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FF : Post wedding part 19 updtd pg 94 last part (Page 67)

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Posted: 08 April 2011 at 11:19am | IP Logged
Update soon n do pm me plzzzzzzzz

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Posted: 16 April 2011 at 3:36am | IP Logged
maneetsangel and surbhijin106...thank u guys.. ll definitely add to my pm list.. thank u once again...
 
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Posted: 16 April 2011 at 3:53am | IP Logged
Thank u all for ur luvly comments... and thanks for clicking like button.. sorry for late update..and for making u guys wait for a long time... ll try updating next part next week.. and as i ll be out of station for a month... ll update after the month of may.. sorry till then....
 
Credit for sasha s punishment goes to aash...thanks yar...i hope u all like this update...
 
Part 14:

 

Maan n geet still sleeping on the terrace'..

Dadima enters maaneets room to find whether they are awake or not and is surprised as well as shocked as she dint find them in the room'.she searches here n there and asks annie also' annie replies negative'.

Nakul sees worried dadima n tells her that maan n geet slept at terrace last nite'

 

Dadima : maan betey aur geet betey bhi na'nakul' tum naashtha ki taiyarri karo..

Then she leaves to terrace and finds maan n geet still sleeping'

 

Dadima ' (touchin geet)'geet betey'

Geet ' kya maan.. subhay subhay aap kabhi mujhe sone nahi dethey'

Dadima ' maan betey'.. (touches him)'

Maan ' haaa'.haaa'''. dadima.. aap yahan'.

Dadima ' shukaar hai koi toh utha humare uthaane se'. hum yeh kehne aaye they ki aat bajne waale hain'.aap log taiyaar hokar neeche aa jaayee,,saath mein naashta karenge

 

Saying this dadima leaves'.

 

Maan 'geet'.

Geet ' aapko ek baar bolne se samajh mein nahi aatha'subhay subhay jhagda karna shuru kar dethey ho

Maan ' geet jii' wo jo aapne bola na.. aapne mujhe nahi dadima se kaha'

Geet ' hmmm''kya'dadima'

 

She sits on the bed,,,

 

Maan ' jii dadima'.pehli baar maine nahi dadima ne jaagaya tumhe'.

Geet ' hye rabba'. Ye maine kya kar diiya.. dadima se'yeh sab aapki wajah se hua hai maan'aapko jaldi uthkar mujhe bhi utaana chahiye tha na..

Maan ' accha jii''. Ab iske liye bhi main hi kasoorwaar'.isse aacha yeh hotha ki main tumhe utaatha hi nahi' kadakthii hui suraj ki kiraanein utthaathee toh accha hotha' kal se aisey hi karoonga geet'.

Geet ' haan..mera mathlab hain'.ab late ho raha hai' jaldi jaake taiyaar ho jaathey hai'

Maan ' main sab samajh raha hoon geet tumhara mathlab,,

 

He leaves to the room' geet behind him'

 

Both of them getting ready in the room'maan is naraaz with geet.. as she blamed him..

Geet ' maan'.wo toh main aiiya viiyaa hi bol diiya'

Maan ' hmmm'

Geet ' maan suniye toh'.

Maan not listening to her'he turns his face'

 

Geet goes towards him n faces him now.. holds his hand.. and doesn't lets him go

 

Geet ' isse pehle aap sazza kii baath karey'..main apna sazza poora kar lethi hoon

She kisses him'..

 

Geet feels shy n then turns off her face'

Maan ' (staring at geet) main ithni jaldi nahi manoonga geet'..

Geet ' ithni jaldi nahi maanenge ka kya mathlab'.

 

Geet is irritated'.Meanwhile nakul knocks the door'

 

Nakul ' dadima aap dono ko neeche bula rahi hai'

Geet leaves along with nakul..

 

All of them have breakfast together at dining table' dadima praises geet and tells them stories wen she was child she used to sleep in terrace'. And also tells them that aaj ke zammaane mein chathoin mein sona toh sirf gaav mein hi hotha hai.....

 

Maan is happy to see dadima sharing her childhood stories with geet.

 

Maan ' geet' aaj sahi maaniye mein tum dadima kii chahethi ho..

Geet ' main samjhi nahi

Maan ' ithne saal ho gaaye.. aaj tak dadima ne mujhse ya phir annie se apne bachpan kii baathein kabhi nahi kii..

Geet ' woh toh hai' ae le le..ye aapko abhi maloom pada' mujhe toh pehle se hi maloom tha'

She turns off her face and begins to walk'

 

Maan goes behind her lady love and stands in front of her'

Geet ' mujhe jaane dijiye'bahooth kam bakki hai

Maan walks forward.. geet takes back steps' and finally he pins her against the wall'

adores his lady love and plats kisses on her forehead'..

geet s eyes closed meanwhile..

 

geet ' main ithni jaldi manney waali nahi hoon'

she awaits his reply but finds only silence'maan is already gone..

 

geet ' (telling herself) maan bhi na.. acchi tarah se jaanthey hai kaise manana hai mujhe'

 

maan at office,,,,,

 

Maan calls sasha to his cabin..

Maan ' sasha.. wo mr. chopra waali file dena..

Sasha ' mk.. kaun se project ki baath kar rahey ho.. wahi na jo geet handle kar rahii thee

Maan ' hmmm'. geet nahi geet madam kaho'.she is ur boss's wife'.

Sasha nods her head in reply and gives him file'

Sasha ' aur kuch mk'

Maan ' no' u may leave now'

 

He remembers geets words' but is still not able to forgive sasha'.

 

There is a meeting to be held in conference room along with staff members'.

 

Conference room:

 

Maan says' Khuraana constructions mein ab naaye log jud gaaye hai' aur main chahtha hoon kii un logo ko kuch puraane clippings dikhaaya jaaye.. jisse wo log yeh samajh sakey ki humare projects ko kaise handle karna chahiye'

Adi..

Adi has already selected 3 clippings.. and the last clipping has mr. chopra's party clipping..

Everyone is shocked to see sasha involved in geet's wadrobe malfunction..

 

Maan ' sasha

Sasha ' wo mk'

Maan ' maan sir sasha'..

Sasha ' wo maan sir'

 

The whole conference room is in silence'.

Sasha ' sorry mk.. mera mathlab hai maan sir..

Maan ' sorry'tumhari sabse badi gaalthi' tumne geet ke saath aisa kiiya aur doosri badi galti' tumne ab tak apni gaalti ko nahi sudhaara'

Sasha ' I am sorry maan sir..

Maan ' sorry' sorry geet se kaho...

Sasha ' main abhi geet ko phone karthi hoon'.(looks at maan ) mera mathlab hai geet madam

Maan ' mujhe laagtha hai tum sachey dil se prayaashchit karna chahti ho' isliye tum ek party throw karo'

Sasha ' party.. lekin mk' maan sir'.party kisliye'

Maan ' sawaal poochne ka hak tumhe nahi hai.. aur haan.. meri baath abhi tak khatham nahi huii'. sorry party hai'.geet ke liye'.. typical Indian style..no continental food'..punjabi khaana hona chahiye.. wo sab geet ke pasand ke'aur haan'.theme traditional hai'

Aur haan is baath ka sab dhyaan rakhey kii koi bhi sasha ki madaath nahi karega'got it..

 

He gets up and leaves the conference room'.

 

Its evening time' and maan adi pinky and geet waiting for rajji.at KM

 

Geet ' yeh rajji ab tak kyu nahi aayeee

Maan ' geet.. tum chintha math karo.. rastey mein hogi.. bus pahoochne waali hogii

 

Rajji enters..

Rajji ' aaj kya khaas hai' sabke sab KM mein'.

Pinky ' rajji bus aissey hi

Geet ' rajji' hum tumse kuch baath karna chahthey hai'.lekin ussey pehle tumhe kuch dikhaana chahthey hain'.

 

Maan shows mr. chopra s party' wen geet met rahul for first time and what nuisance he did'

 

Rajji could not believe her eyes'..

Rajji ' yeh toh rahul hai

Geet ' rajji' tum jismein bhi khush ho hum tumhara saath denge'. Tumhari khushi mein hi humari khushi hai'.lekin yeh rahul

Maan ' rajji.. maine bahaar se bhi paatha laagaya hai.. rahul aacha insaan nahi hai'agar tum chahthi ho toh main tumhe sabbith kar saktha hoon

 

Rajji is shocked to hear this'

 

Geet ' rajji.. mujhse behthaar is baath ko kaun samajh saktha hai jab koi dhoka detha hai toh

Maan ' remembers dev and also sasha' and thinks in his mind that he ll never forgive dev and sasha'.

Geet ' lekin rajji.. teri toh ab tak shaddi bhi nahi hui hai aur teri aage kii zindagii bhi bahoooth khoobsurat hogi..tujhe bhi koi milega jo tujhse behaath pyaar karega'

Rajji ' wo rahul'..

Maan ' uski chintha tum math karo.. usko main dekh loonga'.

 

Geet adi maan and pinky console rajji' tellin her that better future is in store for her..

 

Maan ' rajji ' aaj ek kam karo tum yehi ruk jaao''waise bhi hostel mein rukna theek nahi rahega'

Geet ' haan rajji.. tum yehi ruk jao'

Maan ' aaj se tum college yehi se jaaongi.. aur hostel vacate karogii..

Rajji ' lekin main toh hostel '.aur ghar par maloom padh gaaya toh'

Maan ' rajji' humein nahi paatha tha ki tum hostel mein reh kar padhaai karthi.. lekin ab tum manna nahi karogii'

Geet ' maan bilkul saahi keh rahey hai'

Rajji ' agar gharwaale poochey toh'.

Pinky ' oye.. bole dena ki tum mere saath rehthi ho.. koi kuch nahi bolega phir..

Geet ' yeh sahi rahega'. Pinky ko toh sab jaanthey hi hai na' unhe koi gila nahi hoga..rajji tum pinky ke saath rehna.. lekin yahan par bhi aathi jaathi rehna...

 

Adi and pinky blush seein each other' and maan n geet are happy that geet s family ll not have a prob if they find that rajji is not stayin at hostel'.

 

Dadima is glad to know that rajji s problem has been solved'..

 

Adi ' yeh toh acchi baath hui ki rajji ab pinky ke saath rahegi..par sir'

Maan ' par kya adi

Adi ' sir.. geet ko paatha chalega kii aapne sasha se uske liye party throw karne ko kaha woh bhi sorry party.. toh'.

Maan 'party ki do wajah hai adi.. ek rajji kii khushi mein aur ussi party mein sasha maafi maangegi..

Adi ' lekin maan sir.. aisa aap kar hi kyu rahey hai jisse geet naraaz ho jaaye'

Maan ' adi'

Adi ' sorry sir'.main samajh gaaya.. main sasha ko inform kar doonga'

 



Edited by bharkha - 16 April 2011 at 3:54am

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awesome ... loved it ..

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ..

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loved it Smile

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varsha wonderful update dear..loved it..

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Superb update.... loved it

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simply loved it

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