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FF : Post wedding part 19 updtd pg 94 last part (Page 71)

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Posted: 20 April 2011 at 7:53am | IP Logged
kya baat hai madam...
 
sazaa and alll...woowwwwww.....yaha bhi...?????? moi lubbs u for that.....
 
loved the update...
 
lekin subah subah ka scene maine bola waise kyu nahi likha.....it wud have been hilarious....mujhe pata hai to romantic scenes nahi likhti..phir bhi!!!!
 
me waiting for party...party kar ke jaana samjhi????
 
 

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Posted: 20 April 2011 at 11:24am | IP Logged
Nice update. Finally Rajji will also live with Geet. Sashaa ki toh band baj gayi.LOL

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Posted: 20 April 2011 at 11:25am | IP Logged
nice updt

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Posted: 21 April 2011 at 3:54am | IP Logged
Originally posted by dewdropred

nice update varshu ' cont soon & thanks 4 the PM '.

 

Tu bhi naa '. Mast hain ' idhar bhi sazaa 'I was literally ROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL when i read the word sazaa ....

 
me thinking hai meri choti sis obsessed hain sazaa ki word se ROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL
 
maan & geet ko sazaaaROFLROFLROFLROFL ' sashaAngryAngryAngry ko sazaa ....she deserved it ....me wanting 2 c her sazaa .... any how i think now u can post the next update .... coz u know the reason .... so no need 2 wait for 1 month ....sunday ke andhar post karde '
 
P.S.:- crazies ko sazaa nahin diya poore 1 week tho tere haath main kujli ho rahin hain lagtha hainROFLROFLROFLROFL issi liye bechare maan & geet ke peeche pad gayi sazaa dene ROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL me wanting to know wht sazaa maan will give geet BlushingEmbarrassedBlushingEmbarrassedBlushingEmbarrassed& what sazaa geet will give maanEmbarrassedBlushingEmbarrassedBlushingEmbarrassedBlushing
 
Thanks hima dii.....Big smile Big smile Big smile Big smile 
 
and sazza to sasha.. yeh idea aash ka tha..... uskii ka apnayaa maine....LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL
 
ll definitely update......sasha ki bachi ko toh main aissey bhi nahi chodne waaali.... bahooth thang kiiya humein.....Angry Angry Angry 
 
sazza milegii na babbba sabko....LOL LOL LOL 

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Posted: 22 April 2011 at 6:50am | IP Logged
Originally posted by aashluvsmaan

kya baat hai madam...
 
sazaa and alll...woowww...yaha bhi...?????? moi lubbs u for that...
 
loved the update...
 
lekin subah subah ka scene maine bola waise kyu nahi likha...it wud have been hilarious...mujhe pata hai to romantic scenes nahi likhti..phir bhi!!!!
 
me waiting for party...party kar ke jaana samjhi????
 
 
 
main romantic scenes nahi likh paathi,...Cry Cry Cry Cry 
 
party karke jaaongii...Big smile

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Posted: 27 April 2011 at 7:34am | IP Logged
I read all the parts and it is very nice plz continue soon

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Posted: 28 April 2011 at 3:40am | IP Logged
@ cutie_teju: thank u for liking it and commenting on it
 
@ vj2102: thank u
 
@ 20tullip2000: thank u so much..
 


Edited by bharkha - 28 April 2011 at 3:40am
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Posted: 28 April 2011 at 4:15am | IP Logged
Thank you guys for liking and commenting on my ff.. thank u guys so much.. here is the sorry party... hope i did some justice to it.. let me know how was it... comments n criticism are always welcome as it ll help me to write further...Thank u once again
 
 
Part – 15

 

Party is in the evening 7 p.m. now its morning 7 a.m.

 

Rajji – pinky didi.. main college ke liye nikaal rahi hoon…

Pinky – rajji.. ruk.. mein bhi office ke liye nikloongi… saath mein chalenge.. tujhe raaste mein chod doongii…

Rajji – didi..jaldi karo…

 

Rajji and Pinky both go together….Pinky drops rajji and then leaves to her office

Rajji at her college…pinky at office.

 

At khuranna Mansion

 

Geet – maan… aaj party kis khushi mein..

Maan – woh geet…. Do wajah hai..ek Rajji kii khushi mein…….aur

Geet – aur…..

Maan – wo…doosri wajah tumhe party mein hi maloom chalega…

Geet – maan..please baathao na… doosri wajah kya hai…

Maan – geet…tum time par taiyaar ho jaana… aaj late ke liye koi jhagah nahi hai..

Geet – iska mathlab.. main late se taiyaar hothi hoon

Maan – mere kehne ka yeh mathlab nahi tha geet

Geet – aaa haaa haaa.. sab samajhti hoon main..

 

Dadima intervenes….

 
Geet – dadima.. accha hua aap aa gaaye.. aapne dekha… maan kehthey hai ki main late se taiyaar hothi hoon…..

Dadima – maan betey.. shayad aap apney shaddi ke baad ka pehla din bhool rahey hai..

Dadima says… maan betey aur geet betey…aap dono samay par taiyaar rahiyega..

Maan – geet… dadima se yeh baath kehne ki kya jaroorath thee….

Geet – jis tarah yeh party aapke liye jaroori hai,…..theek ussi tarah yeh baath karni jaroori thee….and then she grins… (speaking to herself) maan bhi na.. kabhi kuch baathathey hi nahi hai…(thinking about the second reason)

Maan – geet.. kya kaha tumne… main tumhe kuch nahi baatha hooon . aur tumhari naa baathane waali aadath …..mujhe yaad hai par shayad tum bhool gaayee ho..

Geet - (telling in her mind) maan shayad mujhse naraaz ho gaaye… (speaking to herself) inke haathi ke kan hai kya….

Maan – kya.. haathi ke kan..

Geet – ae lo.. ab yeh bhi sun liiye..

Maan – kya

Geet – kuch nahi wo…aapka gussa toh hamesha nak mein chadda rehtha hai..

Maan – geet….. main tumhari in baathoin se bore ho chukka hoon…

Geet – maan.. kya kaha.. bore ho chukkey ho…ab aapko meri baathein bore karne lag gaayee hai

Maan – ae lo.. meri mishti ko bhi gussa aatha hai…..theek hai geet.. agar tum ithna hi kehti ho toh..main keh detha hoon.. doosri wajah..surprise hai…

 

Sasha is held up with the party stuffs.. she is handling and managing it single handedly…no one is there to help her.. she and the caterers.. 

Venue is ready with traditional theme..

Guests are present… everybody waiting for khuranna family…..

Rajji joins geet and maan…

 

Sasha is welcoming every guest personally as she did not want to disappoint maan

Geet Maan and Rajji entering…

Sasha standing in the entrance.. and the most awaited guests are there….

 
Sasha – welcome Maan sir.. Geet mam…and…

Rajji – Rajinder….

Sasha – Rajinder…(sasha was waiting for her sir name..)

Maan – sasha.. rajji humare saath aayee hai… chale…saali sahiba

 
Maan geet and rajji enter the hall..Sasha understands that rajinder is maan s saali…on the other hand.. geet is surprised that sasha is representing maan as maan sir and calling her as geet madam..

 

Geet – maan..yeh sasha ko kya hua hai…tevar badle badle nazzar aa rahey hai.

Maan – kyu geet.. kya hua…

Geet – nahi..wo..usne aapko maan sir kehkar bulaaya aur mujhe madam..isliye..

Maan – geet…sahi toh kaha usne..aakhir main uska boss hoon aur tum..boss ki home minister..bulaana toh padega hi..

Geet – lekin pehle toh nahi bulathee thee..kahin aapne toh

Rajji – oh ho didi.. aap bhi na.. kyu baath ko uljha rahi ho..aur waise bhi..us sasha ki bachi ko toh noukri se nikaal dena chahiye….

Geet – rajji… tum toh aisa nahi bolthii lekin aaj kya hua tumhe..koi baath hai kya

Rajji – wo..didi… mere college mein ek ladka.. uska naam..haan..vikas…thang kar rakha hai us ladke ne…

Geet – kya...

Rajji – didi..aap khama kha tension math lo…aur hone waale baby ko aur jijaji ko bhi tension math do..main sab sambhal loongi.. aur us ladke kii toh khair nahi…

 

Meanwhile.. sasha and adi go to the stage.. and sasha starts her speech…

 
Sasha – Hello everyone…I welcome everyone to the party on behalf of Khuranna family..… As you have already noticed.. the party is traditional…

 

She was about to continue…one guest speaks

Guest – party toh traditional hai.. I guess even ur language should be traditional..

 

Sasha – main is party mein sabhi logo ka hardik dil se swagath karthi hoon...Yeh party Rajinder mam ke aane kii khushi mein hai…Welcome Rajinder Mam..…

Adi - Rajji.. tumhara Delhi aur humare zindagii mein swagath hai…..Aur sabse badi khushi ki wajah toh tum jaanthi hi ho…Yeh party maan sir ne throw ki hai tumhare liye…Poore khuraana khandan ki aur se main tumhara swagath kartha hoon..

 
Rajji is so happy.. she is not able to believe ki maan has thrown a party for her…she hugs geet..

 

Rajji – geet didi.. thank u so much..

Geet – thank u mujhe nahi.. maan ko kaho..

Rajji – thank u jijaji…

Maan – U are welcome saali sahiba… aur tumne jo samajhdari se kam liya rahul ke case mein…ussi khushi mein tumhare liye party hai aur saath mein Pinky ke ghar aur Khurana mansion mein rehne ke liye bhi…

 
Rajji is so happy… her happiness is clearly shown in her face…

Pinky comes meanwhile and pinky and rajji join..

 

Only sasha on stage…

Sasha – main kuch aur bhi kehna chahthi hoon…Geet mam ke liye..

Geet is surprised and looks at sasha…

Sasha – Geet mam… I M SORRY….and then a slideshow begins..

 

The presentation is all about what wrong doings sasha had done with geet…..everything thing..

  

Maan is shocked to see rest other things…as he just knew about kurbaan hua sequence. He dint knew the rest..

Maan s anger is clearly shown on his face….

 

Sasha – maine ithni saari galtiiiya kii.. in gaaltiyoin ke liye main maafi maangti hoon..I am sorry geet madam….

 

Geet turns towards maan and sees his expression..she knows that he is angry…

Geet – maan…yeh sab kya tha

Maan – wahi main bhi samajhne kii koshish kar raha hoon geet..mujhe toh maloom hi nahi tha kii sasha ithna neeche gir sakti hain…aur toh aur usne tumhare aur dev ke baare mein media ko baathaya….

 

Maan leaves…geet behind him..outside the venue.. in the garden..

 

Geet – maan.. kya aap meri baath manange

Maan – geet.. tumhari har baath salakhoin par

Geet – maan.. yeh baathein poorani ho chuki hai.. inhe bhool jaane mein hi samajhdarri hai…………….

Maan still lost…

Geet – maan.. waise…. Aapne hi kaha tha na sasha ko mujhe geet madam aur maan sir kehkar bulaaye

Maan – haan geet…..

Geet- maan.. yeh sab karne ki kya jaroorath thee..aur yeh sorry waala…

Maan – jaroorath thee geet…….bahooth jyaada jaroorath thee…. Aaj sabko paatha chal gaaya hoga.. kii maan singh khurana kii geet ko koi kuch nahi bol sakta….

Geet – kisskii ithni zuraath

Maan – geet.. tumhe ab bhi mazzak soojh raha hai...waise tum mujhse naraaz toh nahi ho na

Geet – naraaz main kyun

Maan – woh geet.. tumne mujhse kaha tha na.. ki sasha ko kuch math kehna.. isliye..

Geet – thoda naraaz thee… lekin ab nahi hoon…

Maan – lekin is party ki wajah se sasha kii saari gaaltiya samne aa gaayee jo mujhe maloom nahi tha

Geet – maan.. abhi apne mujhse kaha kii aap meri baath manenge

 

Geet smiles at maan n they both enter the venue…

Party is still going on.. but maan n geet leave the party in half way

 

Geet is six months pregnant… and she doesn't feels like eating anything in the party…

 

Maan – geet.. tumhare mann pasand ka khaana tha party mein

Geet – maan.. mujhe Italian food khaana hai..

Maan – kya.. Italian aur tum……

Geet – maan.. aapko paatha hai na.. mein aur mera cravings..

Maan – haan haan.. aur tumhara mood swings bhi..

Geet -  mood swings.. mera toh cravings ke saath rishta hai filhaal aur aapka toh mood swings ke saath..

Maan – kya….mein aur mood swings..

Geet – Italian food….khaana hai.. woh bhi pasta….

Maan – dekh raha hoon geet tumhe….waise tum ladkio ko samajhna mumkin nahi...

Geet – toh phir aap ulaajhne ki koshish kyu karthey hai..

 

They reach restaurant and geet and maan have their dinner…

 
Rajji leaves to pinky s home.. and dadima annie… are already there at khuranna mansion..

 

Dadima – maan aur geet betey bhi.. party aadhey mein chodke jaathey hai kya..yeh dono bhi na…yeh lo aa gaaye dono

 

maan n geet reach khuraana mansion..they both walking hand in hand and laughing aloud.

 

Maan – kya hua dadima.. aap is waqth bhi jaagi hui hai..

Dadima – pehle aap humein yeh baathaiyee.. aap dono party ke beech se hi uth ke kyu aa gaaye

Maan – wo dadima…. Kyunki party mein..

Dadima – maan mujhe paatha tha.. aap sasha ki baath se naaraaz they aur isiliye..lekin phir bhi..

Geet – dadima…aissi baath nahi hai.. wo..mera Punjabi khaane ka maan nahi kar raha tha aur ghootan sii ho rahi thee.. isliye maine hi maan se kaha….

Dadima – main toh aissey hi naraaz ho rahi thee aap dono par.. lekin baathake toh jaana chahiye tha.. hum sab kithne pareshaan ho gaaye they..… aur rajji ke liye hi aapne party throw kii thee aur aap dono hi laaptha ho gaaye

Geet – sorry dadima.. main abhi rajji ko phone kar dethi hoon…

Dadima – wo toh aap kar lijyega..lekin usse pehle inse miliye..

 

A person enters……

 

Maan goes and hugs him…..

Dadima – geet betey.. yeh Vicky hai.. maan ke chote bhai….aur Vicky betey.. yeh tumhari geet bhabhi hai..maan betey ki ardhaangini…

 

Both Vicky and geet say hi and hello to each other…

 

Maan and geet in their room…

Geet – ab aur bhi koi bakki hai..

Maan – geet.. main samjha nahi..

Geet – (yelling at maan) aap mujhe pehle nahi baatha saktey they.. ki aapka ek aur bhai bhi haii….

Maan – wo geet…

Geet – pehle annie..aur ab Vicky.. aur toh aur aapne shaddi mein bhi nahi bulaaya Vicky ko aur na hi unke baare mein baathaya mujhe... bhool bhoolaiya family hai sach mein

Maan – wo geet.. main jab bhi tumhe dekhtha hoon... mera mathlab hai kii.. main sab bhool jaatha hooon...

Geet blushing now…

Geet – aapko paatha hai kii mujhe kaise manana hai.. lekin is baar main maanney waali nahi hoon..

 

Hope u all liked this part...

I ll be updating next part in the month of June.. as i ll be out of station in the month of may. 

 

 

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