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FF : Post wedding part 19 updtd pg 94 last part (Page 84)

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Posted: 22 July 2011 at 3:24am | IP Logged
varsha beautiful update once again...loved it...aww MAANEET' moments were so emotional and beautiful...hope Maan' heart baby and heartbeat Geet r safe...loved Geet' and Vicky' bhabi-devar talk...this means now vicky will also join Geet Dadima anni in leg-pulling Maan bechara Maan!...and also now Rajji-Vicky love story nice yaar...gr8 to see ur update after so long...

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Thank u guys for ur support...Thank u all for clicking like button and commenting...appreciation and criticism are always welcome..thank u guys once again..and sorry for late update..was held up with relatives...from next time will ensure that the update is regular...
 
 
 PART -17
dadima and vicky reach hospital...they meet maan and all are worried about geet and the baby

 

dadima: maan betey'yeh sab achanak

maan: dadima..woh geet ke pet mein achanak se dard shuru ho gaaya'..paatha nahi dadima yeh sab achanak se kya ho gaaya'..

dadima: aap chintha math kijiye betey..sab theek ho jaayega..

 

meanwhile doctor comes..

maan ' doctor'.geet kaisii hai'koi complication

doctor: mr. khurana'is waqth hum kuch nahi keh sakthey'..bhagwan pe bharosa rakhiye'sab theek ho jaayega'.

 

Its 2 hours'.nurses run in and out of operation theatre'

Finally..doctor comes out'

 

Maan ' doctor'..

Docotor ' ghabraane waali koi baath nahi hai'congrajulations mr. khuraana..aapko beti hui hai'

Maan ' beti'..(smiling)(thinking about geet)'doctor..geet kaisii hai..

Doctor ' chintha waali koi baath nahi hai'mr. khurana mujhe aapse akeley mein baath karni hai'.aap plz mere cabin mein aaiyee'.

 

Maan n doctor walk towards the cabin

Doctor: aapko toh andaaza laag hi gaaya hoga'ki aapko seven month ki beti hui hai'.aapko geet aur bachey ka bahoooth khayal rakhna hoga'.bachii ko incubator mein rakhna padega'.pre matured baby hai'

Maan : ji doctor..

 

Maan inquires abt how he should handle the baby'.doctor explains him'..

 

Geet is being shifted to normal room from operation theatre'

She is still unconscious..

Dadima maan n vicky see the baby''maan has tears in his eyes'.

 

maan vicky n dadima enter the room to meet geet'

 

dadima ' geet betey'.aapko kaisa laag raha hai'

geet gets up to sit down..

dadima ' nahi nahi betey'aap aaram kijiye'is waqth sabse jyaada khayal aapko apna hi rakhna hai'.

Geet ' ji dadima'

Her eyes searches for maan

Vicky ' congratulations bhabhi'

Geet ' thanks vicky'

 

As dadima sees geet s eyes searching for maan..

Dadima ' vicky betey'aap humare saath ghar challiye..khaana lethey huye aa jayega'

Dadima smiles looking at geet and then she leaves along with vicky

Geet ' maan..

Maan stands in the corner of the room'

Geet ' hey babaji'.aaj ke din bhi'inhe kya ho gaaya hai'.maan

Maan turns his face and walks towards her..

Geet sees tears in his eyes'

Geet ' maan'.aap humare nanhi gudiya se miley na'.kaise dikhthi hai woh..

Maan ' Bilkul meri mishti jaisii'.wahi aankhein'

Geet ' accha'toh phir yeh aasu kyu

Maan ' tumhe kaise paatha chaala'

Geet ' maan singh khuraana ke aankh mein aasu and geet ko na paatha chaley aisa kabhi ho saktha hai kya'

Maan ' wo'geet'achanak se tumhe operation theatre mein le jaathey huye dekha toh'darr sa laaga'kuch khone ka..

Geet ' ab sab theek hai na maan'dekho'main aapke samne aur baby bhi'

 

Suddenly she realizes that she wants to see the baby'

Maan ' geet'woh doctor ne..

Geet ' haan haan main jaanthi hoon'.doctor ne mujhe aaram karne ko kaha hai...lekin ek baar'

Maan ' haan geet'.nurse bus aathi hi hogi'

 

Geet sees her baby'.and has tears in her eyes too..

Maan ' kuch hi der pehle koi mujhse keh raha tha'sab theek hai'phir aasu kyu'

Both maan n geet laugh'

 

Rajji enters meanwhile..

Rajji ' jijaji..geet didi'congratulations..

Maan ' congrats rajji..tum massi ban gaayee

Rajji ' aur apko bhi congrats jijaji'papa ban gaaye'

 

Rajji goes to see geet'

maan n geet decide that rajji will stay with them for next one month'

and rajji agrees to them'.she leaves saying that she will wind her work asap and will come to khurana mansion once geet gets discharged from hospital.

 

rajji leaves and Vicky enters'.

Maan leaves all his work and stays at hospital with geet'' adi manages all office work'..

 

Finally the day arrives when maan n geet arrive home with their new baby'

On their way..

Geet ' baby ka naam kya rakhenge'

Maan ' its decided geet'ayesha'.

Geet ' nahi'baby ka naam M letter se start hoga..

 

They reach home and still their nok jhok continues

As usual..dadima intervenes..

Geet betey aur maan betey -  aapki is ladaai ka humare paas ek sujhaav hai..

Kyu na baby ka naam..myesha rakhey'M letter se bhi start hoga and ayesha naam bhi aa jaayega'

maan n geet see each other and they nod their head'.

 

Geet ' talking to her babaji'mujhe paatha hai babaji'.aap meri madaath ke liye hi dadima ko bhejey ho'varna inhe sambhalna'uff'

Maan ' geet''

Suddenly myesha starts weeping..geet rushes to see her'

Dadima ' maan betey..itni choti sii baath bhi nahi samajhtey aap'geet aapke naam ke starting letter se baby ka naam rakhna chahthi hai'

 

Only then maan realizes that why geet was keen in keeping the baby s name starting with letter M'.

 

Geet in the room with myesha'

Maan enters'.

Geet ' finally'..myesha ke papa ko fursaath mil hi gaayee baby aur mumma ke liye'.

Maan goes and lies on the side of the bed where geet is lying down'.

 

Geet ' maan'.aap yeh kya kar rahey ho'.myesha uth jaayegi

Maan cuddles next to geet..hugs her tightly and kisses on her cheeks..

Maan ' thanks geet'

He gets up and moves to the other side of the bed'

Maan ' geet..waise tumhe kya laaga..main tumhare paas kyu aaya tha'

Geet blushes'.

Maan clicks his mobile to take a pic of geet'.geet n baby n baby alone..

He then goes and changes to his tracks'and comes

Maan ' geet'tumne mere sawaal ka jawaab nahi diiya''.

He finds his mishti and his angel sleeping peacefully'he goes and sleeps on the other side of the bed'

 

After a while..

Geet goes and cuddles up next to him'she hugs him tightly and kisses on his cheeks''

Maan ' geet'.myesha uth jaayegi'main toh mazzak kar raha tha'

Geet ' maan u are welcome'waise aapko kya laaga..main aapke paas kyu aaiyee thee..

Maan '  accha ji'.

Geet was about to get up'.maan pulls her..

Maan ' waise welcome kisliye'

Geet ' kyunki aapne thanks kaha

Maan ' accha'..btw maine thanks kyu kaha'tumhe paatha hai

Geet ' hmm'.nahi..aapne thanks kaha isliye maine welcome kaha'waise aapko mujhe har baath ke liye thanks kehna padtha hoga'toh mujhe kya paatha aap kis baath ke liye mujhe thanks boley

Maan ' toh aaj kal mrs. Geet singh khuraana ko attitude

Geet ' apney pathi se sikha hai'sangath ka asar toh hoga na'..

 

Geet moves to the other side of the bed and all three cuddle up and sleep'

 

Next day morning' 

Rajji arrives'.

Vicky is cleaning his car''.as he got his new gift from maan n geet for becoming chacha'

 

Rajjji and Vicky see each other''.

Rajji thinks he is the driver'he is working as his part time job'and Vicky is stunned to see rajji'

 

Before they speak to each other'.nakul comes and tells rajji that dadima aapka hi intezzar kar rahi thee'

Vicky thinks'that she is the nani for myesha'.

 

Rajji ' bhadiya hai'laagey raho'.

Vicky ' haan'mazzey hai,'tum bhi laagi raho'

Dadima comes meanwhile'..

Dadima ' rajji betey'..geet aapka kab se intezzar kar rahi hai'massi banney ke baath toh aapka farz aur bhi bhad jaatha hai'.

Vicky is stunned'.

Dadima ' (conti) aur haan Vicky betey'aap jaldi se taiyar ho jaaiye'aaj aapke bhai maan ke saath aapko office jo jaana hai'

 

Rajji s mouth is open'.she is shocked to hear this'she cudnt believe her eyes..that Vikas is none other than Vicky'.maan singh khurana s younger brother'and Vicky is shocked to hear that rajji is rajji handa..geet bhabhi s younger sister'.

 

Both stare at each other in disbelief'

Dadima ' ab aap dono chalenge bhi ya ek doosre ko ghoorne mein waqth zaaya karenge'.

 

They both come out of the stare and head towards maan s room'

 

Rajji hugs geet and holds the baby in her hand'.meanwhile Vicky crosses their room and geet sees him'

Geet ' Vicky'.

He enters the room and tells ji bhabhi'

Geet introduces Vicky to rajji and the vice versa'

Geet ' rajji tujhe paatha hai'vicky ke class mein ek ladki hai..woh hamesha ussey thang karti rehthi hai'..vicky kya naam baathaya tune'

Vicky ' bhabhi'.woh'.

 

Maan enters the room'

Finally sab yahan ho'

Maan ' waise rajji ke class mein bhi ek ladka hai jo hamesha ussey thang kartha rehtha hai'..kya naam hai rajji uska'

Rajji ' jijaji'.woh''

 

Nani enters the room'she has been appointed by dadima to look after myesha'

Nani 'dadima  neechey naashta ke liye bulla rahi hai'.

 

Rajji and geet stay' maan n vicky meanwhile get ready for office''

 

Everyone have breakfast at the breakfast table.

Maan n geet know that rajji is speaking about Vicky and Vicky is speaking about rajji'despite of knowing this'they pull Vicky n rajji s leg'

Maan ' haan tum dono ne baathaya nahi'.ki tum dono ko college mein kaun thang kartha hai'

Rajji ' wo jijaji'.choddiye na'.wo'treat chahiye humein'hai na vicky'

Vicky ' treat'?????

Rajji ' uff ho'.(talking to herself) woh hum maasi aur chacha ban gaaye na'isliye'

Maan ' hum'

Geet giggling'..and indicating maan with her eyes not to speak more'.

Rajji ' treat' kahaan le jaa rahey ho jijaji'.

Geet ' wahi maan'.kahaan le jaa rahey ho mujhe'.i mean humein'

Dadima ' waise idea burra nahi hai'.treat toh bantha hi hai'.

Maan ' abroad challey'London..paris..

Geet ' maan'.mujhe humari beti ko videshi nahi banana'.samjhey aap'india mein hi ghoomenge'kyu rajji aur Vicky'

Rajji ' haan jijaji'wahan ka khaana..uff'.

Geet ' wahi toh'Italian Mexican..paasta'burger..pizza'uff yeh koi khaana hotha hai'.

Maan ' main kuch  kahu'.vicky tumhara kya khayal hai..

Vicky ' jaisa bhabhi chahey'..

Geet ' toh decide ho gaaya'india mein hi ghoomenge'.vicky aur rajji..tum dono decide karo..kaun sii jhagah jaana hai'.aakhir tum dono ki hi treat hai'

 

Precap: which place will they decide and the trip

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 



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