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Chapter 8
The Return!
Scene 1


Idha had returned from her college and Sana, who had been waiting for her sitting on the sofa in the living room, knew at once that the news had reached her.

 

'Di.. !' Idha ran towards Sana and hugged her.

's.sab meri galthi hai. Meri wajay sey papa ko aaj.. s'sab meri wajay sey' cried Idha

 

'Idha please calm down. Papa teekh hain. Abhi meri thumaray bhayyah sey baat hui hai. Voh bilkul teek hain' assured Sana

 

Idha continued to cry as Sana made her sit besides her. Nothing that she said did much good.

 

'Dekho , Tum agar is tarah rothi rahogi aur apnay aap ko dosh dogi tho, kya, jo bhi hua hai aaj , be maine nahi ho jayega? Reasoned Sana

 

Idha looked up , teary eyed  and confused.

 

'Your brother has taken such a bold step in assuring your father that, you, are going to continue your studies and none of , what ever that had happened, is your fault. He also helped get rid of that, excuse for a human being , Roney' Explained Sana

 

'Today, what has happened is unfortunate, but, It will put Roney behind bars and away for Good. So do not blame yourselves. You need to be strong. Your Dad needs you, your family needs you' Said Sana as she gently wiped Idha tears off with a tissue.

 

'ji di, aap sahih keh rahi hain' said Idha, with a small sniff.

 

'Ok good. Chalo kuch banathay hain. Jab sabh ghar per waapis ayengay tho khana tho hai na?' Said Sana cheerfully

 

Idha smiled and led Sana towards the kitchen.

 

'HUmaray ghar main khana , Mom aur choti ma banathi hain lekin naukar hain jo baki ka kaam dekhthay hain. You know cleaning, cutting the vegetables wagairah' explained Idha as she took Sana into their kitchen.

 

The kitchen was fully equipped with all the modern day appliances. The counter that stood in the middle of the room was made of granite matching perfectly with the floor.

 

'Ok what do you want to eat? Hmm How about some good old Pasta. Yumm.. thumhay acha laghta hai?' asked Sana

 

Idha smiled at her nodding.

' ok wait ingredients tho hai na? waise mujhe Indian cooking bhi aathi hai' Said Sana

'aap yahan sey nahi ho di?' asked Idha curiously

'Yahin sey hun lekin, Main U.S. main pali badi hun' said Sana

'really?'

'mmhmm.. acha ingredients hai ya , aloo kay paratay khanay hai' said Sana as she laughed out loud

'han ye uper cabinet main hai aur saray sauces bhi yahin hai' said idha pointing to the top cabinet.

 

Sana took out the pasta and placed a pot filled with water on the stove and turned it on.

'So lets cut some nice veggies while the water boils' said Sana now heading towards the refrigerator.

'May I?' she asked Idha

'Yes please' Idha rushed to help her

 

As they prepared the vegetables and the sauce, Sana talked to Idha about her interests. Books, Sports, Songs, Favorite Vacation Stories and more. Idha felt completely light and all her worries, guilt, and fear were gone.

 

'Di, mujhe bohot bura laga tha jab Naina bhabi apnay maaykay gayi. Lekin unko jana para tha. Unki ma bemaar hai na. Maine socha ki main unko bohot miss karungi. Voh akeli hain ghar per jinkay saath main khul ker baat kerthi thi. Lekin aap nay unki kami nahi mehsoos honay di mujhe. Thanks' said Idha filled with gratitude.  

 

'Lagtha hai Dolly aa gayi hai' Said Sana as she heard the honk of the bus outside the house.

' Suno usey nahi batana ki kya hua hai' Sana warned Idha as they headed towards the main door to receive Dolly.

 

'Main aa gayi' Announced Dolly

 

'Welcome back!' said Sana as she took Dolly's school bag from her hands.

'Didi aap? Choti dadi aur Badi dadi kahan hain? She asked looking around

 

'Dolly, thum andhar chalo. Pata hai maine aaj kya banaya hain?' asked Sana her eyes shining with excitement

 

'aapnay banaya hai? Lekin kiyun.. ghar per sabh kahan hai?' asked Dolly looking around the house

 

'han maine banaya hai. OK lets get freshned up first and then aapkay liye Hot and Sizzling creamy pasta!' Exclaimed Sana

 

'Wow! Pasta really? Aapnay banaya hai?' asked Dolly excited

 

'Idha-bo choti dadi kahan hain?' asked Dolly yet again

 

'ok , Dolly, Neel Dada ko chot lagi hai aur unko doctor kay paas le ker gaye thay , tho abhi choti dadi aur badi dadi unko wapis ghar lanay ke liye gayain hain' explained Sana

 

'chot lagi hai? Kahan?' asked Dolly

 

'Main batati hun lekin pehlay aap dress change kijiye phir hum bait ker araam sey , khana khathay hu discuss karengay ok?' said Sana as she asked idha to help Dolly change from her school uniform.

 

Sana set the table for two and placed the bowl of pasta in the middle of the table.

 

'aap khana nahi kha rahi hain di?' asked Idha

'nahi. Mujhe bhuk nahi hai. Thum dono kha lo main abhi aathi hun' said Sana as she headed back to the kitchen

 

'chotay dadu ko kya hua?' asked Dolly

'kuch nahi. Unko chot lag gayi aur doctor ko dikhanay le gaye hain sabh' said Idha

 

Sana went inside the kitchen and made sure that there was enough food for the entire family. She looked on the top cabinet and found some yellow lentils. She quickly poured some lentils in boililng wanter and returned to the table.

 

'Di aap kahan chali gayi' asked Idha

'Kahin nahi. Yahan sabh teekh hai na' asked Sana

 

Sana returned back to the kitchen and continued preparing the lentil soup and Bhindi curry. She was a very quick cook. Often times it took her twenty to twenty five minutes to make a decent meal. She had gotten used to it due to her hectic schedule and heavy work load.

 

'aapko kuch chahiye' asked the maid. Sana had seen her the day before. It seemed that she had just arrived.

 

'nahi. aap jayiye aur dekhiye ki kahin idha ko kuch zaroorat tho nahi' replied Sana. She saw the dishes that were piled up but did not want to tell the maid to wash.

 

'Di aap ye kya ker rahi ho' Idha rushed towards Sana to stop her from washing the dishes. Ye ker legi. Aap please chaliye. Aur ye aur kya bana diya hai aapnay' said Idha surprised.

 

'Kuch nahi. Soup hai. Voh athay hi kuch heavy tho kha nahi sakthay , isiliye. And its no big deal so relax ok. Mujhe adat hai' said Sana gently

 

'Lekin aap dishes kiyun wash ker rahi hain. Ye hai na. Please chaliye' Urged Idha pulling Sana's hand away from the kitchen sink.

 

'Its done. Please idha relax. I cooked so I clean. Mujeh kisi ko apna kaam denay ki adat nahi hai' Said sana as she washed her foamy hands off.

 

 

Scene 2



'Lagtha hai voh sabh aa gaye hain' Said Idha loudly as she heard the honking of their cars.  

 

'Sambhalkay'dheeray' Said shamita as she followed Neel who walked with his left arm around Rithul.

 

The doctors had placed a plaster on his arm for support so that the wound could heal easily. They did not want any sort of pressure on the shoulders.

 

'Rithul thum , papa ko humaray kamray tak le aao' suggested Shamita

 

Doctors nay kya kaha asked Idha, as Hansa, Ikshu, Shravan, Hasit made their way towards the living room.

 

'Maakhan , sab ke liye kuch peenay ke liye le ker aao' Said Hansa

 

'Mujhe tho abhi bhi yaqeen nahi hotha. Ithna kuch ho gaya aur kisi nay bhi mujhe batana munasib nahi samjha' said Shravan Angrily.

'Ek din kya main kaam main masroof ho gaya, ithna kuch ho gaya ghar per!' he continued.

 

'Shravan. Abh bas' Said Hansa with a commanding tone

 

Hansa noticed that her husband was awfully quiet. She knew that Neel was very close to him and such an incident had definitely shook him.

 

'Suniye, aap fikr na karain. Uperwalay nay hum sabh per ithni badi meherbani ki hai ki Neel sahih salamat hai. Aur jo chot hai voh ithni gehri bhi nahi' assured Hansa

 

'Dolly aa gayi?' she asked turning towards Idha

 

'Ji'

 

'Aur han Sana. Beta thank you. Aap humaray liye rukhi, hum bohot abhari hai' said Hansa turning towards Sana who had been lurking in the background looking at her watch.

 

'Yes thank you sana. Very.. very much. I really appreciate what you had done for us today' Said Rithul who now joined Hansa

 

'Rukhi? Exclaimed Idha shaking her head at Hansa and RIthul

 

'Ma ye pucho ki kya nahi kiya. Meri tho halat bohot kharab thi jab mujhe papa ka pata chala. Mujhe inhonay sambhala aur ye hi nahi, Dolly aur meray liye Pasta banaya. Aur aap sabh ke liye bhi .

Aur chotay papa ke liye Soup.

 

Everyone in the room stared at Sana as if they were seeing some wonderous creature that had been just discovered. Sana felt extremely conscious and wished to leave as soon as possible.

 

'Ithna kuch kernay ki kiya zaroorat thi beta. Aapko khamakha takleef '.

'ma voh tho teek hai. Unhonay tho dishes bhi wash ker diye' interrupted Idha with complete disbelief.

 

Hansa got off the sofa and went near Sana.

'Beta ithna kuch kernay ki kya zaroorat thi' she asked

 

'Its no big deal Mrs. Mehra. I am glad ki Mr. Mehra teek hai aur out of danger hai' said sana with a smile

 

Rithul looked at her with fascination and full of gratitude.

 

'lekin aapnay dishes'' started Hansa wishing to say sorry

 

' Oh , Mujhe apna kaam kudh kerna acha lagtha hai. Dishes tho meri vajah sey wahan jama ho gaye so maine saaf ker diya. Please aap ithni pareshan math hoyiyega' Said Sana

 

'Thank you Sana. Aapnay waqay main bohot kuch kerdiya humaray liye aaj' said Hasit with gratitude.

 

' Its ok. Mrs mehra mujhe abhi jana chahiye. Main late ho gayi hun aur mujhe kahin aur bhi jana hai. Agar aapko meri zaroorat ho tho please do not hesitate' said Sana putting her purse on her shoulders.

 

'Main aapko drop kerdetha hun' offered Rithul

 

'No thank you. I will go myself. Waise bhi you had a big day. Acha take care ' Said Sana and she left leaving everyone stunned.


Scene 3 



 

'MOM!' Shouted Sana as she waved her hands at a woman who smiled and waved back at her


'Oh Mom! Finally ! ' Said Sana as she hugged Hema.


 

Sana's mom had called the previous night telling her about her return to India.

 


Tears streamed out of her eyes as she continued hugging her mother never wanting to let go.


 

'Its ok… I am fine. Really' said Hema patting Sana's back


 

They got out of the airport and signaled for the taxi. Sana placed her mother's suitcase into the back trunk and opened the door for her to enter.


 

'Its so good to see you mom. I missed you' Said Sana as she placed her head on her mother's shoulders.


 

It seemed like an eternity but it had been only 48 hours, since her mom broke the news of their divorce.


Sana had been so caught up at the incidents at Mehra house that she did not have time to think about this matter. It somehow did not bother her as she was glad that there was something that kept her mind pre-occupied.

 

'so Howz work?' asked Hema


'Its ok'


'Made new friends?'


'sure' said Sana sarcasm gushing out with every syllable  

 

They had arrived back at her apartment.

 

'AUNTY!!' Screamed Sapna as she rushed towards Hema and hugged her.


'Sapna. Kaisi ho beta?' asked Hema smiling


'Teek hun. First class' Exclaimed Sapna happily


 

All the three of them had dinner together. Sapna talked profusely about her life with Sana and her non existaent love life. Hema, being an excellent listener enjoyed every moment of it. Joining in at correct moments by adding perfect comments.


 

It was time for bed. As Sana helped her mom pick out her night dress

' This is for you' said Hema as she gave Sana a gift wrapped box

 


'what is it?' asked Sana excited

 


'Make up kit!' teased Hema


 

'yeah right' Said Sana as she unwrapped her gift. She felt like the school girl , the little sana, who received presents from her parents everytime she did achieved something.

 


'Oh wow! An iPad !. This is just perfect' Said Sana as she hugged her.

 

'Lekin mom…ye kiyun? maine kya achieve kiya hai?' she asked. One's parents' divorce is not something that one would an achievement or even a matter of celebration.


 

'This is for the success of your company' Said Hema as she stroke her daughter's child gently


 

Sana smiled at her.


 

'Mom, get some sleep. Kal kaam per jana hai mujhe. I will come back at 5:30 and we will go out for dinner. Teekh hai' Said Sana as she kissed her mom goodnight.

 


 

 




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Chapter 9

Mom Meets Mom

Scene 1


'Shamita zara dolly ka haat pakadna' Said Hansa as Dolly got down from their car following Shamita.

 


'ji bhabi. Acha kiya ki hum jaldi aa gaye. Yahan sey grocery shopping kerkay hum kya –Hand Designers- kay paas rukh sakthay hain? Thoray kapray stitch kernay ke liye diye thay voh pick ker lengay' asked Shamita

as all of the three of them entered into the super mall.


 

'Han time hua tho chale jayengay' said Hansa.


 

"choti dadi main aapkay saath jaun?' asked Dolly


 

'Sab pata hai mujhe. Main jahan ja rahi hun wahan candy bhi tho hai.. hai na? asked Shamita smiling at her granddaughter.

 

' Acha thum dono jaldi jao main tab tak dusri chezain le lethi hun' said Hansa and she disappeared behind the long isles.

 

Fifteen minutes had passed. Shamita and Dolly started looking for Hansa in different isles.

 

'Sab kuch le liya?' came the voice of Hansa from their back.

 

'Are bhabi..chalo.. han..han le liya. Hum aapko dund rahe thay' said Shamita

 

'Badi dadi aap humaray saath eye-spy khel rahi thi?'

 

Hansa smiled at Dolly pulling her cheeks and turned around

 

'Oh ! Maaf kijiyega ….maine dekha nahi' Said a woman who had emerged from the Isle with her cart

 

'koi baat nahi' smiled Hansa.

 

 

 

After paying the money at the counter they left with their cart towards the car.

 

'Makhan ye sabh saman andhar rakh do' Said Shamita as she started looking in her purse searching for something.

 

'Kya dund rahi ho shamita?' asked Hansa

 

'Bhabi maine voh receipt pata nahi kahan rakh di. Vohi dund rahi hun'

 

'Dolly kahan hai' asked Hansa looking around

 

Shamita looked up and saw that Dolly was not standing around.

'Abhi tho yahin thi'

 

'Dolly …Dolly' shouted Shamita. She started looking frantically everywhere.

 

'Dolly….. Dolly…. Makhan jaldi jaao aur dekho kahin andhar tho nahi reh gayi' Yelled Hansa

 

Tears started to flow from Shamita's eyes.

 

'bhabi.. abh kya karay…m….mujh….mujhe samaj nahi aa raha hai, N.naina ko kya kahungi…' Stammered Shamita , tears flowing profusely

 

'shant ho jao shamita, Kahan jayegi. Andhar hogi . Makhan abhi leker aayega use' said Hansa

 

'Mem sahab , Dolly baby andhar nahi hai' Said Makhan as he came running from the mall.

 

'Kya? B…bhabi abh kya hoga' said Shamita with new renewed sobs.

 

'Choti Dadi!! … Badi Dadi!... ' came the voice of Dolly

 

Hansa and Shamita looked around them trying to see where the voice had come from and then they saw Dolly walking towards them holding a woman's hand.

 

'Dolly!' squeaked Shamita as she ran towards her.

 

'Kahan chali gayi thi thum?'

Shamita knelt down and hugged her. She touched her face and her head as if trying to find something wrong with her

 

'aapki bachi road cross kernay lagi thi. Maine use aapkay saath dekha tha … andhar.. ' Smiled the woman offering her hand for a shake.

 

Hansa realized that it was the same woman who's cart she had almost hit earlier.

 

 

'bohot shukriya aapka…..' said Hansa taking her hand and shaking it.

 

It was clear that this woman was new to the city if not the country as she had offered her hands for a shake rather than a simple verbal salutation.

 

'Koi baat nahi… bachay hain. Ho jatha hai' She smiled.

 

'Acha beta. Abhi kahin chali nahi jana…teekh hai'

 

'Acha main chalthi hun. Bye' Said the woman and she started to turn her cart around to walk away.

 

' Are please, rukiye. Aap aise kaise ja sakthi hain?' said shamita getting up and holding dolly's hand

 

'ji bilkul. Aapnay humaray uper ithna bara upkar kiya hai. Hum aapko aise nahi janay dengay. Mera naam Hansa hai aur ye Shamita. Meri devrani' Said Hansa

 

'Mera naam Hema hai'

 

'Aaj aap humaray saath lunch kijiyega' offered Hansa

 

'oh , please, its ok.. thank you. Aapnay ithna socha yahi meray liye kaafi hai' Smiled Hema

 

'Dekhiye, humain bohot acha lagega agar aap humaray saath chalengi. Kam se kam Ithna tho ker sakthay hain' said Shamita

 

'Han aunty chaliye please… pleaseeeeeeeeeee' Said Dolly now holding Hema's hands.

 

Hema smiled at Dolly and gently stroke her hair.

 

'Actually main kal hi aayi thi. Aur maine socha tha ki ghar jaker apni beti ka man pasand khana banaun. Kafi dinon kay baad saath waqt guzarnay walay' explained Hema

 

'Acha, teekh  hai. Tho aap apni beti kay saath aaj humaray saath dinner kariyega. Please aap nahi janthi ki aapnay humaray uper kithna bara ehsaan kiya hai" continued Hansa

 

'Ismay ehsaan wali kya baat hai. Akhir main bhi tho ma hun. Mujhe tho is baat ki kushi hai ki aapki bachi sahih salamat aap tak pahunch gayi' said Hema

 

'tho Please humaray khatir aaj ka din aap humaray saath hi guzarengi'

 

'Maakhan. Inki cheezain gadi main rakh do aur inkay ghar drop ker do. Aur humain ghar chornay kay baad in cheezon ko unkay ghar chor aana aur unki beti ko saath le ker aana'

Said Hansa

 

'Aur aapki beti main call karungi aur invite karungi. Aap humaray saath humaray ghar chaliye aur meray puray parivar sey milyega jo aapka abhari hai' requested Hansa

 

Hema for some reason could not refuse the lady in front of her. Her voice was gentle and filled with compassion and gratitude.

 

 

'teekh hai, lekin main shaam tak chali jaaungi kiyunki wakay main mujhe ghar jaldi jana hai' said Hema

 

"teek hai , aap chaliye' said Hansa opening the door of their mini van for Hema.

 

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Scene 2

 

' Aap yahan rehthi thi pehlay' asked Shamita?

 

'ji nahi, Main kal hi Florida sey aayi hun'

 

The three of them were sitting in the back seat and Dolly was sitting in the second row behind the driver.

 

'acha .. aap pehlay yahan rehthi thi?' asked Shamita

 

'nahi, main Lucknow ki hun lekin.. kaafi salon ki baad aayi hun'

 

'acha..tho aapkay liye tho ye shehar naya hai' said Hansa

 

'ji. Isliye meri beti nay mujhe strict instructions diye thay ki main ghar sey bahar nahi jaaun. Lekin main chahthi thi ki main uskay liye kuch banaun, isililye Super Mall aa gayi'

 

'han ye tho bohot acha socha aapnay. Ma kay haat ka khana, har waqt naseeb tho nahi hotha' said Hansa smiling.

 

'ji'

 

They had arrived at their house. Shamita got out of the car from the side door and held on to Dolly's hand as she jumped out of their mini van.

 

'aayiye' invited Hansa

 

They made Hema sit down in their living room.

 

' main abhi aayi. Dolly ko kuch khila ker aathi hun' said Shamita

 

'aap please bhabi kay saath baitiye'

 

' Han shamita aap jao, thak gayi hogi ye aur agar sona chahthi hai tho sula dena' said Hansa to shamita 

 

'ji bhabi' said Shamita as she walked away from the living room.

 

'Maaf kijiyega. Dolly bohot chidchidi ho jathi hai agar jab voh thak jathi hai' said Hansa apologetically

 

'Its ok. Main samaj sakthi hun' said Hema smiling.

 

Just then their maid arrived with refreshments

 

'please lijiye' said Hansa as she offered Hema a glass of chilled orange juice.

 

'Thank you' said Hema , hesitantly taking the glass in her hands.

 

 

'Main intezaar nahi ker paa rahi hun Neel ka, meray devar. Jaan chidaktha hai Dolly kay uper. Agar aapko ghar nahi le ker aathi. Voh mujhsey naraaz hi ho jathay' Said Hansa

 

'Acha' laughed Hema

 

'ji, waise Dolly meray betay ki beti hai. Uski ma apnay maaikay gayi hui hai. Badi mushkil sey rukhi hai yahan per. Apni ma kay bina tho rehthi hi nahi hai. Lekin Shamita kay saath uska bohot lagav hai. Jab ma nahi hothi voh agay pechay rahthi hai' said Hansa

 

'Ye bohot achi baat hai. Bachaon ka dil tho bohot komal hotha hai. Jahan sneh dekha wahin mudh gaye' smiled Hema

 

'ji bilkul kaha aapnay. Abh Shamita ki beti , voh mujhe ma bulathi hai aur mera chota beta usey ma aur mujhe tayiji' laughed Hansa

 

'achaa..' Laughed Hema

 

'Laghtha hai aapkay ghar main bohot pyar basa hai' said Hema with almost a wishful smile

 

'Ji ye tho hai. Iskay liye tho main har din uperwalay ka shukr adha karethi hun' said Hansa thankfully.

 

'aapnay kaha ki aapki beti sey milnay aayin hai aap. Shadishuda hai? Asked hansa assuming that she had come to meet her married daughter.

 

'nahi. nahi. Shadi nahi hui hai. Voh yahan per apna business settle kernay aayi thi' said Hema

 

'acha, ye tho bohot achi baat hai' said Hansa

 

Hansa noticed that Hema looked like someone she knew. She stared at her for few moments and when Hema looked at her Hansa quickly looked away not wanting to embarrass her.

 

'maaf kijiyega.. aapka chehra bohot jana pehchana sa lagtha hai. Jaise main aapko pehlay kahin dekha hai' said Hansa after realizing that Hema did feel awkward

 

'ho saktha hai. Lekin mujhe pata hai ki aapnay mujhe nahi dekha hoga. Main tho kal hi aayi hun' smiled Hema

 

'ji .. ji.. aur batayiye aap kithay dinon ke liye hain yahan per? ' asked Hansa wanting to change the topic

 

'bus , abhi tho beti ki shadi kerni hai, Isiliye aayi hun …..

 

…..aur phir waapis' said Hema after she took a sip from her glass.

 

' ye bohot kushi ki baat hai. Mujhe unsey baat karayiyega. Yaad hai aapko ki aaj ka dinner saath hi kerna hai' reminded Hansa

 

'nahi .. nahi mujhe abh chalna chahiye. Dair ho gayi hai kaafi' Said Hema trying to look for her handbag.

 

'ye kaise ho saktha hai. Meray ghar walay tho naraz ho jayengay mujhsey. Tho aapko meray khatir aaj rukhna hi parega' requested hansa with a very kind and gentle tone 

 

Hema could not refuse.

 

'Teekh hai main apni beti ko bata dethi hun warna voh tho bohot naraz ho jayegi' said Hema

 

'Hello , beta main mom bol rahi hun.

 

Teek hun.

 

 Main aaj thori dair sey aaungi kahin jana pada hai.

 

Main aaker bataungi..

 

Han han main teekh hun. Bachi tho nahi hun abh ki kho jaungi.

 

Thum fikr nahi karo main nikalnay sey pehlay phone kerdungi

 

Bye'

 

 

'aapnay tho apni beti ko invite nahi kiya' Asked Hema

 

'Voh.. darasal baat ye hai ki voh kaam per hai aur waise bhi use bahar jana ithna pasand nahi' said Hema

 

'acha'

 

Hansa noticed a sudden change in Hema's face. She knew that as a mother the only thing that would worry her was her daughter's well being.

 

'Dekhkiye.. main aapko uncomfortable nahi kerna chahthi hun lekin agar meray layak koi bhi kaam ho tho please batayiyega. Ithna farz tho mera bantha hi hai' said Hema humbly

 

'shukriya' sighed Hema

 

'Meri bas ek hi khawaish hai ki meri beti ki shadi ho jaye aur voh kush rahe' said Hema

 

'Han tho ismay kya dikkat wali baat hai. Zaroor yehi hoga aap chintha bilkul na karain ' said Hansa in a consoling tone.

 

'ji.. umeed hai lekin bus dar laga rehtha hai'

 

Hansa realized that there was more to what Hema was saying. It seemed very odd that a daughter was staying away from her parents and living in India and not with them in U.S. But she did not wish to pry more into the matter

 

'ismay darnay ki kya baat hai. Aap acha sochiye aur waise aapki beti aapki tarah hi hogi. Tho mushkil wali baat tho hai hi nahi' said Hansa

 

'Ji , beti meri tho bohot pyari hai. Bohot mehanthi. Ithni ki jo kaam kernay ka voh irada ker lethi hai -usey karke hi chorthi hai. Uski tareef jithni bhi karun kam hai aur main isiliye nahi keh rahi hun ki voh meri beti hai , .. nahi…

 

lekin isliye ki voh bohot achi insaan hai. Apnay dard sey zyada use dusron kay dard ka fikr rehtha hai' Said Hema staring at the glass she had placed on the table , lost her in thoughts.

 

'vah, aapki awaaz bata rahi hai ki aap apni beti ko sirf pyar hi nahi , uski Qadr bhi bohot kerthi hain' said Hansa in awe of what she heard.

 

'ji, Qadr tho main kerthi hun. Isiliye darthi hun.

 

Hema looked at Hansa and saw that her words had confused her

 

'Voh apnay dukh kisi ko nahi batati. Lekin ma hun , pata hai mujhe.

 

Uskay papa aur main alag ho chuke hain.

 

Haal hi main  hue thay , lekin sahih mainey main alag tho kaafi saal pehlay hi ho gaye thay.

 

Aur jabsey meri beti nay apnay hosh sambhalay hain, tab sey voh har din is tanav ko parthi aayi hai, dekhti aayi hai aur samajthi bhi ayi hai.

 

Bachpan tho uska meray hi ghamon main kho gaya aur ma tho kaafi pehlay ban gayi thi.

 

Ek Ma ki tarah usnay mujhe sambhala hai. Apnay aanson ko pee ker meray zakhmon per marham lagaya hai.

 

 

Lekin bachi hai, kithna sahegi. Ye janthi thi main

 

 Maine seh liya.. aurat hun. Lekin voh kiyun sahe

 

Voh chali aayi yahan, meray kehnay per. Lekin jathay hue ye keh gayi ki

 

"ma aap meri zimmedari ho. Aap fikr na karo main sabh kuch sambhal lungi'

 

aur aaj usnay bohot badi company khol li hai. Naam bhi kafi kama liya hai.

 

Lekin , ek deewar khara ker liya hai usnay. Kisi ko paas nahi aanay dethi.

 

Aur isi baat ka mujhe dar hai.

 

Voh jab kisi ko apnay kareeb anay hi nahi dethi tho main kaise shadi karun uski.

 

Mujhe jo mila so mila.. lekin uskay saath kuch bura na ho" Said Hema .

 

There was sadness in her voice. Hansa felt her eyes prickle and realized that she had tears in them.

 

'maaf kijiye main tho apni kahani leker bait gayi' said Hema with a sigh.

 

'Aap yaqeen rakhayn. Aapki beti kay saath kuch bura nahi hoga. Ithni achi larki , uskay saath bura ho hi nahi saktha' said Hansa as she wiped her tears.

 

 'Sorry, Hema ji aapko main aise hi bhita diya' Said Shamita as she joined them

'nahi , main tho Hansaji sey baat ker rahi thi. Bohot acha laga' Said hema smiling.


She felt better than she had felt in months. As if a thorn that was stuck had come out.

 

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wow suchitra ji....what a great twist to the story, didnt see that coming.......cant wait to read more...keep up the great work

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Hey Suchi...Hema's words were so moving...I had tears when I was reading her love for her daughter. Typically, u got her to blurt out her pain to Hansa, rather than anyone else - the kind of person who manages her family so lovingly is someone that you would trust enough to open up - and even in the short while that Hema has spent with her she can see the person Hansa is. You are setting the base for the wedding very well...this family will understand Sana better than anyone else.

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hey suchi awesome part loved it cont soon

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Woww suchi completlyy lovedd it . Rithul is such a responsible n understanding Bro n Son . Lovnggg him n Sana is also veryy veryy understanding gal . God Bless her n Rithul . Plzz continue soon

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Wow Suchi... what a twist... Superb.. :)

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Suchi, what can i say dear you are amazing what a twist sweetie i love it soo much keep updating hunni your doing a fantastic job x

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