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''The Mysterious Past' AR FF(Chapter 17 - Page 51) (Page 5)

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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 3:52am | IP Logged
fantastic update, please do continue soon and thanks for the pm!

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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 5:20am | IP Logged
hey mahi
awesome update
loved it
AR scenes were amazing
gud job.................Clap Star
continue soon
thnx 4 d pm dear


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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 5:40am | IP Logged
just read the parts
luved them...........
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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 5:46am | IP Logged
Yr writing is really nice and do continue...............just luv them
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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 11:00am | IP Logged
hey nice part..
thanks for the PM ..! :)

love kangan!
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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 11:28am | IP Logged
Thanks everyone for the comments.
I will reply to all tomorrow but till then enjoy Chapter 3.Big smile

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Chapter 3.


Riddhima walking along the corridor.
Riddhima : Samajhta kya hain apne apko.(getting annoyed)
Armaan while checking few files in his cabin.
Armaan : Thori deir dang se kya baat karli , sir pe charh gayi.(getting irritated)

Since its break , Armaan decides to go to BasketBall and somehow Riddhima also plans to go there.

But Armaan reaches first.While further taking next step and entering the BB , all he imagines is a girl holding Basketball in her hand and making goal.Its not a while , she makes a goal and then looks backward , raising her brow , a band in her hair to avoid over flow of her hair , basketball in her hand , her long silky hair , the arrogant yet adorable attitude and a cute smile on her face.All he pictures is this.When Suddenly a ball just hits him on his head , which makes him look backward.
He sees the same girl whom he pictured few seconds ago.But this time its not her but Riddhima and Armaan is just imagining that Riddhima as that girl.
Riddhima instead of approaching towards him to get the ball , runs to the court to get her lab coat and starts to rush out from that place in 2832324284 velocity.
Till then , Armaan comes back to his senses.
'Olympics mein jaane ka iraada hain?',Said Armaan picking up the basketball.
Riddhima stopped.
'Jee?,Said Riddhima while getting confused.
Armaan : Arrey yaar , ek tu tumhara jee , G letter se itna pyar hain tu jaake ABCD parho.(said irritatedly)
Riddhima : Huh!!Thanks for the advice and jee mujhe Olympics mein jaane ka koi shauk nahin hain.
Armaan : Acha!!Tu phir shayed nursery racing mein participate karahi ho.Haww Riddhima , tum 2 saal ke bache se tez nahin bhaag sakti?(saying sarcastically and behaving shocked).
Riddhima : Jee Nahin , aisa kuch nahin hain.
Armaan : Khair , what are you doing here Dr.Gupta?
All the time Armaan talked to her as friend but suddenly turned lil seniorish.(lol)
Riddhima : What are you doing here Dr.Mallik?(saying to mock him)
Armaan : Well , I asked you first and being senior doctor you should answer me quite politely.
Riddhima : I believe whoever talks to you respectively you should do the same and vice versa.
Armaan : You mean I am rude?
Riddhima : Ah!!Correction.VERY RUDE.
Armaan : Ahan!!You haven't seen my rudeness Dr.Riddhima , for I once become rude and aggressive(pushing her towards the wall) then no one can stop me.
Armaan pushed Riddhima forcefully towards the wall and catching her elbows.Riddhima instead of shouting in pain , was lost in Armaan's painful eyes who reflected lots of love with pain , just like flowers with thorns.
Armaan while staring at her deep eyes felt as if he was staring at that girl.Always by seeing Riddhima he felt her somewhere.
Riddhima was now in very much pain and thus she yelled.
Riddhima : You are hurting me!!(she said in pain)
After hearing this , Armaan came back to his senses and just moved away from there.He regretted a lot which reflected from his gesture as he looked down.
Armaan : I am Sorry!!
Riddhima : Kis Liye?
Armaan : Aapko dard pohchane ke liye.
Riddhima : Apna dard kisi aur ki saath baatna , isko dard bathna kehte hain dard pohchana nahin.(Said her softly in a soft tone).
Armaan was puzzled and looked up.He was touched by her words. Armaan suddenly uttered 'Go back to your duty or else no marks will be given to you'.
With this he went from Basketball.
Dr.Mallik's Cabin

Armaan feared Riddhima now.As Riddhima saw his soft side , which he didn't wanted to show it to anyone , not to his sister also.But something made him to be so kind and polite with Riddhima.But now , he had to be rude and strict with her , so that like everyone , she also thinks he is no more than rude and arrogant person who does not know the meaning of Happiness.

Armaan behaved quite rudely with Riddhima in the 2
nd half duty.

All had a break and then had to leave for reporting.

Cafeteria

'Ajeeb-O-Tareen Insaan hain',Said Riddhima seeming puzzled.

'Kon?'Asked Muskaan getting interested.
'Tu kyun interested horahi hain',Said Rahul mocking her.
'Tujhe kyun problem?',Muskaan said while getting annoyed.
'Problem , nahin bohut problem hain',Rahul said angrily.
And as usual RM starts fighting.
It is muskaan who then stops fighting and asks Riddhima whom did she meant.
'Arrey Dr.Armaan aur kaun',Riddhima said.
Muskaan : Oh!!Mein pehle kyun nahi samajh gayi thi , wo tu waise hi dunya ka Ajeeb-O-Tareen Insaan Hain',(says her behaving as she knows everything about Armaan and mocks him.)
And all again laugh at her one liners for Armaan.

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Sorry for spelling mistakes since I didn't edit.Smile
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Edited by Princezz22 - 22 January 2011 at 11:34am

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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 11:30am | IP Logged
Yayy first one to comment

MAAAAAHIIII heyyy
u updated the FF...short part kyun :(...it was short laikin fast so chale ga LOL
okay so i liked this part
Ah Armaan is so much in pain..he doesnt want anyone to know abt him
and ridhimma kinda got a hint abt him
i cant wait to read what really happened with him
looking forward to the next part
and in the last again RM's cute fight ehe
Ridhimma and muski r really irritated with him
I loved AR part the most
Okay so i really liked this part
Very well written
Loved it..continue it soon muaahhh




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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 11:52am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Chill_Out

Nice FF, Mahi. this is my first DMG FF ever so quite interesting! Armaan is Riddhima's senior doctor? Uh-oh!! Continue soon. Aur haan, proof reading kar liya kar!ROFL
Anyhow, I'm waiting to find out why Armaan is so sad!!


@Black : what do you mean?
Anyways thanks for the comment.Smile

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