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FF : Post wedding part 19 updtd pg 94 last part (Page 61)

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Thank you all for clicking like button and commenting.. thank u guys...Big smile 
 
Part – 13

 

Maan waiting for adi and pinky next day…

 

Geet -  aaj subhay subhay aap ithni jaldi taiyaar ho gaaye.. ab toh 7 hi bajeh hai..

Maan – woh adi aur pinky aane waale hain geet.. tum bhi taiyaar ho jao….

 

He says this and leaves downstairs…

Geet – (in her mind) bechaare adi aur pinky… unko office mein bhi chain nahi aur ghar pe bhi bulaa lliiya maan ne….

 

Adi and pinky arrive at Khuraana Mansion…

 

Maan – aao.. adi aur pinky….jo cheez maine tumse laane ko kaha tha woh laaye ho na apne saath…

Adi -  ji maan sir.. aapke kahey muthabeek humne laaya hai…

 

Meanwhile geet arrives…

Geet – array pinky…. Adi sir… aap dono ka date kaisa tha kal..

Adi and pinky blushing…

Geet – chal ander chal… mujhe tujhse baath karni hai….

 

Piny sees towards adi and maan.. maan nods his head and pinky n geet leave the hall…

 

Maan and adi sitting in the hall….

Maan – adi zaara woh CD laagao jismein rahul tha… rahul ki aakhri party….

Adi – ji sir..

 

They both watch the video… maan is happy to find that the video has rahul in it and the way he behaved towards geet……. He is too surprised to find about sasha……..geet has never told about sasha to maan…..maan is so irritated with sasha.. but right now rajji is more important to her…

 

Geet and pinky arrive after their talks….they bring tea and black coffe with other snack items….

 

Geet – aap dono ki baathein poori ho gaayee…. Ya abhi bhi kuch bakkki hai

Maan – wo geet…

Geet gives black coffee to maan and pinky gives tea to adi…

Maan – woh.. mujhe tumse baath karni thee…

Geet understood that maan wanted to tell something important..

Geet – boliye na maan….

Maan – wo rajji ke baare mein baath karni thee..

Geet – toh aapne kuch socha kaise rajji ko rahul ke baare mein baathaaye…

Maan – hmmm…

 

He then tells geet adi and pinky of what he thought…. 

Maan says them that rajji has the right to know about rahul… they will show the video of rahul and his bad deeds towards geet… as they have proof against rahul… 

Geet is happy and touched by this…she adores maan….

All of them agree with this..

 

They decide to tell rajji the next day…..adi and pinky leave for office…

After sometime dadima and annie reach home from their gurgaon trip….maan n geet speak to them for a while and dadima n annie leave to their respective rooms as they are very tired…

 

Maan is ready to leave for office…

Geet – yeh raha aapka wallet aur rumaal..

Maan leaves….

 

Maan goes to office and is upset with geet..as geet dint tell about sasha and her misdeeds..

 

Annie finds about arjun n his so called fiance..sunaina…..( annie comes to know abt her through dadima s friend.. as dadima n annie went to gurgoan to meet dadima s friend)

And annie finds that sunaina n arjun are not engaged.. she is happy to know this…

 

Maan calls adi…

Maan – adi.. tumne mujhe kyu nahi baathaya kii mr. chopra ki party mein jo kuch bhi hua geet ke saath wo sasha ki wajah se hua…

Adi -  wo maan sir.. maine aapse kaha tha lekin us samay mere paas proof nahi tha aur naahi geet ke paas aur aap humpar vishwas nahi kartey…

Maan – hmmm… theek hai adi tum jaa saktey ho…

Maan thinking in his mind.. why dint geet tell about sasha post marriage.. she shud have informed him about her….

 

Maan arrives home….

Dadima annie and geet waiting for maan to have dinner….

Maan says them that he is tired.. and not hungry… asks them to have their dinner…

Dadima and annie have their diiner. Geet takes dinner for maan to the room….

 

Maan still dint change his clothes… geet sees maan and knows he is upset. She is not aware of the reason….

 

Geet – aap change karke aa jaaiyee.. khaana taiyaar hai….

Maan – mujhe bhook nahi hai geet….

He goes and changes his clothes….

 

Geet wondering what happened to maan today and why is he sounding so upset and she thinks how to ask maan….

Maan comes from the restroom

 

Geet – maan.. agar mujhse koi gaalthi huiii hai toh aap boliye na… aisey chup math rahiyee….

Maan is still quiet… dadima arrives… she knocks their door..

 

Geet – ander aayee na dadima…

Dadima – geet betey mujhse aapse hi baath karni theee….

Geet – jii dadima

Dadima – aapne  khaana khaaya….

Geet -  nahi dadima

Dadima – geet betey… aisi halaath mein samay se khaana chahiye aur phir aapko dawaaiya bhi toh leni hai… pregnancy mein aapko apna aur bhi khayaal rakhna padega geet betey….

 

Maan hears this and he is like meri wajah se geet ne ab tak khaana nahi khaaya aur main yeh kaise bhool gaaya kii geet ki sehaath ka khaayal rakhna hai mujhe….

 

Geet – jii dadima.. main abhi kha lethi hoon….

Dadima – yaad se dawaai bhi le lijiyega…aur maan betey aap aaram kar lijiye thak gaaye honge aap..gud nite..

Dadima leaves the room…

 

Maan – geet tumne ab tak khaana kyu nahi khaaya..

Geet does not replies to him…

Maan goes near geet….he takes the plate.. takes one bite and feeds geet..

Geet turns off her face….

Maan eats that bite and then feeds geet…

Geet still doesn't eats…..

 

Maan – geet. Ab kya naaya nataak hai ..

Geet – wah.. main natak kar rahi hoon aur aap kya kar rahey they… aapka naam toh maha dandnaaiyka hona chahiye….

Maan – maha dandnaaiyka..yeh kya hotha hai..

Geet – wo toh mujhe bhi nahi maloom.. main toh yu hi hawa mein thukkey maar rahi thee…

Maan n geet both laughing out loud..

 

Geet – aapne aaj khaana kyu nahi khaaya…aur kya baath hai.. aap mujhse naraaz hai kya…

Maan  -  geet.. bahooth bhook laagi hai.. pehle khaana kha lethey hain phir baath karenge..

Geet and maan both have dinner….

 

Geet – ab bathaaiye kya baath hai..

Maan – wo tumne sasha ke baare mein mujhe kyu nahi baathaya..

Geet – sasha mam ke baare mein….kya nahi baathaya

Maan – ussey mam bullaana band karo..

Geet – meri kuch samajh mein nahi aa raha hai..

Maan  - wo aaj maine mr. chopra kii party ki cd dekhi.. takki hum rajji ko rahul ke baare mein baatha sakey aur maine sasha ke kaley kartooth ko bhi dekha aur aaj tak tumne mujhe is baare mein kyu nahi baathaya…

Geet – accha.. ab samjhi.. aap kyu naraaz hai.. ae lo ithni choti sii baath ke liye ithna muh fullaane ki kya jaroorath hai…

Maan stares at geet..

Geet – accha baathathee hoon… us samay mere paas sasha ke khilaaf koi proof nahi tha jo mein baatha sakthi aapko…

Maan – aur ab kyu nahi baathaya… ab toh baatha sakthi thee na tum mujhe..

Geet – baatha sakthi thee.. lekin kya faayda.. aapne toh us samay meri kitni madaath kiii aur sasha mam ko kuch bhi karne do … mujhe koi pharak nahi padtha hai..

Maan stares at her once again..

Geet – wo wo.. sasha…mam nahi bollonngi..

Maan – geet.. mujhe pharak padtha hai.. samjhi tum….

Geet – maan sach kahu toh.. sasha aur adi aapke dono haath hai…. Sasha kitni acchey tarah se projects aur clients handle karthi hai.... isliye main nahi chahthii thee ki meri wajah se office mein koi tanav ho…isliye aapse nahi kaha….

Maan – mein kal sasha ko resign karne ke liye kahooonga…

Geet – maan… wo baath kitni poorani ho chukki hai.. aur ab kissi ki himmat jo geet maan singh khuraana ko kuch keh saakey…

Maan – lekin..

Geet – sasha ko ab mere se koi dushmaani nahi hai….aap yeh baath bhool jaaiyee…

 

Maan is still lost.. he remembers what sasha has done to geet…

 

Geet – maan….maan….

Maan – haan geet.. tumhe kuch chahiye….

Geet – mujhe neend aa rahi hai…

Maan – haan geet.. so jaathey hai.. raat kaafi ho gaayee hai..

Geet – lekin mujhe yahan nahi sona hai..

Maan – kya,… yahan nahi sona hai….toh kaahaan sona hai.. theek hai doosre room mein chalthey hai

Geet – nahi maan…. Mujhe room mein nahi sona hai…

Maan – kya… room mein nahi sona hai. .iska mathlab tum hall mein sona chahthiii ho….

Geet - maan.. hall bhi toh ek kamra hai na….mujhe toh chath mein sona hai..

Maan – geet.. chath mein.. nahi geet hum chath mein nahi soyenge..

Geet – paatha hai.. hum hosiyarpur mein garmi mein chath mein sothey they.. sab log line se bisthaar beechake… sothey they.. aur yahan lo.. badey badey sehroin mein toh sab ac mein sothey hai.. khoolli hawa ka mazza aap sehri log kya jaane….

Maan – geet.. natak band karo aur so jao chup chap…

Geet – mujhe yahan neend nahi aayegiiii…

 

Maan – hey babaji.. mein ab kya karru..

Geet – maan.. aapne babaji se baath kii…

Maan – nahi toh… wo toh main bus yu hiiii…..

 

Maan leaves and calls nakul.. and asks him to set up a bed in the terrace with net surrounding the bed,,,,,

 

Maan – geet chaley.. . terrace mein sone ke liiye..

maan n geet sleeping on the bed…

 

maan – sach mein geet.. yeh khuley aasman ke neeche sona.. iski baath hi kuch alaag hai…

geet – haan maan… yeh taazi taazi khulli hawa.. ithne saare taare aur yeh chand ki roshni ke neeche toh… sama kuch alaag hi hai….

 

Both of them sleep…..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Posted: 27 March 2011 at 8:39am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sanjh1234

me ask u to take ur own time but itnaaaaaaaa time????LOL
 
sorry yar sanjh.....
 
maaf kar de.. was held up with some work....Cry  Cry 
 
next update jaldi karoongi.. pakka Big smile
 
 

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Posted: 27 March 2011 at 8:47am | IP Logged

kam****!!!!!!!!

tune first post kyu kiya!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!AngryAngryAngry
 
mera spot le liya!!!!AngryAngryAngryAngry
 
abh mai naraaz...no commentsAngryAngryAngryAngry
 
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meraWinkWink maan kaafi intelligent hai!!! planning and all.....me glad that rajji will be saved from that no-good kamina!!Angry
 
adinky are sooo cute...thode zyaada moments bataa unke....
 
geet as usual in her forgive n forget philosophyAngryAngryAngry
 
maan sasha ko mazaa chakana chahiye yaar...some stupid thing..revenge typesLOLLOLLOLLOLLOL
 
like asking her to wear a saree to office everyday...since she has such an imp post n so shud diff dress from rest!! tabh madam ko mazaa aayega...hehe
 
baby moments were cutee......maaneet feeding each other...!!EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
 
bahar sone ka idea baap hai...how about naughty moments...n geet protesting..koi aaa jayega..then maan says..ye tumhe pehle sochna chahiye tha!!WinkWinkWinkWinkWink
 
n someone cones!!!WinkWink
 
AA=== me ignoring!!Dead


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Posted: 27 March 2011 at 8:52am | IP Logged
Originally posted by aashluvsmaan

kam****!!!!!!!!

tune first post kyu kiya!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!AngryAngryAngry
 
mera spot le liya!!!!AngryAngryAngryAngry
 
abh mai naraaz...no commentsAngryAngryAngryAngry
 
arrey yar.. aisa math bol...sorry...Cry  Cry Cry
 
agar mujhe paatha hotha toh.. main sach mein post nahi karthi yar...
 
all of a sudden maine sanjh ka post padha.. isliye comment kiiya...
 
next time se.. nahi karroongi... comment kar ab..

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