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''The Mysterious Past' AR FF(Chapter 17 - Page 51) (Page 17)

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Posted: 06 February 2011 at 3:00pm | IP Logged
Thanks, soul sister! Good Night!Smile

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Posted: 06 February 2011 at 3:51pm | IP Logged
Amazing part Mahi!
AR part was indeed so touching
Never knew Ridhimma had such mysterious past
I loved her character. She appears to be fun loving girl who enjoys life to the fullest from outside but from inside she is all so lonely who has no one in her lifeOuchLife has taken everything away from herOuch and she is seeking someone who can give her all the love she deserves. 
U beautifully described that part where she says: '
But still like a kiddish girl , I am waiting for Mr.Perfect to come.......That's why his value in my life would be the most.Really , my world would revolve around him only.' 
^Okay thats a really big part so i have just indicated the beginning and the ending part. Not just this I also Loved the part where she says 
''Dr.Mallik atleast you live for someone , But I live for no one.
At least you have someone beside you , But  I have no one.
At least you have someone to love you , But I have no one.
At least you have someone to care about you , But I have no one.
I appear as a happy soul , but I am the most lonely person in the world.
And you know why.I have NO ONE.No Father , No Mother , No Brother , No Sister , No Relative.I am an orphan.

This part was really amazing and heart touching and it was so perfectly described. poor girl is left all alone in this world. She has nothing to live for but she is living upon just one hope which is her Mr.Perfect.
I hope Armaan will be the guy who will make her life as perfect as she wants it to be
They both seem to be in the same situation. Both are lonely, and hopefully they both will realize they r meant to be together 
In the end Raj-Arima part was the cutest. He jumped through the window in her room and poor arima she was so feared from her broLOL
Once again this part was AWESOME
The dialogues were seriously beyond amazing
Now dont u think its the time to reveal Armaan's past tooWinkLOL
Okay im too curious to know but still take ur time and reveal it whenever it will be needed
Continue it soon. Will be waiting for the next part|
And yeah sorry for the late reply.Tongue

Love,
CA.


Edited by CoolAquarius - 07 February 2011 at 9:14am

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Posted: 06 February 2011 at 5:14pm | IP Logged
hiiiii
awesome update
loved it
poor ridzy
her story was touching
loved raj and arima scene
cant wait 4 more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm

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Posted: 06 February 2011 at 7:43pm | IP Logged
nice part

thanx for pm

continue very soon

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Posted: 07 February 2011 at 4:59am | IP Logged
awesome part
loved it
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Posted: 07 February 2011 at 6:06am | IP Logged
heyyy dear,
nice part
continue soon



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Posted: 07 February 2011 at 6:11am | IP Logged
awesome part
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hey nice part

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