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Posted: 14 January 2011 at 12:14am | IP Logged

YES CONTINUE AND PM ME TOO WHEN U NEXT UPDATE ...................THANKS

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wow this is kool. I like it. Plz do cont. Cnt wait 4 mre nok jhok

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Amazing , cont soon , add me to your pm list

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Nice one. loved it.
 
simple ans sweet one

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thank u all ll update the next part asap...

Edited by bharkha - 14 January 2011 at 5:50am
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Part 2: Office moments

 
Maan geet and dadima reach office.

Annie along with the office staffs (tasha, pinky, adi, romeo, manisha and pandeyji) waiting for maan and geet. They wait near the entrance.

Manisha ' Kab mere hot hot boss aayenge'

Rest of them staring at manisha.

Manisha ' intezzar ka phal meetha hotha hai yar'

Annie stares at manisha and is about to say something that maan geet and dadi arrive.

 

Maan asks everyone ' aap sab yahan kya kar rahe hain.

Annie ' woh bhai hum app logo ka hi intezzar kar rahe they

 
Maan and geet give astonishing looks and dadi smiling..

 

Romeo to annie ' bolo na hum sab yahan par kyun khade hain.

Annie ' woh bhai.. aapki toh shaadi ho gayi hain. Sab rasme acche se ho gaye. Sirf ek hi baaki hain aur hum sab uske liye yahan aap logo ka intezzar kar rahe they. Woh bhai ' aapki aur geet ki pyaar ki shuruvath toh office se hi hui thee na islilye hum yahan par darwaza rokne ka rasm nibhayenge. Aapke liye toh aapka office hi mandir hain na.. kyun geet sahi kaha na maine

 Geet nods her head in reply.

Annie- toh bhai humari sharth poori kijiye aur aap aur geet ander aa sakte hain..

 Maan ' sharth woh bhi maan singh khurana ke saath..

Geet- annie sahi keh rahi hain' aur apni akad apne paas rakhiye

 Dadi moves towards the other side and joins annie and the rest.

Maan ' ab mujhe samajh mein aaya aapko office aane ki itni jaldi kyun thee aur aap bhi annie ke saath dadi.

 Dadi ' ye toh rasm hai betey.. behen ka poora haq hotha hai. Aur sabhi office staff toh geet ke taraf se hain na toh aapko toh isko nibana hi padega.

 Maan ' toh phir theek hain. Kya chahthey hain aap sab

Annie ' hum sabne aapki shaadi mein joorro shorro se kam kiye aur iskeliye hum sab chahthey hain ki aap hum sabhiko bahar le jaaye.. mera mathlab hain ghoomane ya kahiye picnic type. Aapko aur geet ko bhi chalna padega humare saath.

 Geet ' yeh bada accha idea hain annie.

Maan stares at geet.

Geet ' aapko ghoorne ke alawa aur bhi kuch aatha hain. Akdu ke akdu hi rahenge'aur hum yahan kab thak khade rahenge. Aapke paas koi aur chara bhi nahi hain. Isliye haan kar dijiye..

 Maan ' yeh ladki mujhe sochne ka mauka bhi nahi dethi. Sach main pagal ho jaaonga (murmurs to himself)

 Geet ' aapne kya kaha

Maan ' woh kuch nahi..

 Maan  - theek hain. Mujhe manzoor hain.

 Everybody so happy. Maan sir ithni jaldi maan gaye. But den maan tells Lekin meri bhi ek sharth hain.

 Romeo ' wahi toh ithni jaldi kahan maanne wale they.. sharth rakdi na.

Annie ' kaisi sharth bhai

Maan ' Jagah main decide karoonga. Manjoor hai toh bolo.

Annie ' (murmurs to herself) soch math annie,  bhai ithni muskil se mane haiin' den says haan theek hain theek hain.

Maan ' toh phir yeh weekend mera mathlab hain kal aur parsu.

 Everybody so happy'

  Maan n geet inside maan s cabin.

Geet ' mujhe accha laga aaj aapne sabki baath manli.

Maan ' tumhari khushi mein hi meri khushi hain.

Geet ' aaa haaa haaaaaaaaa haaa' tumhari khushi mein hi meri khushi hain. Agar ithna hi tha toh yeh sharth kyun rakhi

Maan ' woh main haan woh geet ithni bhi dheel nahi deni chahiye na kii samne waale khadre karna chod de..

Geet ' haan yeh baath toh aapne theek kahi.

Maan ' pehli baar tum mujhse sehmeth ho..

Geet- kya'pehli baar.. yaad karrou'. Main aapse kithni baar sehmath thee

Maan ' haan haan yaad karro toh main bhi dekhu

Geet ' woh woh woh'. Haan yaad aaya'. Maine toh kai baar aapki baath maani

Maan ' wahi toh main bhi keh raha hoon mujhe yaad karao

Geet ' main apne deemag pe zor nahi de sakthi'aur haan aap hi hamesha jhagda karne ki talaash mein rehte hain.. maine aapki baath kitni baar maani,  chahe majboori mein ya chahe zor jabardasti main (thinks how maan forces her to do work and also he takes her to hospital wen she felt dizzy )

 Maan says geeeeeet... that time annie and dadi enter the cabin.

 Dadi ' maan betey main aap dono se kuch baath karne aaye thee

Maan ' haan dadi boliye.

Annie ' woh bhai aap logo ne honeymoon ke bare mein kya socha hain

Maan stares at geet and geet feels shy.

Dadi ' kaun hi jagah jaana chahoge

Annie ' bhai swizterland ya phir hongkong..

Maan ' jaise geet chahegi ( tries being guddy guddy hubby)

Geet- main kya kahu' woh annie maan ne wada kiya hain na picnic pe jaane ka toh kyun na hum camping par jaaye'

Annie and dadima ' kya camping..

 Geet ' woh dadi maan toh hamesha se hi camping karte aa rahe hain. Kyun na isi bahane hum bhi wahaan jaaye..

Annie ' geet hum yaahan par honeymoon ki baath kar rahe hain aur tum camping ka khayal lekar baithi ho.

Geet ' agar sach kahu toh mujhe maan ke saath camping ke liye jaana hain. Wahi jagah jahan woh akele mein rehna pasand karte they..

 Maan adores her' he likes her simplicity..

hey guys tell me if u like it or not.. and also let me know shud i continue...

Edited by bharkha - 14 January 2011 at 6:56am

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