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''The Mysterious Past' AR FF(Chapter 17 - Page 51) (Page 2)

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Posted: 13 January 2011 at 11:39am | IP Logged
awesome update
loved it
loved AR entry
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm

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Posted: 13 January 2011 at 12:06pm | IP Logged
Lovely part! 
Cont soon : )

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Posted: 13 January 2011 at 12:16pm | IP Logged
hey.....
nice start..........
do continue..........

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Posted: 13 January 2011 at 12:52pm | IP Logged
Awesome start...do add me to your pm list....

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Posted: 14 January 2011 at 9:25am | IP Logged

sounds really interesting...

do continue soon...

thnx for the pm............

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Posted: 14 January 2011 at 9:59am | IP Logged
awesome
loved it
can't wait for more AR scene
continue soon
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Posted: 15 January 2011 at 9:13am | IP Logged
heyyyy mahiyaaa...Yayyyy u started FF...woh bhi inni jaldi
Im so happy...now u betta update it regularely...now i cant even blackmail you abt the updates as I already told u the story of dastaan...i gotta think abt any other thing so that i can blackmail u to make the next update soon ROFL 
okay so lemme get back to the FF
what can I say abt this part...i loved the beginning and the new couple u introduced raj and arima...i liked the name arima
Loved the Armaan Ridhimma scene...armaan spoiled her clothes on the first day...now they rnt gonna spare each other...looking forward to more AR
and i loved RM part...they r too cute...their nokhs jhoks
Acording to the title...there is sth mystery abt someone's past lol...i cant wait to know
Brilliant starting....looking forward to the next part
Loved it...and love u for writing it

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Posted: 21 January 2011 at 4:07am | IP Logged
Thanks everyone for the valuable comments.TongueBut I didn't receive much satisfying response.Disapprove
So I hope everyone comments.Big smile

Chapter 2

All the interns entered Dr.Armaan's Cabin.

It looked like this.
Dr.Armaan : Good Morning Interns!!Let me take the attendance.
Muskaan : Haila!!Hum School mein hain kya attendance?
All giggled while Armaan raised his eye brows , with that the place went into silence.
Armaan : Dr.Raj Mehra.
Raj : Here Sir.
Armaan : Dr.Rahul Garewal.
Rahul : Dr.Mallik.
Armaan : Dr.Muskaan Chadda.
Muskaan : Present Teacher!!
All giggled again but stopped seeing Armaan's serious face.
Rahul : Muskaan chup karna!!(said cautiously)
Armaan : Never mind!!Dr.Arima Mallik.
Arima : Here Sir.
Armaan : Dr.Riddhima Gupta!!
No answer..
'Dr.Riddhima Gupta',Repeated again.
But no answer when suddenly , a girl entered the cabin without permission hurrying up in and setting her dupatta looking down.
Riddhima : Sorry Sir , Some idiot had thrown some stain on me and thus,I had to leave to home again and change.
She looked up and saw Armaan and really got shocked.While on the other hand , Armaan was also in state of surprise seeing the arrogant girl being her intern.Riddhima was also not less worried , she worried because of the fact he was her senior doctor and he could do anything to take revenge which meant either suspending her or torturing her the whole internship.
But NOOOO , Armaan neither said anything nor did and just ignored her.
Armaan : So the following are your duties.Today , we aren't going to give you any cases , you all will be examined for the next 1 week and then you'll be given proper individual cases.Alright!!
Dr.Raj and Dr.Arima ' General Ward!!
Dr.Riddhima aap mujhe assist karengi.
Dr.Rahul ' OPD. Dr.Muskaan ' Path Lab!!
Muskaan : What?Sir , aap mujhe saza de rahe ho , sirf mujhe kyun , ye new intern bhi late aayi , aapne isse tu koi saza nahin di.
Dr.Armaan : Mujhe assist karna intern ke liye sabse barhi saza hain.(Said with a grin)
All went except Riddhima.
Riddhima : I am Sorry!!
Armaan : Kis Liye?
Riddhima : Aapko idiot kaha.
Armaan : Meine bhi idiot walo ka kaam kiya tha.
Riddhima : Jee?(looking puzzled)
Armaan : Jee!!(with approve)
Riddhima : Waise apne jhooth kyun bhola?
Armaan : Jhooth?Kaisa Jhooth?
Riddhima : Apne Dr.Muskan ko jhooth bhola ke , apne mujhe saza di hain aapko assist karne ki.
Armaan : Tu is mein kaisa jhooth?Yehi tu tumhaari saza hain.
Riddhima : Wo Kaise?(getting puzzled)
Armaan : Mere jaise bad naseeb insaan ke saath rehna , is dunya ki sabse barhe saza hain.
Riddhima got more puzzled and saddened when she saw Armaan with sad and disappointed expression.The disappointment just reflected from his face and seeing that Riddhima got more saddened.
Silence was filled in his cabin till the nurse came with some files.

The interns were finished with their 1st Half duty and went along for the break to the canteen.
'Wassup People!!I am Raj',Said Raj.'Hey Miss.Beauty!!',Said to Riddhima.
Riddhima didn't reply because Armaan's statement just echoed in her mind.
Raj : Miss.Beauty aap itni sad kyun hain?
Riddhima : (coming back to her senses) : Ah!!Nuthing , Hello Raj.
Raj : Tumko mere naam kaise aata hain?
Riddhima : Raj ' Naam tu suna hoga.
Riddhima and Raj chuckled where Rahul jumped from no where.
Rahul : Ye tu mere dialogue hain!!
Raj : Thaaaa'Abhi Raj ka zamana hain.(saying cooly)
Arima was getting again jealous from Raj-Riddhima.
Arima looked at Raj will an angry look.Raj Seeing her bad temper moved away from Riddhima and went beside her.
Muskaan came along to the canteen and all sat.
Muskaan : Us idiot ko mein nahin chorongi!!
Raj : Kis idiot ko?
Muskaan : Dr.Armaan.
Rahul was drinking water and after hearing that , he just spitted it out.
Rahul : Abhe oyye!!Meri baat sun Muskan.
Muskaan : Oyye Rahul ke bache chup kar!!Us idiot ko mein nahin chorongi.
Raj : Rahul ka bacha bhi hain?Kab paida hua?(he asked to tease both of them)
Everyone giggled.
Rahul : Haan jab tu paida hua tab wo bhi paida hua.
Raj : Haha!!Bery Funny!!(saying sarcastically)
Arima and Riddhima were die laughing at that time while Muskaan was still pissed off.
Arima : Armaan mere bhai hain.
Muskan : What?(getting shocked)
Rahul : What nahin haan , yehi tu meine kehne ki koshish karaha tha ke Dr.Armaan Arima ke bhai hain.
Riddhima : Kya?Dr.Armaan Arima ke bhai hain?(asked to rahul and others)
Rahul : Tu mein kya Faarci(French) mein baat karaha tha?(saying sarcastically)
Arima : Rahul tum bhi na.Jee haan Riddhima , Armaan bhaiya mere bhai hain.
Muskaan : Tumne apne bhai se kabhi pocha nahin hain ke wo itne ache kyun hain?(saying muskaan sarcastically)
Riddhima : Haan Arima , tumne apne bhai se kabhi pocha nahin ke wo itne ache kyun hain?(Really meaning it)
Rahul : Ahem!Ahem!!Dr.Riddhima ko har cheez repeat karne ki adat hain.
Everyone again burst into laughter.
Riddhima : Haha!!Very funny rahul(saying sarcastically).Ab had hogayi , mein yaha se jarahi ho.
And she startled to go and while that Armaan was approaching towards her and they accidently clashed each other.
And whatever papers Armaan had in his hand fell down.
Armaan : Not Again!!(said irritatedly)
Riddhima : Sorry Sir!!Mein papers utha deti ho.
Armaan : Tumhare saath na thora ache tareeke se baat karlo tut um sar pe charh jaati ho.(said angrily)
Riddhima : Jee?(getting confused)
Armaan : Jee nahin my foot.Papers uthao.(He commanded)
As papers were scattered all over so Riddhima took long to collect and pile them up.
Armaan who couldn't wait bent down himself and collected the papers and pulled the papers she had in her hand , pilled them up and went mocking her.'Ek kaam bhi theek se karna nahin aata'.With that , he went to his table.
Riddhima : Huh..ARIMA , tum apne bhai se zaroor pochna ke wo itne ache kyun hain?(this time she meant the other way while mocking him).After saying that she just went out of the caf.

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Apologize for written mistakes as I didn't edit.

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Edited by Princezz22 - 21 January 2011 at 4:08am

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