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FF : Post wedding part 19 updtd pg 94 last part (Page 50)

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@hima dii - as of now me not able to like ur post.. limit crossed.. ll click later.. thanks hima dii.. hope i conti soon
 
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thanks shah, sharaanya, perfect yarav, nahtani, aash...skjgmd and shikha thank u guys...

 

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Posted: 28 February 2011 at 3:08am | IP Logged
Originally posted by abina03

when you are updating dear?
 
sorry abina for late commenting... was just chkd out yar..
 
ll update in a while...
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Posted: 28 February 2011 at 3:22am | IP Logged

Thank u all for commenting. Luvd reading ur comments... helps me to write further...Sorry for delay in updating my next part....

 
Part ' 11:

(previous part ' maan n geet were in office' maan and pinky together. adi and geet together'maan calls rajji and speaks !!!!!)

 

Maan: geet'.. mere khayaal se tumhe ab ghar jaana chahiye.. thoda aaram karlo'aur haan aaj shyam ko kuch bhadiya sa dinner  banana' mera mathlab Punjabi khana..

Geet: kya'punjabi khana' aapko toh continental pasand hai na.. aur ab Punjabi khana..

she touches maan s forehead and checks if things are fine with him'

Maan: yeh tum kya kar rahi ho..

Geet: dekh rahi hoon kii aapki tabiyeth theek hai ki nahi'aapne Punjabi khaana jo banaane ke liye kaha hai

Maan: geet' tum toh baath aisey kar rahi ho jaise aaj tak maine Punjabi khaana khaaya hi nahi hai'. Geet ab mujhe bahooth kam hai.. tum ghar jaake aaram karo'

Geet bids gud bye and leaves'

 

Pinky is happy with maan s idea of ignoring adi'

Adi purposely speaks to tasha wen he sees pinky coming towards them.

 

Adi: tasha' maine jo tumhe kam diya woh tumne poora kiya na..

Tasha: haan adi.. is file mein sab hain'

Adi: tasha'thanks.. aaj tumhari wajah se main maan sir se daat khaane mein baj gaaya'

Adi: pinky'

Pinky: woh' main bus abhi aayee.. mujhe romeo se kuch kam hain..

 

Adi is shocked and confused..

 

Maan peeps from his cabin and shows thumps up to pinky'.

 

Adi doesn't knows how to react.. he decides to speak to geet regarding this'

 

Geet prepares dinner..as said by maan.. Punjabi khaana..'.

She goes to her room and gets dressed' she wears saree''.

 

Meanwhile maan arrives'.he goes to his room'

Maan adoring geet' geet looks stunning as usual'..

 

Geet ' aap aa gaaye..

Maan ' haan geet' mere kapadey nikal do.. main abhi fresh ho kar aaya'

Maan leaves to freshen up himself and he comes..

Maan ' geet ye tumhe kya nikaala'

Geet ' aur kya aapka tracks..

Maan ' mujhe mere formals chahiye..shirt pant nikaal do geet..

Geet ' kyun.. aapko kahi bahaar jaana hai'

Maan ' woh' geet'tum sawaal bahoooth poochthi ho..mujhe bahoooth bhook laagi hai.. ek kam karo.. tum khaaney ki taiyaari karo' dadi aur annie ko bhi bulla lo..

Geet is surprised by maan s behavior.. she decides to ask dadima'..

Geet comes downstairs and finds adi and pinky'

Geet: adi sir, pinky.. yahan is waqth..

Pinky: woh.. maan jiju ne humhe bulaaya hai'.

Geet: maan bhi na.. office ka kam ab ghar pe leke aa gaaye aur bechaare adi sir aur pinky'unka jeena haaram kar rahe hain'..

Geet: maan maan maan'

 

Geet calling maan' maan dadima and annie come downstairs..

Dadima: kya hua geet betey.. ab maan ne kya kiya..

Geet: dekhiye na dadima.. ek toh ithni late se aaye aur upar se bechaare adi sir aur pinky ko bula liiye.. office ka kam office mein hi karna chahiye na..

Dadima: maan betey aap aisa kyun karthey hain..

Adi sir: woh.. dadima..

Geet: adi sir.. pinky.. aaj aap log kuch nahi bolenge' aaj toh jawaab maan denge'

Dadima: haan maan betey.. toh raat ke is waqth adi aur pinky ko ghar bulaane ka mathlab kya hai,'

Maan: woh.. dadima' geet'

 

Suddenly.. rajji  enters the house'.

Rajji: geet didi'

 

All of them looking towards rajji..

Geet: rajji..

She goes and hugs rajji.. tum yahan'kaise..

 

Rajji: didi.. aapko nahi paatha.. maan jiju ne mujhe yahan bulaaya hai'

Geet is surprised' but still her questions are not answered.. how did maan find about rajji. .where did he meet her'

 

Rajji answers her questions.. she tells her about dargah where she met maan'

Geet remembers that maan was late wen he went to buy prasadh'

 

Maan: ab bolo' geet.. dadima ke saath milke meri taang kichaayee karne mein tumhe bada mazza aatha hai na'

Geet: wo..wo'. khaana taiyaar hai'.chalo pehle khaana kha lethey hai,'.gaapey shaapey toh hothey hi rahenge'.

 

Geet serves dinner for everyone.. pinky and rajji help her'

Geet finding pinky very happy'.

Geet: pinky.. aaj toh tum bahooth khush dikhaayee de rahi ho..

Pinky:khush kaise na hoon'woh.. maan jiju ne'(suddenly she becomes quiet)

Geet: maan ne kya'.

Pinky: kuch nahi geet'..

Geet: pinky' tum mujhse kya chippaa rahi ho..

Pinky: wo.. wo' geet.. maan sir ne mujhse hi toh number liya tha rajji ka.. takki tum surprise ho jao'

Geet: aaccha'. Toh iska mathlab tumhe yeh baath paatha thee'aur tumne maan ka side liiiiiya'

Pinky: smiling'.

 

Everybody has their dinner'Geet notices adi..she finds him worried'.decides to speak to him..

 

Geet: adi sir.. aapko kya hua'koi baath hai kya'

Adi: haan geet' wo.. pinky'.pehle jab mein usse ignore kar raha tha..tab usse jalan ho rahi thee aur ab usse kuch bhi asar nahi ho raha hai'.

Geet: (surprised) aisa kya hua jo pinky ke tevar hi badal gaaye'.aur wo toh aaj kuch jyaada hi khush nazzar aa rahi'

Adi: wahi toh' mujhe kuch samajh mein nahi aa raha hai geet' waise ye jealousy waala idea toh sirf tumhe aur mujhe paatha hai'lekin maan sir se milne ke baad piny kuch badli badli dikhaayee diii'

Geet: (she understands now).. wo.. adi sir.. yeh baath toh maine maan ko bhi baathaayee thee..

Adi: iska mathlab maan sir ne kaahii ye baath pinky ko'''.

Geet: nahi adi sir.. maan aisey'(she suspects him)

Adi : aaj toh maan sir ne pinky ko apne cabin mein bhi bulaaya..aur uske baath se pinky ke tevar badal gaaye'

Geet: pinky ne mujhe yeh baaath baathaayee' ki usne hi maan ko rajji ka number diya'

Adi: lekin pinky aur maan sir kaafi der se baath kar rahe they aur uske baad se pinky ke tevar badal gaaye'aur usse mere tasha se baath karne se koi jalan nahi ho rahi thee.. ulta usne kaha ki usse romeo se milna hai'aur mujhe jalan hone lag gaayee..

Geet: phir toh jaroor yeh maan ka kam hai'

 

Geet then calls pinky'.

Geet: pinky' kahhi tum mujhse kuch chuppa toh nahi rahhhiii

Pinky: mein geet.. nahi toh' mujhe maan jiju se kuch kam hain' main abhi aayee..

 

Geet is assured now.. that maan n pinky have joined their hands together'

Geet assures adi that she ll take care of it.. and asks him to behave normally..

Geet and rajji spend so much time together'.

 

Geet: aur ghar pe sab kaise hai'. Us din dargah mein tum mujhse kyu nahi milli'

Rajji: wo.. maan jiju ne kaha bhi tha mujhse.. ki geet se milti chalo.. par maine hi maine kar diiya'.. ghar jo jaldi jaana tha..\

Geet: lekin tum ek nazar mujhse milke bhi toh jaa sakthi thee na..ithni jaldi bhi kya thee'

Rajji: geet'.socha tha ki tito ko bhi saath leke aaongi aur hum dono saath mein tumse milenge'

Geet: rajji koi aur baath toh nahi hai' kahi tum dargah mein kissi aur se toh milne nahi aayee''

Rajji: tumhe kaise paatha'.

Geet: mathlab'. Tum kehna kya chahthi ho..

 

Rajji then tells the entire story to geet' that she came to dargah to meet rahul' and she was worried after she saw maan jiju.. and thats the reason why she fled away so soon'.

Geet shocked to hear this..

She adivses rajji'.. but never reveals the truth regarding rahul.. she reminds rajji about her grandparents and about dev.. what he did to her....she tells her that before taking any step ahead.. she needs to be very careful'.she says her that.. she ll enquire about rahul and ll let her know'

Rajji is happy to hear this'

Everybody leaves'..

 

Maan n geet in their room'..

geet lost in her thoughts'maan comes close to her and hugs from behind..

geet reciprocates his hug.. she turns around and hugs him tightly'

maan is surprised'and asks..

 

maan ' geet.. kya hua

geet slowly leaves him'.

Geet ' aaj aapne meri zindagii mein khushion ki char chand laaga dii..

Maan ' sorry geet' wo dargah waali baath mein tumhe baatha nahi saaka

Geet ' mujhe paatha hai aapne mujhse yeh baath kyu chupaaayee kyunki aap mera dil nahi todna chahthey they'isliye..par mujhe is baath ki khushi hai ki aapne aaj rajji ko ghar bulaaaya aur behaath khoobsurat sa toufa diya.. thanks maan'

Maan ' meri mishti ke liye kuch bhi'

 

Maan notices that geet is still worried'

Maan ' tumhe aur kuch kehna hai

Geet ' haan.. aaj maine raaji se baath kii

Geet tells maan the entire story about rahul and rajji'

 

Geet ' ab hum kya karenge maan'.ek baar ke liye maine toh baath sambhal lii..par ab kya'

Maan ' tumhe is baare mein chintha karne ki koi jarrorath nahi hai' aur rajji bahooth samajhdar hai.. hum dono usse samjha lenge'

Geet is happy now as she told about rajji and rahul to maan'

 

Maan working on his laptop and Geet takes out the blanket for maan n for herself'she remembers the surprise stuff.. adi pinky and rajji'. Suddenly wen thought of adi strikes.. she remembers that maan aur pinky ek saath'

 

Geet 'maan' aapko rajji ka number kaise milla'

Maan ' geet.. yeh sawaal achanak..

Geet- kyu.. main pooch nahi sakti kya..

Maan ' wo.. haan'maine pinky se liya'..

Geet ' pinky'''''''.aur haan aaj aapne pinky ko apne cabin mein bulaaya'aur der saari baathey kii'

Maan ' ye sab tumhe kisne baathaayaa'..

Geet ' pinky ne'''aur saath mein usne aur bhi kuch kaha'.

Maan ' geet.. me aur pinky kam ki baathein kar rahey they'.office mein deroin kam hotha hai..

Geet ' maine kab manna kiya ki office mein kam nahi hotha hai'. Lekin maine toh aapko pehle kabhi pinky se office ke baare mein ghanto baath karthey huye nahi suna'

Maan ' tum kehna kya chahthi ho'

Geet ' jyaada bholey banney ki koshish math kijiye'mujhe pinky ne sab baatha diya hai..

Maan ' pinky'.. uski khair nahi'

Geet ' aapne pinky ko kyu baathaya ki adi sir yeh sab jhan mooch ke kar rahe hain'

Maan ' maine aisa kuch nahi kaha'

Geet ' maan.. ab natak karne ka koi faayda nahi hai'main keh rahi hoon na mujhe sab paatha hai'

Maan ' tum aur adi bechaari pinky ko kab se thang kar rahe they'aur kya kabhi adi ne pinky se yeh baath kahi hai ki wo ussey pyaar kartha hai'. Nahi na..agar maine pinky ka saath diya toh kya gaalaaath kiya'

Lekin tumne kya kiiya aaj toh tumne sach mein dadima ko bulla liya' wo toh accha hua ki adi aur pinky dinner pe aaye they'varna tumne toh pooora plan bana rakha tha' bada mazza aatha hai tumhe'''

 

Geet ' wo' mein change karke aathi hoon'

Maan ' mere sawaal ka jawaab dethi jao' varna''

Geet ' phir dhamki'

Maan ' yeh toh maine tumse hi sikha hai.. har baar jo tum mujhe dadima ki dhamki dethi rehthi ho'

Geet ' wo' I m sorry'.

Maan ' sorry se kam nahi chalega''

Geet ' theek hai phir mein sorry wapaas lethi hoon aur yeh baath dadima ko baathathee hoon ki aapko sorry bolne ke baath bhi aapne mujhe maaf nahi kiiya..

Maan ' kya !!!!!!!!!......

Geet- haan'

Geet leaves to the restroom' but maan intervenes her' holds her hand'

 

Guys let me know if u liked it or not..comments and criticism are always welcome... 



Edited by bharkha - 28 February 2011 at 3:23am

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Varsha  Hug.......Thank u for the lovely update and PM......it was awesome......loved the way Maan surprised Geet.......so happy she met Raji.....worried what this Rahul is upto.......plz continue.....TC...Ratna  Smile






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