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FF : Post wedding part 19 updtd pg 94 last part (Page 89)

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Posted: 15 August 2011 at 10:04am | IP Logged
loved that maaneet had a baby girl Big smile

vicky and rajji LOL LOL LOL

continue soon
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Posted: 16 August 2011 at 4:29am | IP Logged
Hi there...thanks 4 da pm n awesum update. Loved it...Geet delivered a baby girl. Maan is so happy! He was so worried abt Geet! Loved the happy Maaneet moments. Lovely name - Myesha. But Maaneet fighting ova name! Dadi solved the problem. Raji n Vicky shocked to c each other! Update soon

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Vry nyc update dear...HeartHeart

Plz continue...

Thanx 4 da pm...Thumbs UpThumbs Up

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Posted: 22 August 2011 at 1:36am | IP Logged
Thank u all for liking and commenting..Big smile
 
Part ' 18

 

Few months after myesha is born'.

myesha is not yet one year old'The dates and days of the trip is decided'.but the place is not yet decided'.

 

Maan n geet in their room'

Geet ' ithna time laagtha hai'

Maan ' geet'aaj toh main office se bhi jaldi aa gaaya ' tumhe kya ho gaaya hai'

Geet ' uff ho maan'main aapki nahi'trip ke baare mein baath kar rahi thee..

Maan ' trip'.kaun sa trip ?????

Geet ' dekha'.aap trip bhool gaaye'.

Maan ' geet'tum saaf saaf baath kehthi kyu nahi'

Geet ' wahi toh..saaf saaf hi toh keh rahi hoon''is Vicky aur rajji ko'

Maan ' accha'ab samajh mein aaya'treat waala trip ke baare mein baath kar rahi ho'ab ismein main kya karu''vicky aur rajji ko hi toh decide karna hai..

Geet ' wahi toh'.kitney din ya phir mahiney beeth chukey hai..lekin in dono mahashay ka kuch paatha nahi'.aur ae lo'.ek doosre se baath bhi nahi karthey'

Maan ' tumhe trip ki jaldi padhi hai ????

Geet ' haan maan'..kithne mahiney ho gaaye mujhe ghar se nikley huye'kahin bahaar ki taazi taazi hawa'wahaan ka mausam'.shanth jhagah'.

 

Maan trying to pull geet s leg'

 

Maan ' agar ithni hi jaldi hai tumhe toh hum Akeley jaa sakthey hai'

Geet ' toh chaley'ab toh mujhe Akeley hi jaana hai'

Maan ' woh geet..main toh mazzak kar raha tha'.

Geet ' lekin main toh mazzak nahi kar rahi hoon'.(she giggles)

Maan ' geet'accha nahi laagega agar bakki log humare saath nahi aaye toh'.

Geet ' maan'.tension math lijiye''.main bhi mazzak kar rahi thee'waise aapke saath Akeley jaakar mujhe bore thodi hona hai'.

Maan ' geet'.

Geet ' mazzak kar rahi thee,,,,sach mein'.babaji ki kasam'.

 

They both laugh'.

 

Maan ' maan ki myesha bhi jaayegi'.hai na'mera shona'

Geet ' nahi'..

Maan ' geet'chi chi'tumhe zaara si bhi sharam nahi hai'.tum chahthi ho main apni myesha ko yahan chod ke jaau'.aisa nahi ho saktha hai geet'

Geet ' maan'.pehle poori baath toh sun lijiye'

Maan ' maine keh diya toh bus keh diya..

Geet ' (shouting) maan''.aapne kya kaha'.maan ki myesha'aapne aisey kaise maan ki myesha keh diiya'..nahi nahi nahi..humari myesha'maneet ki myesha'

 

Maan holds myesha'

Maan ' ab meri maan ki myesha ko kya chahiye'

He irritates geet by calling their daughter as maan ki myesha'..

Geet ' maan'..aapne suna nahi maine kya kaha'

Maan is running around the room with myesha in his hands and geet running behind them to hit maan'

Maan enjoys it so much'.geet is tired'she goes and sits on the couch in the room'

Geet ' mazza aa raha hai na'. dono baap beti ko'aap yeh sab jaan mooch ke mujhe thang karne ke liye kar rahey ho na'

 

Maan comes towards geet and sits on the side of the couch and hugs geet'

 

Maan ' yeh meri pyaari sii family..jiske bina mein adhoora hoon'.aur haan..tum maan ki geet ( and looking at the baby) aur yeh humari beti'maan ki myesha'

For first time..geet dint find maan teasing her'she felt the same possessiveness which he has towards her'now he is having towards myesha'

Geet infact loved it..

 

Maan intervened'

 

Maan ' geet'humari beti'.maneet ki myesha'

Geet smiled'.

 

Next day at breakfast table'dadima  maan and Vicky were there seated at the dining table'geet and rajji serving'.

myesha was deep asleep and nani was looking after her..

 

Dadima 'toh trip ka place decide ho gaaya kya'kaun sa place hai..

Geet ' place'.haan decide ho gaaya na'.hai na vicky aur rajji..

 

Vicky and rajji staring at each other'.and both of them nod their head..

 

Maan ' very good'toh kaun sa jhagah hai'

 

Rajji ' Amritsar

 

Vicky s face is blank and his expressions were that of a question mark'dadima maan n geet found him dumbfounded'

Dadima is staring at both of them''..geet and maan smile at each other'.

 

Dadima ' betey..humein toh laaga tha ki aap dono saath milkar decide kar rahey hai'

Geet ' wahi toh'.

Maan ' ( trying to bring the situation under control) theek hi hai na'.amritsar toh decide ho chukka hai'waise rajji..tumne accha place decide kiya'.is Vicky se'.

 

Before maan could complete the sentence'rajji spoke..

Rajji ' aap jaisa soch rahey hai waisa nahi hai'

Geet ' rajji'tu na..chup hi reh'jaanthi hoon tujhe..teri hi galthi hogi'

Vicky smiling..

Maan ' nahi geet'ismein rajji ki koi gaalthi nahi hai'.tumne dekha nahi'rajji ne kaha Amritsar,'toh zaahir sii baath hai..rajji ne decide kiya'toh ismein rajji ki kaisi gaalthi'

Geet comes towards maan'

Geet ' nahi maan'rajji ki gaalthi hai..

Maan ' geet'vicky ki galthi hai

Geet ' rajji'

Maan ' Vicky'

Geet ' maine kaha na'rajji'.

Maan ' maine kaha na..vicky'

 

Dadima Vicky and rajji staring at maan n geet''

Dadima ' (smiles to herself)'humare paas ek solution hai'

Maan n geet come out of their fight'both feel embarrassed

Dadima ' kyun na hum rajji betey aur Vicky betey se hi pooch le'.

 

Dadima is enjoying herself in this'..first rajji n Vicky and now maan n geet'and once again rajji and Vicky'.

 

Dadima ' toh Vicky aap kya kehna chahthey ho'kiski gaalthi hai ismein..

Geet ' haan Vicky'bol do ismein rajji ki hi gaalthi hai'

Rajji ' didi..hua yu ki'

Geet ' rajji'tu chup kar..vicky ko bolne de na..

Maan ' arrey..tum toh rajji ke peechey haath dho ke padh gaayee ho'rajji tum bolo..

Geet ' Vicky tum bolo'

 

Dadima ' uff ho'aap dono bus bhi kijiye..

 

Vicky ' wo hua yu ki'rajji baathayegi'

Rajji ' wo..vicky ne kaha ki'geet didi ki manpasand ki jhagah mujhe paatha hogi..isliye unhone mujhe hi place decide karne ko kaha'ismein jijaji inki koi galthi nahi hai'

Maan ' unhone'hmmm'.(winking at geet)

 

Vicky ' (surprised by rajji s answer) haan'wahi'yehi baath toh hum kab se kehna chahthey they'

Geet ' hum'(winking at maan)

 

Dadima sitting and enjoying'..she wants Vicky to settle down'and the best prospective bride is none other than rajji'.geet s sister'

 

Dadima: bhadiya hai'toh place is decided'.jaane ki taiyaari shuru karlo'

Geet : dadima..aapse baath karni thee'

Dadima: haan boliye betey'

Geet: dadima..woh main yeh kehna chahthi thee kii' bina nani ke agar hum myesha ko le jaaye toh'agar aapki ijjazath ho toh'.

Dadima: geet betey'aap ithna tension kyu lethi hai'.humein aap par poora yakeen hai betey..jaisa aap chahey'

Geet: thank u dadima'

She hugs dadima

Maan: par dadima'

Dadima: maan betey'.humein is baath ki behaath khushi hai ki geet apni zimmaedario ko acchi taraah se samajh rahi hai'poorane zaamane mein nani kahaan hothi thee'.humein geet betey par garv hai'

Aur haan maan betey'agar aapko wahaan par nani ki jaroorath padhi toh'humare wahaan ek dost hai..woh intezzam kar denge'

Geet: uski jaroorath nahi padegi dadima'

 

She turns her face to hug dadima and stares at maan and leaves towards myesha'myesha is awake and its time for her to bath'

 

Geet in the room along with myesha and nani'

Nani is massaging myesha'myesha is crying'..meanwhile geet is playing with toys so that myesha doesn't cries'..myesha stops crying..

And its time for myesha to get dressed'maan enters the room that time..geet indicates nani to leave the room'

Geet holds myesha and starts wiping her'.she applies lotion in her body'

 

Maan ' maan ki myesha ko aaj mumma taiyaar kar rahi hai'

Geet ' maneet ki myesha ko har roz mumma hi taiyaar karthi hai'papa office jaathey hai na'isliye papa ko paatha nahi hai'

 

Maan knows that geet is still angry with him..

Maan ' (looking at geet)..wo main isliye keh raha tha kyunki main nahi chahtha ki tumhe aur myesha ko koi bhi pareshani ho'

Geet ' (looking at maan) main samajthi hoon maan'

Maan ' hum myesha ka khayal rakh paayenge na geet'

Geet ' agar aapka saath ho toh'jaroor maan'

 

Meanwhile rajji enters..

Rajji ' aur massi ke rehthey huye myesha ko koi kami ho sakthi hai kya..

Geet ' haan maan'..rajji aur Vicky bhi toh honge humare saath'

 

Vicky enters the room'he dint overhear the conversation'

Vicky ' main kuch samjha nahi..

Geet ' wo..vicky'aap aur rajji ho na myesha ko sambhalne ke liye Amritsar mein..nani jo nahi jaa rahi hai'

Vicky ' haan bhabhi'.kyu nahi'yeh bhi koi poochne waali baath hai'

 

Myesha is dressed now'Vicky holds myesha and starts playing with her..

 

Maan ' Vicky'office chaley'

Vicky ' ji bro'

Geet comes and holds the baby'.vicky leaves the room and even rajji leaves the room so that husband n wife can spend time'

Maan comes and kisses myesha on her forehead and then kisses geet on her forehead'

Maan ' bye'jaldi milenge'

Geet kisses maan on his cheeks and bids him goodbye..

Geet ' jaldi aayega maan'myesha ke liye shopping karne jaana hai'..

Maan agrees to arrive home at 7: 00 p.m. so that they can go for shopping'

 

Geet and rajji are preparing lunch'.

Geet ' tu aaj office jaakar maan aur Vicky ka lunch de aana..

Rajji ' ji didi..

Lunch is packed'rajji goes to office and gives the lunch'

Vicky sees rajji from distance'and he just stops and stares at her beauty'

Rajji runs away giving the lunch'.

 

Evening..

Maan n Vicky arrive home..

Vicky ' bhabhi'aaj kya swadisht khaana banaya aapne'.bhindi ki sabzi'ab tak swad mere muh mein hai bhabhi'

Geet ' acchii bani thee na'.

Vicky ' aapka haath choomne ka mann kar raha hai bhabhi'

Maan staring at Vicky..

Vicky is scared

Geet ' jisne banaya uska haath choomo'.mera haath kyu

Vicky and maan astonished..

Geet ' rajji'.idhar aa toh'

Rajji comes'

geet ' Vicky ji'ab aap apna kam kar lijiye'

 

Maan and Geet giggle...they go to their room so that they can leave for shopping..

 

Rajji ' aap kya kam karna chahtey ho'

Vicky ' kuch nahi

Rajji ' aap apne aap ko samajhthey kya hai'ek toh pehle aapne place decide nahi kiya'..aapne aake mujhe thanks bhi nahi bola aapko baachane

Vicky ' (comes close towards rajji) chup'kithna bolthi ho'office mein thanks bolne ke liye hi tumhara wait kar raha tha'lekin tum toh udaan choo ho gaayeee'..btw tumhe Amritsar place kaise paatha chala'

Rajji ' (moves aside) wo'us din maine aapki baath sun li thee..jab aap adi aur pinky se pooch rahey they geet didi ke favourite places'.isliye..

 

Rajji runs off'

Maan n geet along with myesha leave for shopping but maan takes them some other place'.they go to park'.and finally they don't end up shopping..

 

Geet is like..chal koi gal nahi..amritsar mein shopping kar loongi'

Next day they board their flight from delhi to Amritsar'

 

They reach Amritsar'..

 

Precap:

 

The farm house and amritsar..



Edited by bharkha - 22 August 2011 at 1:37am

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lovely update

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nice update...
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