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''The Mysterious Past' AR FF(Chapter 17 - Page 51) (Page 9)

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Posted: 25 January 2011 at 5:39am | IP Logged
hey nice part

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Posted: 25 January 2011 at 4:25pm | IP Logged
MAAAAAAAAAAAAAHIII HEYYYY so heres myy commentEmbarrassed
okay so i loved this part
Firstly i liked how ridhimma is so caring for armaan...he dint ate anything and she brought food for him..awww this was so cute
And I liked the convo part where armaan says sarcastically mein makhiyan maar raha thaLOL
I always like the dialogue parts of ur FFs..u know when to make it funny and when srs
I loved especially the part where they r like 'tu phir' 'tu phir' Embarrassed this was awesome
And it was sad to read Armaan's flashback part
wonder who's that girl and what happened between armaan and herOuch
In the end where ridhimma spills pepsi over him and drops ink...
whao she creates sucha disaster hehe...but i liked when she falls over him..
Loved that AR eyelock partEmbarrassed
Once again this part was very well writtten
Loved it to bits
Continue soon 
Muahhhh


Edited by CoolAquarius - 26 January 2011 at 3:18am

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Posted: 25 January 2011 at 10:26pm | IP Logged
Its awesome...keep writing dear

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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 4:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by CoolAquarius

MAAAAAAAAAAAAAHIII HEYYYY so heres myy commentEmbarrassed
okay so i loved this part
Firstly i liked how ridhimma is so caring for armaan...he dint ate anything and she brought food for him..awww this was so cute
And I liked the convo part where armaan says sarcastically mein makhiyan maar raha thaLOL
I always like the dialogue parts of ur FFs..u know when to make it funny and when srs
I loved especially the part where they r like 'tu phir' 'tu phir' Embarrassed this was awesome
And it was sad to read Armaan's flashback part
wonder who's that girl and what happened between armaan and herOuch
In the end where ridhimma spills pepsi over him and drops ink...
whao she creates sucha disaster hehe...but i liked when she falls over him..
Loved that AR eyelock partEmbarrassed
Once again this part was very well writtten
Loved it to bits
Continue soon 
Muahhhh


Gosh , How much I wait for your comment that you ended up telling mee 'Meri maa comment kardongi'.ROFLROFL
Okay I liked your comment alot and its best among all.Tongue
'Tu Phir' 'Tu Phir' part was just simple dialogues , never thought you'll like them so much.
@Black : That's such a big compliment for me.EmbarrassedThanks Sis!!TongueI am glad you like my writing.EmbarrassedBig smile
Ah!!Him and that girl is a big secret which would be revealed very late.Smile
Zindagi bhar wait karna for the truth.ROFLROFL

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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 4:17am | IP Logged
hey princezz
 amzing ff. plz accept ma buddy request and do pm wen u update nxt

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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 6:50am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Aahana-

Hey,.. AWESOME FF!
really loved it.
plz add me to your pm list. 


Thanks and added you to the pm list.Smile
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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 6:51am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Sabz-

Fabulous update sweetie Thumbs Up
Loved reading it....beautiful Big smile
Keep it up!!!


Thanks so much Sis.Although you dun like AR but you are reading for me.EmbarrassedLOL
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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 6:52am | IP Logged
Originally posted by AR_LOVER

awesome part


Originally posted by Riddss

heyyy dear,
nice part
continue soon




love
Riddss


Originally posted by sammy4u

great update dear
loved it


Thanks all of you for commenting.

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