai na'

 

'Han lekin, Mujhe jana chahiye aur agar thum bhi chalogi tho..?' she asked Sana

 

'han lekin..' continued Sana looking bewildered

 

'Excuse me Mr. Mehra. I have to go now- I am sorry' She said

 

Hansa who had been staring at her came forth and took Hema's hands.

 

' aap meray saath chaliye' she said as she gently tugged Hema's hands.

 

'Nahi mujhe jana chahiye..' said Hema her expressions disoriented.

 

'please' '

 

'Mrs. Mehra'' Started Sana

 

Hansa asked Sana to stop by gesturing with her hands.

 

Shamita looked worried. Rithul, Sana and Neel looked confused as they saw Hema leading Hansa towards her room

 

Scene 2

 

'Hemaji. Main bohot sharminda hun. Mujhe pata nahi tha ' lekin .. ek tarah sey acha hi hua ki aapko humaray iradon ka pata chal gaya' said Hansa seriously.

Hema was sitting with Hansa on the Sofa. 

 

'Aur jo kuch bhi kaha maine, ye hum sabh chahthay hain. Lekin aap ma hain unki aur aapki merzi kay bina tho hum kuch soch bhi nahi sakthay'

'Rithul sana ko pasand kertha hai lekin , jaise ki maine aapko bataya tha, Ye sirf aur sirf uska khayal hai, Sana ka nahi' assured Hansa

 

Hema sat in silence looking intently at the floor, listening.

 

'Lekin aapsey main maafi zaroor mangungi. Koi bhi ma apni beti kay baray main is tarah, sunna tho pasand nahi karegi. Isiliye aap humain is anjanay main hui galthi ke liye maaf kijiye ga' said Hansa as she held Hema's hands

 

' Nahi .. Hansa ji. Aaisi baat nahi hai. Mujhe us baat ka bura nahi laga hai.' Said Hema shaking her head

 

'Mujhe bas'.voh.. maine aapsay apnay baray main aur Sana kay baray main bata diya 'Sana , agar usey pata chalega tho voh bohot naraz aur udas ho jayegi' Said Hema, worried.


'Sana is mamlay main bohot sensitive hai. voh..agar.. aur voh tho yahan kaam kerthi hai!' cried Hema with worry. She knew that Sana did not like discussing about her personal matters and hated to gain any sort of sympathy. 

 

Hansa sighed with relief.

 

'Aap iski bilkul fikr na karain. Main Kabhi nahi bataungi. Aur rahi baat Sana ki. Hum unhay thora jaan hi chukain hain' Said Hema slightly patting her hands.

 

Hema smiled at Hansa

 

'meray khayal main chalna chahiye'

'han bilkul'

'Lekin bahar Sana ko kya batayengay. Ussey main kabhi bhi koi baat chupa nahi sakthi' added Hema with a worry

' uski aap fikr na karain' assured Hansa

 

 

 

 



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wow suchitra....fantastic as usual....cant wait to read more.........

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awesome part loved it 

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Suchi... Wonderful... :) I had put some random faces for all the charac and even the scenes flashes on my mind as if am watching a movie... Thanks for making our weekdays also very special.. hugs dear..!!!!


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hey suchitra ji.....hopefully you cnt soon cant wait to read more.....

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