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''The Mysterious Past' AR FF(Chapter 17 - Page 51) (Page 34)

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Awesome update
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Chapter 13

Scene changes to Raj-Arima.
Raj-Arima where walking along when RM interrupted them.
'Raj , tu aur arima bus mein kyun nahi aaye?',Asked Muskaan angrily.
'Bus miss hogayi',replied Raj.
'Bus miss huvi ya karwai gayi?',asked muskaan suspecting.
'Bolo bolo , tell tell',Rahul interrupted with a funny accent.
'Chup rahul..aur muskaan tum..bus miss huvi ya karwai gayi..tum dono ko kya farak parhta hain',Said Raj to change the subject.
'Bus miss karwayi gayi..Raj tu jhooth na bhola kar',Said Arima.
'Kyun?'
Arima : Kyunke mujhe Sache log barhe pasand hain.
'Phir tu hum zindagi bhar sache rahenge',Said Raj romantically.
'Tum tu bus yuhi pasand ho',Said Arima possessing a big smile.
Raj Smiled back.Both were staring at each other and Rahul and Muskaan were staring at them.
Suddenly Raj realized something while his smile faded away and he went along saying nothing.
Arima tried to stop him but he didn't stop.
Arima was left wondering.

Scene changed to Raj examining the Kids.
He was playing with the kids also the same time and when Arima came he suddenly stopped smiling.
'Raj..kya hua?kyun waha se chale aaye?',Asked Arima.
Raj didn't reply.
'Raj please bolo na kyun waha se chale aaye?',Insisted Arima again.

Scene changed to Armaan.

Armaan came to the fields where all Kids were waiting for him.
'Hellloooooooooooo Bachoo',Said Armaan smiling and having a kiddish accent.He hugged all the kids happily.
'Kaise hain sab log..Minnie tum , ash tum..Rahul tum..kaise ho tum sab log?',Asked Armaan.
'Hum sab aap se naraz hain bhaiyya',Said Minnie.
'Kyun Bhai??',Asked Armaan making a shocked expression purposely.
'Aap poor ek saal ke baad aaye ho..aur humse achi tareeke se 5 saal ke baad baat karahe ho',Said Minnie.
'5 saal ke baad..bhai har saal tu ata ho..pichle saal bhi aaya tha',replied armaan.
'Aaye tu the aap..par aapne kisi se baat hi nahi ki..aur 1 din mein chale gaye..',said rahul-the kid.
'Arrey bacho us waqt mein thora kharab tha , abhi acha ho..arrey choro na yeh sab baatein..mein sab ke liye chocolates laaya ho.',Said armaan.
'CHOCOLATES',All the kids shouted.
Armaan : Haan..come one by one..
Riddhima who was passing by her route stopped when she saw Armaan with the kids.
Armaan continued.'Haan ye chocolate tumhaare liye..ye waala tumhaare liye..Nahin Minnie no cheating..sab ko sirf ek chocolate milega..chalo shabash rahul ko do chocolate..arnav ye chocolate tumhaare liye..wow..sab ko mil gaya..Ab Khush?'.
'KHUSH',came a loud scream from the kids.
'Chalo chalo ab Armaan bhaiyya ko huggie do..kissy do..chalo bacho',Said Armaan in a kiddish accent , just being a kid like them..and all came and hugged him..he had a big wide smile on his face..
Riddhima was shocked to see this side of Armaan.Especially Armaan whole-heartedly laughing and enjoying.
Armaan shot glance to Riddhima and suddenly his smile faded away.He left the kids and stood up.
'Aap Dr.Armaan , Dr.Armaan nahin..kuch aur lag rahe hain',Said Riddhima approaching towards him.
'Kids are innocent souls unlike corrupted people in the world.I can never turn my face away from them.',Replied Armaan smiling faintly.
'So true.But all people aren't same.Every country , state , territory consist of positive and negative people.All people aren't the same.',Replied Riddhima.
'Stop giving me philosophies..No one in this world is true.All appear fake , artificial and super-ficial.',Said Armaan.
'I can totally understand you , Sir',Said Riddhima with a smile and just went away without further arguing.
'Understand!!!!Thats what no one can.No One can understand.No one can understand me.No one can understand my situation.
And you are right Minnie..I was never like this from past 5 years.Maybe after Riddhima's presence I ch..(paused)..(changed he meant).
Gosh , I should keep control over my emotions..Like Riddhima was Sarah also..but she betrayed me..Even Riddhima Can..Just..forget it..',He kept blabbering to himself.

Scene shifted to Raj-Arima.

'Raj For God Sake..can you stop it..and temme why are you not talking to me?',Screamed Arima in anger.
Arima was just fed up of Raj not talking to her from past 2 hours.She just couldn't tolerate Raj's ignorance.
Raj was walking along and Arima after her..Raj stopped which immediately made Arima stop.
'Arima , what did your brother just said a while ago?',Asked Raj.
"What?",Asked Arima confusingly.
'That , he does not want me to even interact with you',Said Raj.
'But you know I can't survive without communicating with you',Said Arima debating.
'Even I can't..But ultimately we can't talk'.
'WHY?',Screamed Arima.
'Arima try to understand.Try to think from your brother's POV.He is your brother , and you should respect his each and every decision.If he wants you not to talk to me , you should strictly not interact with me'.
'But Raj , he doesn't know you well.He has mis-understood you and the whole world'.
'Whatever it is'.Ultimately , we have to respect Armaan's decision'.
'Raj , you are so understanding',Said Arima with a smile.'You are very supportive Raj.Armaan bhai should be proud of having such a understanding , supportive and optimistic best friend like you'.


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Edited by Princezz22 - 03 March 2011 at 8:56am

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Originally posted by swarobi1

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yay... for the first time first one to comment......
n have to say awsm part......
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