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woww amazing, thank you for the wonderful scenes

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 Chapter 6


Scene 1

 

" Mujhe abhi bhi yaqeen nahi ho raha hai" Said Neel angrily


 

"Aap please shaant ho jayiye. Bacha hai , galthi ho gayi" Said Shamita meekly


 

 

"Galthi? Mujhe iskay principal ka call aya tha. Main conference main tha!


 

Rithul aur Shravan tho is tarah nahi thay" yelled Neel angrily


 

Neel had just returned home for the lunch break. He had placed his briefcase on the sofa and stood besides it with hands in his pocket pacing around trying to make sense of the call that he had received earlier.


 

'Kahan hai Ikshu. Use abhi bulaao' He shouted

 


'please aap shanth ho jayiye. Main baat karungi uussey aur bhabi nay samjha diya hai. Aap kay gussa honay sey kuch nahi honay wala' said Shamita trying to calm Neel down.


 

'Thum usko sar per chada ker rakhthi ho. Roz Roz parties jana, parayi main concertrate kerna, jhagda kerna aur aaj maar peet. Ye larka haath sey nikaltha jaa raha hai .." said Neel angrily pacing front and back


 

'Use bulao thum abhi'

 


'Neel. Maine ikshu sey baat ki hai aur baat kuch aur hi hai' interrupted Hansa

 

'voh 'Idha ko ek larkay nay tang kiya tha. isi liye Ikshu nay aise kiya hai' said Hansa

 


'Kya? Kya matlab ''tang kiya hai?' asked Neel worried

 

 


'Neel pehlay aap khana khanay chalain. Sab intezaar ker rahe hain aur main nahi chahthi ki Idha ya Ikshu dono sey is baray main abhi baat ho. Ghar per aur koi nahi jantha ki kya hua hai' said Hansa

 

 

 

At the dining table Sana had been waiting for the rest of the family members to join in for lunch. She was sitting besides Idha who had introduced herself has Rithul's sister a few moments earlier.


Rithul was sitting in front of Sana at the other side of the table. Neel , Shamita and Hansa soon joined them.

 


'Ye ikshu kahan reh gaya hai' asked Neel commandingly

 

'main bula ker aathi hun' said shamita and she left the room.


 

Sana could feel the coldness in the air. She knew the reason behind it as she had witnessed the incident that had happened earlier.


 

As everyone started to eat in silence- shamita arrived with ikshu

 


He sat besides Rithul and turned his plate around.


 

"Thumhara demag kharab ho gaya tha kya?" Shouted Neel causing a huge eruption at the table.

 

"kya samajker thumnay uska Bike thoda?"

 

"Papa please" said Rithul as he glanced quickly at Sana. She was continuingly looking at her plate without making much moment.

 


"kya hua" he asked

 


"Ek larkay nay idha ko chera aur ye bhaisahab chalay gayi ussey hatha payi kernay" yelled back Neel pointing his fork at Ikshu as he spoke.

 


"Chera?"

"Mujhe khana nahi khana" shouted Ikshu as he pushed his plate back and left the table.

 


"dekha, Dekha isko. Kithna batameez hai" complained Neel angrily to Shamita

 

Shamita and Hansa looked at Neel helplessly not knowing how to calm him down.


 

"Aur thum. Kal sey college janay ki koi zaroorat nahi hai" yelled Neel at Idha

 


"Maine pehlay hi kaha tha ki Idha ko sirf girls college main dakhilah karwavo lekin kisi nay meri baat nahi maani. Aaj dekh liya iska nateeja" continued Neel

 


"Papa please---continued Rithul


 

"Nahi, kal sey college band" he commanded looking directly at Idha.


 

"Papa college rokhnay sey problem ki solution tho nahi hogi na. Aaj ek larkay nay tang kiya hai, kal aur koi kar saktha hai. Tho kya hum Idha tho har waqt ghar per lock ker kay rakhengay? Prisoner ki tarah?" reasoned Rithul


 

Neel continued glaring at Rithul with anger.


 

"Rithul thum abhi Commissioner ko phone lagao. I will see to it that , that boy gets suspended. How dare he?" commanded Neel

 


 

Idha who had been silently crying slowly got up and left the room.


 

Sana who had been watching this could not hold herself anymore


 

"I am sorry, ki main aapkay personal problem main dakhal de rahi hun. Lekin aap logon ko nahi lagtha ki Idha tho aapki zaroorat hai?


 

Until Sana had spoken no one seemed to have realized that she was also sitting amongst them.


 

Sana waited for someone to go after Idha. She looked at Rithul hoping that he would go after her.


 

" Please do not mind. I feel really bad for that poor child. I am going to go after her" she announced generally

 


 Where is her room? She asked Rithul turning towards him


 

"Straight down and to the left. The third room"


 

 

 

"Neel apnay aap ko sambhalo. Thumhara gussa ikshu kay gussay sey kam nahi lag raha hai mujhe" said Hansa sternly as she saw sana walk away.


 

"Mehmanon kay saamnay kis tarah pesh ana chahiye ye bhul gaye ho kya?"


 

"Papa please calm down. Main ikshu sey baat karunga. I am sure Ikshu had a very good reason. Aisa nahi ho saktha ki voh kisi per aise hi haat utaaye. Us larkay nay zaroor bohot bura kiya hoga idha kay saath" said Rithul.


The very thought of it started to worry him. What did the boy do? Did he hurt Idha physically?


He looked at Hansa for answers


 

"Us larkay nay idha ka naam boy restroom main likha tha aur aaj usey chu ker batameezi ki. Abh kis had thak? Mujhe nahi pata. Idha nay nahi bataya aur na hi ikshu nay" said Hansa worriedly

 


Neel looked as if someone had let out air from his insides. He pushed his plate angrily breaking the china.


 

"Main use nahi chorunga. Abhi main commissioner sey baat kertha hun" stammered Neel with anger as he got up to leave towards his room

 


"shamita thum jao. Thumhay tho pata hai na Neel ka. Uska gussa tanda honay wala nahi hai ithni jald.


 

'Aur Rithul thum Ikshu kay paas jao aur saath kuch le jana khanay ke liye. Becharay bachay nay kuch bhi nahi khaya hoga"  Said hansa tiredly.


 

"Main Idha kay paas jaathi hun. Idha aur Sana , dono nay khana chor diya beech main" hansa mumbled to herself as she headed towards Idha's room

 





Edited by Suchi-NivReniac - 29 January 2011 at 4:38pm

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 7:23pm | IP Logged
NIce work Suchi...the story is shaping up nicely - Sana getting drawn into the family even as her own family is breaking up is so nice.
 
 

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 7:40pm | IP Logged
WOw Suchi amazing and the way the story is shaping up tooo good yaar and sweetie thanks for lovely scenes.

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 8:18pm | IP Logged
wow......that was amazing suchitra ji.......cant wait to read  more

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 8:57pm | IP Logged
Suchi, mind blowing!! Loved it really. Can't wait for the next post.

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Beautiful part Suchi really lovely and loved it comtinue soon

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