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''The Mysterious Past' AR FF(Chapter 17 - Page 51) (Page 53)

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nice part

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Posted: 10 April 2011 at 7:36am | IP Logged
Res! Day Dreaming

Omg!! Armaan-Arima getting jealous at Raj-Ridsy hug! Me lubs it Evil Smile ROFL ROFL
Ok, Raj is supercute! 'Every girl in this world is my sister except for you' translates as 'I can never even imagine loving anyone except you'. Omg! Day Dreaming Day Dreaming Day Dreaming
'Water recycle' ROFL Omg! Arima is also so mean! Bhaiyya kyun bola usse? Tongue
Haw!! Your Ridsy doesn't drink coffee? Wow!! Show mein toh duppatte ke baad, coffee acted as the biggest matchmaker and cupid for AR ROFL ROFL Aww! She learnt how to make coffee only for Armaan? That is so cute!! Ok, it's not that big a thing but then these little things are what ultimately count right?
Omg, Mahi!! Raj-Arima confession was super cute! Seriously, Raj has a point. She's known him since forever she should know the kind of guy he is. But we can hardly blame Arima. She's in luuubbb and she's getting jealous! Chalo ji, issi mare bola toh that she loves him! And Raj, he really has good dialogues, yaar, I must say!! Fine, he may not have anything fancy for the proposal but is love really subjected to roses and rings? Nopes! I don't think so! :P
And the AR confession was beautiful, Mahi! Definitely it was fortunate that Armaan wasn't sleeeping! I'm so glad he was awake! Omg! Aise time par bhi two, three, infinty! Maths! Dead ROFL ROFL
Uh-oh!! Ridsy! Argh! Why did she let her tongue slip! Now Armaan will be gussa with her Cry Cry And Raj! Shocked Broken Heart Broken Heart Arrghh!! Broken Heart
Aw! Mahi, I hope things sort out soon!! But this has to be the BEST update ever! Day Dreaming For obvious reasons Wink
Awwiee!! I LOVE these lines! They're so touching! 

Armaan : 'My love..My Life
is all around you'.
Riddhima : My past..My future
is all about you.
Armaan : My Soul..My Destiny
is all gathered around you.
Riddhima : My Silence , My Laughter
is only you.
Armaan :My Sorrow , My Happiness is only you.
Riddhima : And my desire
Is only YOU.
Riddhima : I love you!
Armaan : Bus karu Riddhima aur kitna bologi.

Edited by Chill_Out - 12 April 2011 at 2:49pm

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Posted: 10 April 2011 at 12:40pm | IP Logged
very nice part...finally the confession!!!!
cont soon n thanks 4 the pm...Smile
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Posted: 10 April 2011 at 2:14pm | IP Logged
and the pm said there's Raj-Arima confession
Havent read the update yet but it better has the confession or else u know what I shall do HMMMEvil Smile
Will read and comment shooooon, okay babe.


OMG It really had RA confession...and not one but two two confessions...WOW WOW
Firstly, Armaan-Arima part was cute...their convo was so adorable
Love these bro-sis...and Armaan is so sweet, he allowed Raj to meet Ari...
LOL Arima teasing Raj by calling Raj bhaiya...poor Raj, y everyone likes to pull his legDisapprove
Awww they both can't survive without each other
YES YES Raj is gonna propose her
OH that Sonia girl, she has a wrong timing...kitne ghalat time pe phone kya LOL
Loved the way Raj assure Arima that how he cares abt her

'I do not have any roses.I do not have any ring.I don't have the proper gesture to propose you but I only want to say I Love You and will always love you.I would never say I will make you happy whole lifetime since I won't , I am sure about that but intentionally I will never hurt you.So Arima Mallik Will you be mine?Will Arima be Raj's?'.

This was sucha touching line...woohoo he finally proposed her
He's sucha sweetheart finally he said it all...I really loved their confession

Now coming to AR
Ridzy is so adorable, she learnt to make coffee for Armaan AWW
OMG such an adorable scene..she took his shoes off and tie 
Just to make him caring she is
aww her caring efforts finally metled armaan's heart

'Why?God Damn Why?Why do you love me?',these were his initial lines.
'I Hate you',he repeated.
'But I love you',Whispered Riddhima.
'No..I am not worth your love..I am not worth your care..I am not worth you..I am a stone-hearted person who can never love anyone'.

God this was my fav part
Why does he thinks he's not worth anyone's love and care
Of course he is...he needs to realize his importance
yes yes he finally said itDancing

I  liked that poem part at the end
It was so amazingly written
And yeah Armaan ko finally yaqeen ho gaya, ridzy really loves him 

And OH she mentioned Sarah
Uh-oh what will be Armaan's response to that...
I hope Armaan won't go back to square one after the mention of this Sarah girl
Eagerly waiting for the next part.

It was really beautifully written
I want the next update as soon as possible no matter what
I want teh next part OKAY!
I just loved this update of the best updateStar
Keep writing more and keep rocking

Edited by -Hiralious- - 12 April 2011 at 5:10am

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Posted: 10 April 2011 at 3:36pm | IP Logged
awesome part

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