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''The Mysterious Past' AR FF(Chapter 17 - Page 51) (Page 37)

anumeha_rajat IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 03 March 2011 at 2:18pm | IP Logged

that was really amzing...

so raj is following armaan's order...

loved armi's interaction wid kids.......

thnx for the pm/...........

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Posted: 03 March 2011 at 2:38pm | IP Logged
awesome update
loved it
loved da scene with armaan and da children
raj is sweet
cant wait 4 more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm

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Posted: 03 March 2011 at 2:53pm | IP Logged

Awesome update

Loved it LOADZ

Can't wait 4 da next part

Con soon

Thanks 4 da pm 

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Posted: 03 March 2011 at 11:08pm | IP Logged
awesome part

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prachi06 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 3:06am | IP Logged
nice part

thanx for pm

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..Armaania.. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 08 March 2011 at 5:14am | IP Logged
Hey All.
This time not all of the reader's commented.It's my sincere request to all silent readers ke please do comment as it encourages me to write more & more and of course to write more better.Smile
And to all reader Comments more than 'nice part' , 'amazing' would be appreciated instead I should say Longer comments would be appreciated alot.Big smile
Thanks and now the chapter.Big smile


Chapter 13

'You See..he is your elder brother , you should obey his every order',Continued Raj.
And Arima just smiled and went along without further interacting.
'Hieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee',Greeted Riddhima a long Hi to Armaan.
'Whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy??????? (stretching why) saying itna barha Hieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee?',Asked Armaan imitating her sarcasticly.
'Kyunke Riddhima Gupta ka aaj mood barha acha hain',replied she.
'Tu mein jaake dance karon',Said Armaan sarcasticly.
'Huh..Dr.Armaan Mallik ko sarcastic or ghusse hone ke ilawa aur kuch nahin aata',Said Riddhima getting irritated.
'Or Dr.Riddhima Gupta ko logon ka Sar khaana or chapar chapar karne ke ilawa kuch nahin aata',Said Armaan replying her back.
'Acha..aaj ke baad mein aapse kabhi baat nahin karongi',Said riddhima taking armaan's statement offensive.
'PLEASE',begged Armaan folding his hands.
Riddhima showed a weird expression said a 'FINE' and went.

'Ye apne aapko samajhte kya hain..inse kabhi baat nahi karongii..huh..',Blabbered Riddhima to herself.
'Acha khud se baat karahi ho.',Spoke Armaan..'Ab dekho..apni saari baatein tum mujhse khatam karleti thi..ab jab tum mujh se baat nahi karahi need someone else to talk..and since tumhe mere jaisa bakra kahin nahin mila who can listen to your 24/7 chapar-chapar , u started doing chapar-chapar to yourself',Said Armaan teasing her.
Riddhima was seriously fuming with anger.Seriously , he was going beyond limits and Riddhima wanted to kill him at the spot but couldn't say or do anything according to the deal they made.
Seeing Riddhima's angry expression Armaan burst into laughter.
'Oh Riddhima..Riddhima..Riddhima',Said Armaan as loud as he could.
'Aise bol raha jaise K..K..K.KKiran ho mein',Said Riddhima to herself in her heart.
'Tum kitni seedhi saadi ho..bholi bhaali ho',Said Armaan possessing a wide smile on his face'.and suddenly his face expression changed..he went into a deep thought..or to his past again.
'Acha kaho..if u were given a chance to describe me , kya kehte tum mere bhaare mein?',Asked Sarah curiously.
'Hmm..Seedhi Saadhi Bholi Bhaali Sarah',Replied Armaan after much thinking.
Armaan's smile just vanished away after he remembered her..He always saddened whenever he remembered Sarah..He knew she always made him sad still he remembered her.It was nothing like he still loves her , but whenever he tried to built up trust on someone , this incident caught a glace to his eye , and all the love , concern he was trying to show to the person just faded away with this rememberance.Directly or indirectly , Sarah was the cause of him not trusting anyone again.

'Ahm..Dr.Gupta files please',Armaan asked for files in a serious tone directly changing the topic.
Riddhima gave him the files and he went along.Riddhima got really confused.She really thought why he gets such mood swings as he was so happy a moment ago and now he is all so serious..But she guessed it right , she really thought maybe , he remembered Sarah.Now she really planned to do something to make him as normal ASAP..but she didn't know what to do..She needed someone's help and thus decided to go to Raj.

Raj was moving from here to there , from there to here , moving , moving , moving till the time he was tired..And then he sat down to eat a banana..
'Ye kya hain yaar..Raj tujhe kisne kaha tha itna Mahaan banne ko..I mean Arima baat karahi thi na..jab usko apni bhai ki baat nahi maani tu kyun agaya Mr.India ban kar ke nahin Apni bhai ki baat maano and all that rubbish..I mean seriously , itna acha mein kabhi nahin tha..meine kabhi apne dad ki baat nahi maani tu armaan ki kya baat manonga..Ab Arima se tab tak door rehna parhega jab Dr.Armaan permit nahin karte..aur Armaan tu mujhse pakka nafrat karta hain..budha hojaonga tab bhi mujhe allow nahin karega Arima se baat karne ke liye',Blabbered Raj to satisfy himself..till the while he ate his banana and threw the peel on the ground..
Armaan who was passing by stepped on it and suddenly fell down.
'Oucchhhh',Screamed Raj seeing Armaan fall down so hardly.
'Raj beta bhaagh yaha se..Armaan ko pata chal gaya ke uski girna ka karan mein ho..tu budha kya , agle saath janmon tak arima meri nahi hosakti', mumbled raj to himself and tried to go.
'Arrey Dr.Armaan aap theek tu hain',Came Rahul running in and forcing Raj to see Armaan.
Rahul forced raj to come but Raj refused.
'Aana na',Rahul said in his typical accent.
Armaan got quite hurt so Rahul was much worried.
'Nahin wo',Raj said silently so that Armaan can't hear but Rahul's voice was so loud that anyone could hear it.ROFL
'Choro Rahul..Raj nahin ayega',Armaan misunderstood that Raj is not coming to help him because of all what have happened while Raj refused to come with having some other intention..However , Raj understood what Armaan assumed and thus to assure his satisfaction and not to create this a huge mess he went along with Rahul.
Rahul was confused as what Armaan really meant..but he just ignored it as at the moment Armaan was dealing with pain.
Rahul went along first and tried to make Armaan get up.
'Ye kis kamine ne ye khele ka chilka penka?',Asked Armaan angrily.
'RAJ NE',Screamed Muskaan from the other end and running to reach where all these 3 were there..By Muskaan's scream Riddhima who was passing by also tried to peep in since all were there.
'Meine ne?',asked raj acting as if he did nothing.
'Nahin tumhaari biwi ne,replied muskaan.
'Jhooti',Shouted Raj.
'Mein jhooti nahin ho',Saying to Raj..'Sir , mera yaqeen kijiye , ye Raj parade karaha tha , kabhi dhaye , kabhi bhaye , kabhi bhaye , kabhi dhaye..seriously!!ROFL or uske baad , he sat..aur khela khaane laga..bandhar ki tarahROFL..aur phir ullu ki tarah khele ka chilka penk diyaROFL..',Said Muskaan badly cursing Raj.ROFL
Rahul and Riddhima were dieing laughing after Muskaan described the situation.ROFL
'Comedy show chal raha hain?',Asked Armaan angrily.
Rahul : Nahin.ROFL
Since Riddhima couldn't talk she just rofled.ROFL
Armaan went , took a bucket of water and threw it over Raj , the water was very cold and the weather was cold too , this made Raj totally freeze.
'Ab maza aaya Dr.Raj Ji',Said Armaan sarcasticly saying possessing a big smile.
'Haan barha maza aaya',Said Raj sarcasticly crunching his teeth due to anger.ROFL
Raj was so angry that he took a stick and started running after Armaan to hit him with that.ROFL
Armaan was before running and Raj was running after him..Armaan poor had no choice except to run as Raj had a very strong stick in his hand and Armaan didn't wanted to get hurt again.
After 5 minutes of Raj running after Armaan , Armaan immediately stopped which made Raj stop also.
'Ek minute..ek minute',Said Armaan realizing something.'Tumhaara deen hokar tum mujhe dare you..beta abhi sabak sikhata ho'.
And now totally opposite thing happened.ROFLArmaan was running after Raj now.ROFLROFL
They last time they passed Muskaan-Rahul-Riddhima's phase was when Raj was running after Armaan with a stick and now when they crossed RM-Riddhima , they saw that actually Armaan is running after Raj and that also Raj still has the sticky..ROFL..Rahul-Muski-Ridz were confused as what golmaal is happening.
Muskaan : Ye Raj , Dr.Armaan ke peeche bhaag raha hain ya Dr.Armaan Raj ke peeche bhaag rahe hain?ROFL
Rahul : Dono ek dosri ke peeche bhaagh rahe hain.ROFL
Rahul and Riddhima did a Hi5 after Rahul spoke.
Seriously , for Rahul-Muskaan-Riddhima it was such a hilarious moment and they rofled a lot.ROFL

Finally both were tired of running since 20 minutes and thus they stopped to take rest.
Both were breathing in and out..Both Raj and Armaan were too tired and just sat on the respective chair.
After 5 minutes of rest.

'Armaan',Called Raj.
Armaan looked at him.
'Agar mein tumse kuch mangonga , tum mujhe doge?',Asked Raj.
'I know what you want..The permission to talk to Arima',Replied Armaan.
'No , just your happiness',Said Raj.
Armaan looked at Raj again..He was totally touched by the last statement spoken by Raj..After so many years , for the first time , his best friend's Raj precious words became priceless for him.He was totally touched by Raj's statements that he remembered their friendship which they possessed since childhood and the friendship which they lack now.

Hope all will comment this time.Big smile

Edited by Princezz22 - 08 March 2011 at 5:14am

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Posted: 08 March 2011 at 5:39am | IP Logged
Heyyyaa :D Gr88 part hun :))
ma exmzz r gng shrt cmntzz till den...big cmntzzz after exmzz....

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Posted: 08 March 2011 at 6:00am | IP Logged
good yaar

kash ab raj aur armaan ke bich ki saari misundestading clear ho jae

thanx for pm

continue soon

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